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Thread: RB Emo Life- Knife Point and Soulful Marvin

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    RB Emo Life- Knife Point and Soulful Marvin

    KNIFE POINT

    came to RB, actin' hard, callin people herbs
    wanted to be like lay, spit, & that Feeble nerd..
    Those were my idols, from LLL playoffs to the finals
    *dreams*
    .. one day I'll tell my grandkids how I won the title
    .
    .
    .
    the day was cloudy, I felt gay and pouty
    excited to see what feeble had to say about me
    My heart was broken, he said I was horrible @ text
    cryin, "will I ever be able to say that I rose to a vet?"
    So I was turned down by textcess. Had to find a vet with some clout
    on that day my focus shifted to getting respect from Bounce
    Senseless vocab, astronomical comical photosomical outrageous flows man
    I was on a roll, cut myself for havin no HoF noms I was so mad
    Now I'm a champion emo, cuttin' while writin, fuck the ones that hate me
    THANK YOU RB.. for SS, OM, and the herbz I can make fun of daily


    NOW FOR MARVIN~~

    i beleive in text, graphics and topicals, i think they're raw man
    so i clicked www.rapbattles.com, that's the reason i got broadband
    i signed up with a name, tryna find me some fame
    dreaming that one day they'll invite me like Lay
    used to love typing, always tried posting the funny shits
    then take screenshots and brag to the whole of my buddy list
    the the day came, i was actually battling people
    but out of all the textcees, it sucks ass that it had to be feeble
    so i entered the chatrooms in despair tryna find me a ghost
    then i made sure it looked like me before i finally post
    never knew it would come but, the evil bastards exposed me
    i was so scared i might get banned by an admin like Opey
    but i survived, kept battling thinkin "this hobby's my favorite"
    forgot all about the convo that Celestial copied and pasted
    now i'm, sitting here, my text dreams slaughtered and ripped
    then i finally concludes i really just cant be bothered with this

    ~~~redemption is mine~~~

    wounds of the devil, scars on the skin of my flesh
    death to children of satan who kept rippin my text
    metaphors inside my similes, i get a whoring quite consistently
    heart torn inside it's killin me, i strike the force divine virginity
    so i might just quit, now thinking "i can't fight this shit"
    figured that since life's a bitch, i might as well just slice my wrist
    knife through the skin fightin the pythons within
    fuck dreams of a Camarac collab, i'll never be rhyming with him
    as the blood ran down my wrist, felt no arouse, just stiff
    surrounded, kissed by the cloud of bliss, jumping off a mountain cliff

    ~RB Emo'z '06 and forever
    Last edited by Sobe; March 25th, 2006 at 08:07 PM
    She said I could sleep on the couch
    By 2 am, I was diggin her out

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    She said I could sleep on the couch
    By 2 am, I was diggin her out

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    lol this is sum funny shit..... but seriously nice piece i liked all 4 verses but the second was more entertaining.... this is a perfect example of how if you dont respect yourself no one will respect you ya feel me... lookin for approval of rival texteez is nuffin fuck them u jus doin u ya mean.... str8 verse vocab was tight wordplay and metz were iigh but overall it was a good verse nuffin too negative about it
    scytsophrenia

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    ROflmdafaoafo thanks for the feed. upping.

    ~White Mahogany~xXmarvvXx

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    marvin - dope. fine point - you suck.
    Been a real one.

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    man, I'm really tryna elevate. Thanks a lot asshole, now I have to go realease my pain from the veins. I hope you burn in the wrath of satan.
    She said I could sleep on the couch
    By 2 am, I was diggin her out

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    lmfoaoffaoafo


    man i feel like im riding the waves of eternal happiness towards textceedom.

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    That is very poetic
    She said I could sleep on the couch
    By 2 am, I was diggin her out

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    lmfao that was kinda enjoyable

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    rofl dope ..never thought of a piece like this. good writing mixed with sarcasm ..now you guys have the right to stop cuttin' and show this to all those mods and such and say ..FUCK YOU lol. maybe you'll get banned! oh NO! ..lol funny stuff

    pz.

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    that shit is why i regestered on online battles man.
    the skills, the wit, i almost am a fan.
    after readin that now i hav a plan.
    Im ur next challenger ur first Australian.

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    doep shit. Marv outshined it tho. switch to audio foo.

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    dope shit dude i like u betta put in in cd and if ya need a beat i may give u some

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    Fine point- your verses was alright man....wasnt really feelin it too much..rhymes were descent...flow was alright...smooth in places but choppy in sum....complexity was not here and creativity also wasnt here..

    Marv.- you showed sum great skill in your verses..great rhymes..complexity was alright...flow was very smooth throughout..i saw sum creativity and overall your verse was much better than fine's

    this was a good read overall...kinda different....kinda enjoyable...

    fine point- keep elevating
    Marv- keep it up

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    upping for more feed.

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