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Thread: Me Against The World (freeverse) - DROP LINKS I WILL RETURN IT!!!

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    Wordbenders Jawn Raw's Avatar
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    Me Against The World (freeverse) - DROP LINKS I WILL RETURN IT!!!

    Song Link:
    http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=3907656&q=hi

    S'c Link:
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=525342

    alright....leave good feedback and I'll return it if you drop links.

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    good quality......beats perfect for the topic....flow is decent but needs a lil work.....lyrics are pretty good....feelin the topic.....use some mroe emotion 2 bro....pertty nice verse dawg, shood def make thsi a trakk

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    Man da flow got kinda repeative to me but I like little interlude that waz dope u got a good voice.. U just need to polish ya shits up a lil don't flow da same way all da time I like da beat. Kinda sounds like u waz reading sth u got some potential it wasn't bad.. keep it up homie
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    Wordbenders Jawn Raw's Avatar
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    thanks, uppin

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    Ok this is pretty good.Delivery is quite good too.Smooth rhymes,really feeling them.Liked the beat a lot real nice.As RAW said Interlude was dope.Show a bit more emotion in your voice caus eyou got mad potential and I can really see you becoming pure dope.Keep this shit up bro and no doubt i'll be looking out
    Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
    On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....
    So far so good.....

    But how you fall doesn't matter
    Its how you land

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    thanks, uppin

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