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Thread: Exposure ( honest feed)

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    Lightbulb Exposure ( honest feed)

    No other has done what i've done in my years of droppin' this
    But my main frame was to remain sane, dont fear apocaylpse
    Can't see clear, the dominance in the people have passed on
    Man's now penetrated with vile shit like its Evil with strap-ons
    While praying on myself, to make it thru fakeness and all that
    There's some points where humanity'll be safe if we fall back
    But every race i've known is 2 proud to let their guards down
    But even Pride's a sin, so we could all just forget its hard, now
    Theres not a doubt, that theres hypocrisy within a mindstate
    But contradictions are only based if it'll cringe the crime rates
    No other person really lives it, cus it all depends on wise takes
    On how the human race is movin' inside percents of fine space
    Could there be a reason to why establishment is lost in debt
    When all the land you've owned is adequate to start respect
    Seems as if money makes us all revolt in every constant step
    When everything we say is charged back as a cost of death

    Exposure, and pain, its the same example
    Of explainin' babble, that'll change a battle
    No one - Really cares on the messes God has left
    But now - Even our own soul's at loss of breath

    Stop this mess, no one will ever Pay-Mind to Listen
    THe Same Kind of bitches that Hate Eyes with vision
    Its Plain, I'm a glitch, With the mind of a saint
    And Life Lived can't be spelled without DIE in its name

    They tell us to pay forward, ignore pain to the upmost
    Insane torture, Gamblin' life is now made to be up close
    Extinction is long over due, but no one's waitin' demise
    Even some elders are tired, and too damn lazy to die
    Its crazy, but life has no limits, and some surpasses all
    When caskets fall, it opens, all you see is cash from ya'll
    Some acid vaults, and capsules to deteriorate migraines
    Hidden cameras in pills prescripted to investigate my pains
    It's been told, that the world will soon lose its Last Esteem
    When a man was killed in corruption just for Having Dreams
    Fast, it seems, but even some others try to go in a rush
    A man shot in public, and still no one knows who it was
    Crazy ain't it? How it all gathers up in the tapes, to view it
    when the nation gets hit, it never reveals scrapes n bruises
    My aim is useless, cause no one will ever notice a teenage
    Thinkin' I'm just a cliche' of a person, "this is only a replay"

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    yo people are going to shit if u dont put a couple links in here....lol. I'm from BOSTON too bro...and I got a boy named Ghost who is from here as well lol....but I must say this shit was tight. Nice multis...inners...and sound manipulation that only a real rapper could understand. The flow was flawless. This is the second good piece i have read today on this site..maybe its making a turn around lol. If you could go read my shit I think you'd like it. drop some feed too if ya would. stay up and keep writing dog...this shit is hot.
    They say this kids got skills...you dont know what the half is....

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    Could there be a reason to why establishment is lost in debt
    When all the land you've owned is adequate to start respect
    Seems as if money makes us all revolt in every constant step
    When everything we say is charged back as a cost of death

    nice...deep as well

    overall flow was tite.. i think its the 1st time i seen u writing in a format like this....
    n u did it very well.. wording was on point.. rhymes was mostly nicee
    lots of flow variations as well as the song goes on .. giving it true musical qualities


    nice ending

    dope
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    RiSE............
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    ight so this was okay.

    first verse- not best but enjoyable,noce flow and i just liked it

    second verse- nice,got better i liked it,good vocab and finish was tight.

    overall i would give ya 8/10

    keep up check my om thnx

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    dawg the joint was hot you on some ill deep shit i feelin you plus you reppin mass you in tha bean im from the city of springfield im field rep all day yahmean but bump that all in all that was an ill drop keep that shit pumpin ~1~

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    UPPin..............
    MOre feeds...........thanx for the feeds

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    UPPin.............leave linxs ... i'll chekc 'em

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    hot shit b i like this thats nice good multis and inners in that shit u dope boi ill give that to ya
    The Next Level
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    aight this peice was good, it had flow to it and some nice vocab to go along wit dat
    nice drop 7.5/10

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    its was a good piece man and i think u can write betta then diz...and i give that shit 8/10 man and i wish to c ya in my posting

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    real good drop by you ghost nice rhyme scheme and creativity you need to work on more metas though it would have made the piece stand out a little more in my opinion but you were to a point were you have gotten better during the last verse but it was an okay drop keep it up

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    Word^..........good looks

    UPPin......drop links

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