Automatic (6-2) Vs. Feeble Minded (5-1)

[Mystery~Murdera]

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Note: Feeble said he wanted good
comp every week from here on out. He also
said that he wouldn't get beat again this season.
...Auto if you win... you go straight to contendorship.

[Automatic.]

what up feebs

u choose lines, i can go whatever. more then less though.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=293391
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=293390
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=4518772

[Richard Parker]

I'm in, 20

[Automatic.]

make u take a seat n' i'll leave u challenged speakin
who needs voters?
ur verse is already brokedown and beaten
cuz u cant win, auto'll leave u bruised and rattled
ur verse will have more Myst punches then last weeks battle
self-proclaimed legend and easily best in the league..
yet u lose two out of three battles..... IN UNDER A WEEK
50 line crew match, 40 vs. spit, 20 vs. MM, ur starvin
u've dropped more lines this past week... arguing... with marvin
i'm a hard win, plus i'll break ur spine to show who the bitch is
i'll make u lose ur touch.. seeing, hearing, and the rest of ya senses
feebs n' AI.. i'm speechless.. fuck that revolt
^ only time two negatives wont ever have positive results
left SC for a fuckin topical crew, bitch thats lame
so u can just take this upset..
...and write about it in an AI collab worthy of hall of fame
and fuck a nobody.. always wack as hell and never has any hope
^ i just used my set-up to diss everybody who still thinks ur dope
just take ur shit back to RV, n' no i dont mean ya houses
cuz ur new style aint working.. time to go back to skirts n' blouses
na but seriously u need a change, cuz u havent been making sound
i'd dig ur style.. rip it to shreds, burn it, and toss it back in the ground

[Richard Parker]

One comment...Gotta give you props, you have balls dropping early like that. *excuse the freepost please M~M*

[Richard Parker]

Quit accusing me of falling off, my styles cleaner than Trump's office
you better not allege that I'm wack.. bitch instead just jump off it
I'm dope son & this'll end quickly without the dramatic finish
Making legends takes patience.. there'll never be anything automatic in it
I'ma come hateful, cuz you a faggot, type of whore to be bluffing
& I'll make my verse mean.. more than yours which means nothing
you already think you won, yet you give respect to try to please me..
but you'll get ahead of yourself, just to confirm that its kinda easy
I'm just keying son, call yourself automatic but I'll smack you up
& You aren't a machine, when your handmade this shit wack as fuck
said you'd "give me a tough battle", bitch, this is how a vet drops it
& you think this is for your gain, how you consider me a net profit
ain't a realist thinking you won, hanging around like a stagnant disease
this is the perfect match-up.. ideal losses to this faggot with ease
SC's nothing, I checked your wack crew sig, repping them is evil
"nothing artificial": translation: you dont have vets like M~M & Feeble
Truth is, when you joined Second Coming I could tell ya fate
U thought it meant you're dope, really, they just hoped you'd elevate
your tough guy fascade always looks the fakest of course
Said you'd give me a good battle...instead I'll take it by force

[Tae Profit]

make u take a seat n' i'll leave u challenged speakin
who needs voters?
ur verse is already brokedown and beaten
nice flip but used worn concept...coo
cuz u cant win, auto'll leave u bruised and rattled
ur verse will have more Myst punches then last weeks battle
aight, not too hard hitting
self-proclaimed legend and easily best in the league..
yet u lose two out of three battles..... IN UNDER A WEEK
lol, good personal here, shud of been opener
50 line crew match, 40 vs. spit, 20 vs. MM, ur starvin
u've dropped more lines this past week... arguing... with marvin
again, cool personal
i'm a hard win, plus i'll break ur spine to show who the bitch is
i'll make u lose ur touch.. seeing, hearing, and the rest of ya senses
yea good, kinda flipped off an old Feebs punch
feebs n' AI.. i'm speechless.. fuck that revolt
^ only time two negatives wont ever have positive results
Damn...dope ma nigga
left SC for a fuckin topical crew, bitch thats lame
so u can just take this upset..
...and write about it in an AI collab worthy of hall of fame
nah, doesnt sound like a diss to me
and fuck a nobody.. always wack as hell and never has any hope
^ i just used my set-up to diss everybody who still thinks ur dope
great flip
just take ur shit back to RV, n' no i dont mean ya houses
cuz ur new style aint working.. time to go back to skirts n' blouses
good personal own Feebs switching up his style and nice punch at the end, good
na but seriously u need a change, cuz u havent been making sound
i'd dig ur style.. rip it to shreds, burn it, and toss it back in the ground
again somewhat played and the flip was ok at best

Hmmm...good verse, nothing totally smashing or totally original but i havent heard the two negatives punch before, that was fire. You opener and closer hurt you becuz they just weren't killa as they shud be against someone good and the AI diss sounded like a compliment. I dunno, ok but not great.

