ey this is a lil suicide note i did in a battle but i was thinkin its a piece i would like feedback on.... hit it up
Dear Loved Ones,
This is my letter to let you all know
How far I’m actually willing to go
Everyday my life is becoming exceedingly hard
Disregard to discard feelings that leave me permanently scarred.
I’m terrified to exhale but I’m more afraid to inhale
Becoming derailed by lives open trails
I tried to withstand and show love to myself
Deeper feelings on the inside blinded by humility and stealth
misery is my only wound cuts are wide filled with gloom
Tragedy struck and left me stranded the heavens granted I was doomed
What used to formulate laughter now intrigued anger
Destruction assimilation first hand now enticed danger
The pits of hell are beckoning screaming come to me
This pain and devastation no happy moments all I know is misery.
The feeling of its gentle grasp composes a heavenly vibe
Depression deeply defying the laws of gravity gives a certain rise
I try to lope away from it but my legs wouldn’t progress
Conflicted with spiritual poverty my soul is overstressed
Tolerance until my soul becomes overburdened mediocre feeble minded discretions.
Oblivious concerns minor rejection to any thought of murder or self destruction on my minds thought collection
So I die daily as I try to survive
Depression has taken over my soul can’t be revived
I started with a dream but it became hope
I started with a knife and ended with this rope.