Jericho (3-0) Vs. Brixton (3-1)

[Mystery~Murdera]

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16.

[B.I.Detained.]

Yup.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...68#post4343968
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...78#post4344078

[B.I.Detained.]

Leave a bitch in stitches, you'll never go from rags to riches.. coz kid
I'll take your poor background - & smash your fucking face off it.
Placing a killer deposit.. I'm white n the hottest, battling without a hitch
Call me cracka all you like - it just means I'm whipping your ass, bitch.
I come with it, and what gives Brix shit loads of satisfaction -
We all know A Jeri's only ever been good at introducing the main attraction.
A love & lust for rap is confusing, so after Brix's last attack
Your soul is brimming with music.. now your ribs are my CD wrack.
Jeri's on the border of playoffs, now it hurts that he can't hide
First time you've been on the outskirts -
cuz you normally wear them inside!
Brix is your biggest prize, and fo'real I'm fucking sick of your babble
I found Jeri's achilles heel..& stuffed it right next to his Adam's apple.
The mag' says you've improved, but the league's still stuck on the fence
MM says you used to suck.. but he was wrong to put it in a past tense.
Its been a sad week for music - more deaths for the fans to deal with
but the fact is.. Jericho'll give up quicker than Proof's killer did.

Biiiiitch!

[Aargh Kelly]

this dude is hopeless, so whack i cant explain it
im no stranger to dopeness and your far from getting acquainted
i wont lie, your verse was just straigh up pure rubbish,
and it shows brix is a bitch on the inside,
but more of a pussy in public
i picture sand, water, damn i can even feel the heat
your throwing blows, that remind me of the breeze on the beach
my flow you cant test bitch, im too dope for you to mess with
knock em so far down the ranks..his next battle will be in infos and extras
smack em to the floor, who can predict this dude to win
i've never felt stupid before and damn dawg you got some smooth skin
i'd have bodies fallin fast your style is fuckin trash
brix came with a flow so choppy he could instruct his own karate class
they say Asians eat Dogs, then let peeps bear witness dude
Cuz if i were this Bitch, i'd be scared shitless too
wow how this lame sucks, its pretty much over whore
i finally stepped my game up, and left footprints all over yours

[Vaskez]

Sorry, wasn't feelin too much of ya verse Brix, didn't like the style you came with this week, was better against Phlymo. I mean it wasn't wack, just a load of mediocre lines, seemed a bit lazy. A Jeri line was kinda funny.

From Jericho I liked the infos & extras line, lol, felt stupid, footprints lines were pretty coo and choppy line was aight

v/Jericho

[DaTrusHurtz]

Leave a bitch in stitches, you'll never go from rags to riches.. coz kid
I'll take your poor background - & smash your fucking face off it.
alright opener
Placing a killer deposit.. I'm white n the hottest, battling without a hitch
Call me cracka all you like - it just means I'm whipping your ass, bitch.
nah, seen similar lines
I come with it, and what gives Brix shit loads of satisfaction -
We all know A Jeri's only ever been good at introducing the main attraction.
dope nameplay
A love & lust for rap is confusing, so after Brix's last attack
Your soul is brimming with music.. now your ribs are my CD wrack.
eh, kinda stupid concept
Jeri's on the border of playoffs, now it hurts that he can't hide
First time you've been on the outskirts -
cuz you normally wear them inside!
thought this was pretty cool
Brix is your biggest prize, and fo'real I'm fucking sick of your babble
I found Jeri's achilles heel..& stuffed it right next to his Adam's apple.
pretty played
The mag' says you've improved, but the league's still stuck on the fence
MM says you used to suck.. but he was wrong to put it in a past tense.
coulda been good with some wit to it, too basic
Its been a sad week for music - more deaths for the fans to deal with
but the fact is.. Jericho'll give up quicker than Proof's killer did.
if ya gonna use a proof line, make it more original

vs.

this dude is hopeless, so whack i cant explain it
im no stranger to dopeness and your far from getting acquainted
pretty nice
i wont lie, your verse was just straigh up pure rubbish,
and it shows brix is a bitch on the inside,
but more of a pussy in public
idea is a bit played but well executed
i picture sand, water, damn i can even feel the heat
your throwing blows, that remind me of the breeze on the beach
good hit
my flow you cant test bitch, im too dope for you to mess with
knock em so far down the ranks..his next battle will be in infos and extras
simple idea but not bad
smack em to the floor, who can predict this dude to win
i've never felt stupid before and damn dawg you got some smooth skin
haha, nice
i'd have bodies fallin fast your style is fuckin trash
brix came with a flow so choppy he could instruct his own karate class
not bad
they say Asians eat Dogs, then let peeps bear witness dude
Cuz if i were this Bitch, i'd be scared shitless too
I don't get it?
wow how this lame sucks, its pretty much over whore
i finally stepped my game up, and left footprints all over yours
solid closer

Brix, wasn't feeling too much from your verse. Jeri line was cool, outskirts was okay, the rest was pretty average. Tag, after reading that you improved I decided to see for myself n' holy shit you've gotten mad better. You got this new Spit style attitude to your writing that makes you come across a lot harder. Other than the bar I didn't get, I liked pretty much your entire verse. Really nice shit.

