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Thread: Dusk Ft. Kronik Boom,... A Religous Debate

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    Dusk Ft. Kronik Boom,... A Religous Debate

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    My thoughts often collide only leaving me to feel empty inside
    Prayers not answered, nights alone crying leave God being denied
    I mean I tried, but he was never there never answering my prayers
    I thought he’d feel a little sympathetic since no one else fucking cared
    Now I’m torn, trying to weather the storm with no faith of any kind
    9/11 and Iraq have left numbers killed that can’t perceive in one’s mind
    Trying to make it through life blind, with nothing ahead looking bright
    Never polite, miserable out of spite because the after life isn't in sight
    I can’t see the light; It’s being blocked like I’ve just entered a tunnel
    As people keep suffering my views of beliving are starting to funnel
    I try to stay humble but I wish others could see God through my eyes
    A type of devil disguised reeling you in then swatting you’re dreams like flies
    My eyes on the prize, Donate money not to go to heaven but to keep others’ alive
    God’s not helping, my generosity can revive lives, help poverty stricken survive
    I want others to strive but world hunger and poverty isn’t going away by the Lord
    People got Direct T.V and cable cords while a lunch for the poor is hard to afford
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    Jesus is about justice? I don’t see any in this man made hell we live in today
    Laws and so called commandments are obeyed but our lives our still in dismay
    Let the real painting be portrayed, God was created by man to bring false hope
    It’s not all this false beings fault we prayed for dope and laser beams with scopes
    Of course we’re not climbing the rope in a society where were destined to fail
    High class is destined for greatness, Lower and middle class will never prevail
    Crowded jails is the Mary we hail but she isn’t making miracles occur
    Life’s gone in a blur, why waste time praying to a guy given gold and myrrh
    Do you concur? All we got in this world’s our self, prayers are left unanswered
    God loves us huh?, thousand’s die a day because we can’t find a cure for cancer
    Aids still unanswered, so ya’ll need to stop with the non sense and check into reality
    Guns blaze in third world countries bring abnormality and babies unwanted fatalities
    Where’s morality and hospitality? Stop believing, the suns the only source of light
    Even if heaven was a plane ride away, you would still catch me on another flight

    Kronik Boom

    My brother, what is this you are saying? God never left you, keep praying!
    he will answer, but you must clear you heart! Filth only brings decaying.
    In short, God helps those who help themselves, always a two way street,
    take a front row seat, the SON brings light, while the SUN only brings heat.
    As for the tides and offerings, that’s what they are a tribute to mankind,
    your task: already assigned, God can’t see your sins this world is ran-blind,
    you believe he is against the will of man, but would you sacrifice your son,
    for a community of sin well-done, burnt to a crisp, cause in hell the devil won.
    He collected your soul while you lost control, another one bites the eternal dust,
    belong to god as a whole, don’t lose our true goal, in god we must eternally trust.

    We try so hard to manage our own fate, don’t try an debate,
    what I’ll instate, GOD’S the only one who can claim great.
    True disease does infest quite a number in our nations,
    half see poverty daily, the others take exotic vacations.
    It has nothing to do with healing, that’s up to the people.
    Healing comes from believing, it’s all in the new sequel,
    actions may not portray you, what’s in your heart counts,
    men who can’t see, truly have blind faith in ample amounts.

    God would save every soul around; you just need to believe,
    forget what people say, just wear your heart on your sleeve!
    So in essence we are just playing the role god has decided,
    whether you were invited or not, you and your bible coincided.
    Into one entity, forever gaining each others trust in one another.
    God is fighting for your side, I repeat this once again my brother.
    He loves us, that’s why all of us were created to walk this chapter,
    leave the hate, embrace Jesus’ love, live your life with laughter.
    For you plane ride would be tolerable, if you pick the righteous path,
    before, we tried to create our own ways, only to feel god’s wrath.
    He truly is our keeper; just build you foundation on the solid rock,
    for it will land upon you if keep trying to solve problems with a glock.


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    Bump, it may be long but damn ya'll got no where else to go.

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    anyone have any valid thoughts,
    lmao this is pathetic no wonder no one drops here!
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    good shit its a nice religous join
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    Bump, Ya'll are lazy. A lot of views no one replied.

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    This was pretty good, however there were mistakes that could have been corrected. I liked this whole religious debate idea even though nowadays to many dogs have started writing about religion. This was quite long and that is the reason it's being sleept on.
    Dusk your verse was good and well explained however you have chosen more basic vocabulary which weakens your whole arguement/view. I would advise you to start using more complex vocab and using more imagery, such as description, metaphores etc.
    Kronik your verse was aight too, i liked how you flipped words and created good wordplay. Just up ya vocab a lil too. other than that it was an aight verse.

    Overall, this was quite good, just keep it goin'
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    don't sleep people...hit up with some opinions
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