VS.

Quit accusing me of falling off, my styles cleaner than Trump's office
you better not allege that I'm wack.. bitch instead just jump off it
aight
I'm dope son & this'll end quickly without the dramatic finish
Making legends takes patience.. there'll never be anything automatic in it
easy nameplay, decent set up
I'ma come hateful, cuz you a faggot, type of whore to be bluffing
& I'll make my verse mean.. more than yours which means nothing
u know this has been done over and over againn and this was a bad flip
you already think you won, yet you give respect to try to please me..
but you'll get ahead of yourself, just to confirm that its kinda easy
dont know if i get it, but what i think it is wasnt good
I'm just keying son, call yourself automatic but I'll smack you up
& You aren't a machine, when your handmade this shit wack as fuck
Good, harsh with some nice wordplay
said you'd "give me a tough battle", bitch, this is how a vet drops it
& you think this is for your gain, how you consider me a net profit
another good bar
ain't a realist thinking you won, hanging around like a stagnant disease
this is the perfect match-up.. ideal losses to this faggot with ease
yurp..keep em coming
SC's nothing, I checked your wack crew sig, repping them is evil
"nothing artificial": translation: you dont have vets like M~M & Feeble
could of been better but yea cool
Truth is, when you joined Second Coming I could tell ya fate
U thought it meant you're dope, really, they just hoped you'd elevate
it had so much promise and came out as average..didnt like it
your tough guy fascade always looks the fakest of course
Said you'd give me a good battle...instead I'll take it by force
not a good closer

This was a disappointing verse here. Couple good lines and one hurting one. It was just boring...everything coulda been harder.


As i see it we have an upset here. Auto dropped a bit above average while feebs came average, so i gotta go Auto.

[Richard Parker]

alright thanks.

"u know this has been done over and over againn and this was a bad flip"
-actually I've never seen it before. surprised that u have since I've been around so long, but meh.

up

[Cody Nash]

make u take a seat n' i'll leave u challenged speakin
who needs voters?
ur verse is already brokedown and beaten
heh, good
cuz u cant win, auto'll leave u bruised and rattled
ur verse will have more Myst punches then last weeks battle
nice
self-proclaimed legend and easily best in the league..
yet u lose two out of three battles..... IN UNDER A WEEK
good good.
50 line crew match, 40 vs. spit, 20 vs. MM, ur starvin
u've dropped more lines this past week... arguing... with marvin
meh, didn't like it.
i'm a hard win, plus i'll break ur spine to show who the bitch is
i'll make u lose ur touch.. seeing, hearing, and the rest of ya senses
i used a senses punch in like the second week of LLL but this was ok ..
feebs n' AI.. i'm speechless.. fuck that revolt
^ only time two negatives wont ever have positive results
hah, nice
left SC for a fuckin topical crew, bitch thats lame
so u can just take this upset..
...and write about it in an AI collab worthy of hall of fame
lol, i get the "Emo" vibe off the punch, but it didn't seem hard.
and fuck a nobody.. always wack as hell and never has any hope
^ i just used my set-up to diss everybody who still thinks ur dope
ok
just take ur shit back to RV, n' no i dont mean ya houses
cuz ur new style aint working.. time to go back to skirts n' blouses
meh, disliked.
na but seriously u need a change, cuz u havent been making sound
i'd dig ur style.. rip it to shreds, burn it, and toss it back in the ground
heh, ok flip.

Auto - your flips are so consistant. that's like your whole style this battle. i disliked some of your punches and wasn't feeling the directness from a few as well. a couple nice and hard ones but overall not one of the best i've seen from you. IMO ..moving on to feeble now . . .

vs

Quit accusing me of falling off, my styles cleaner than Trump's office
you better not allege that I'm wack.. bitch instead just jump off it
cool wordplay there.
I'm dope son & this'll end quickly without the dramatic finish
Making legends takes patience.. there'll never be anything automatic in it
alright . . . decent nameplay
I'ma come hateful, cuz you a faggot, type of whore to be bluffing
& I'll make my verse mean.. more than yours which means nothing
meh, it was OK but i personally didn't like it.
you already think you won, yet you give respect to try to please me..
but you'll get ahead of yourself, just to confirm that its kinda easy
lol, cool.
I'm just keying son, call yourself automatic but I'll smack you up
& You aren't a machine, when your handmade this shit wack as fuck
nice.
said you'd "give me a tough battle", bitch, this is how a vet drops it
& you think this is for your gain, how you consider me a net profit
nah, didn't like.
ain't a realist thinking you won, hanging around like a stagnant disease
this is the perfect match-up.. ideal losses to this faggot with ease
hehe. good
SC's nothing, I checked your wack crew sig, repping them is evil
"nothing artificial": translation: you dont have vets like M~M & Feeble
alright . . .self gloryish ..
Truth is, when you joined Second Coming I could tell ya fate
U thought it meant you're dope, really, they just hoped you'd elevate
ok
your tough guy fascade always looks the fakest of course
Said you'd give me a good battle...instead I'll take it by force
cool, one of the better punches of the battle.