Vote - Jericho

[phlymo]

I come with it, and what gives Brix shit loads of satisfaction -
We all know A Jeri's only ever been good at introducing the main attraction.
Jeri's on the border of playoffs, now it hurts that he can't hide
First time you've been on the outskirts -
cuz you normally wear them inside!

vs

my flow you cant test bitch, im too dope for you to mess with
knock em so far down the ranks..his next battle will be in infos and extras
smack em to the floor, who can predict this dude to win
i've never felt stupid before and damn dawg you got some smooth skin
i'd have bodies fallin fast your style is fuckin trash
brix came with a flow so choppy he could instruct his own karate class


jericho got it, brix you changed your style up to some violent stuff, a bit like i did against you, but your old style was way doper, and you got beat as a result mate. the verse wasn't that bad or anything i just expected more. jericho i thought you started shaky but the section i quoted was dope, infos and extras was real cool.

[Mystery~Murdera]

^^^ agrees with him... Brix what happened here?
that was pretty bad man. You've came so much
better than this.

Jericho in the mag I mentioned you as a most
improved... you're making a nice run at it.

v/ jericho

[Brown.]

i got nothing to quote from Brix man wtf, that's not you


i liked tag's opener, closer, and the info's and extras line

this was one sided yo. but cool read nonetheless.

v/ Jericho.

[Born To Kill]

Damn, Jericho...

You fucked him up.

Alas, Brix...it wasn't your week.

Vote: Jericho

[$pitacular]

Placing a killer deposit.. I'm white n the hottest, battling without a hitch
Call me cracka all you like - it just means I'm whipping your ass, bitch.
A love & lust for rap is confusing, so after Brix's last attack
Your soul is brimming with music.. now your ribs are my CD wrack.
dope..
Brix is your biggest prize, and fo'real I'm fucking sick of your babble
I found Jeri's achilles heel..& stuffed it right next to his Adam's apple.
even doper
The mag' says you've improved, but the league's still stuck on the fence
MM says you used to suck.. but he was wrong to put it in a past tense.

vs

this dude is hopeless, so whack i cant explain it
im no stranger to dopeness and your far from getting acquainted
nice
my flow you cant test bitch, im too dope for you to mess with
knock em so far down the ranks..his next battle will be in infos and extras
dopest punch I've seen this week..
smack em to the floor, who can predict this dude to win
i've never felt stupid before and damn dawg you got some smooth skin
i'd have bodies fallin fast your style is fuckin trash
brix came with a flow so choppy he could instruct his own karate class
lmao
they say Asians eat Dogs, then let peeps bear witness dude
Cuz if i were this Bitch, i'd be scared shitless too
mean as FUCK
wow how this lame sucks, its pretty much over whore
i finally stepped my game up, and left footprints all over yours

nice battle fellas... both came hard.. Jericho jus a lil harder..

v/Jericho

Brix you're steppin it up man... don't stop now cuz dog you're gettin alot better

oh n' - you coulda made this punch MUCH harder if you just went:

The mag' says you've improved, but the league's still stuck on the fence
MM says you used to suck, but he was wrong.... to put it in a past tense.

[Chrit.]

Brix... definately a switch up from ur normal verses. Not bad... but you need some fine tuning for those type of punches

Jericho... pretty good... the info and extras line was nice. The felt stupid is kinda played but decent flip of it.

v/ Jericho

[B.I.Detained.]

Yup..
Chrit got it spot on. I tried a few violent punches in there, but I'm still struggling on the wording. Still early in the league so I got time to find my feet. Spit', man.. you just made that punch a whole lot fucking better. G'battle Jericho. Close this up MM.

[Automatic.]

Brix is your biggest prize, and fo'real I'm fucking sick of your babble
I found Jeri's achilles heel..& stuffed it right next to his Adam's apple.

vs.

this dude is hopeless, so whack i cant explain it
im no stranger to dopeness and your far from getting acquainted
my flow you cant test bitch, im too dope for you to mess with
knock em so far down the ranks..his next battle will be in infos and extras
^ lmao
wow how this lame sucks, its pretty much over whore
i finally stepped my game up, and left footprints all over yours

Jericho got this shit pretty easily. Infos and extra line was dope as fuck, worded nicely too. Dope verse man. Brix, u didn't come with much here. But ya, Jericho takes this battle. Good shit.

v/ Jericho