Feeb - your verse was surprisingly weaker than last weeks and the week before. I thought you'd at least come a little harder than this, a little upsetting to read but it was a good verse all in all.

ok, Automatic had the edge, while feeble had the more personal attacks. it was two completely different styles and it's really hard to judge. both sides had worse punches than their previous weeks imo, and they both should've done better. But you get what you get, and honestly i think the winner is . . . . . . . .

v. Feeble. I think your shit was much more personal and the lines you had were a little more creative than auto's. both verses were dissapointing like i said, but i really liked the feeble verse much more.

[Philly®]

make u take a seat n' i'll leave u challenged speakin
who needs voters?
ur verse is already brokedown and beaten
nice punch
cuz u cant win, auto'll leave u bruised and rattled
ur verse will have more Myst punches then last weeks battle
iight, due to it sounding so much line the first punch u just used
self-proclaimed legend and easily best in the league..
yet u lose two out of three battles..... IN UNDER A WEEK
ok
50 line crew match, 40 vs. spit, 20 vs. MM, ur starvin
u've dropped more lines this past week... arguing... with marvin
lol.. ok personal
i'm a hard win, plus i'll break ur spine to show who the bitch is
i'll make u lose ur touch.. seeing, hearing, and the rest of ya senses
saw this somewhere, still ok tho
feebs n' AI.. i'm speechless.. fuck that revolt
^ only time two negatives wont ever have positive results
nice..
left SC for a fuckin topical crew, bitch thats lame
so u can just take this upset..
...and write about it in an AI collab worthy of hall of fame
ok diss and somwhat of a complament.. not bad tho
and fuck a nobody.. always wack as hell and never has any hope
^ i just used my set-up to diss everybody who still thinks ur dope
nice, but not that hard
just take ur shit back to RV, n' no i dont mean ya houses
cuz ur new style aint working.. time to go back to skirts n' blouses
nice ass flip
na but seriously u need a change, cuz u havent been making sound
i'd dig ur style.. rip it to shreds, burn it, and toss it back in the ground
iight


vs.

Quit accusing me of falling off, my styles cleaner than Trump's office
you better not allege that I'm wack.. bitch instead just jump off it
nice
I'm dope son & this'll end quickly without the dramatic finish
Making legends takes patience.. there'll never be anything automatic in it
iight
I'ma come hateful, cuz you a faggot, type of whore to be bluffing
& I'll make my verse mean.. more than yours which means nothing
iight
you already think you won, yet you give respect to try to please me..
but you'll get ahead of yourself, just to confirm that its kinda easy
meh
I'm just keying son, call yourself automatic but I'll smack you up
& You aren't a machine, when your handmade this shit wack as fuck
iight
said you'd "give me a tough battle", bitch, this is how a vet drops it
& you think this is for your gain, how you consider me a net profit
meh
ain't a realist thinking you won, hanging around like a stagnant disease
this is the perfect match-up.. ideal losses to this faggot with ease
meh
SC's nothing, I checked your wack crew sig, repping them is evil
"nothing artificial": translation: you dont have vets like M~M & Feeble
iight
Truth is, when you joined Second Coming I could tell ya fate
U thought it meant you're dope, really, they just hoped you'd elevate
lmao...nice
your tough guy fascade always looks the fakest of course
Said you'd give me a good battle...instead I'll take it by force
nice

dunno, u both came good for the most part, but u bothed had some line's that coulda been better,
i'm leaning to feeble cuz i felt like 2 of auto's punches weren't but so direct, but on the other hand
i thought bout 2 of feebles punches were meh, so for the most part it's a couple not so direct punches versus
a couple of meh punches..

so now i'll break it down with my definitions

not direct mean, a atttempt at a punch, which was no doubt a nice one, but it wasn't persay directed to much at the opponent

where we have

meh which is a ttempt at a punch but not nothing to quote or say o that's nice


so with that said for having more of somewhat consistancy i'll go with feeble on this

V/ feeble


btw.... i'm high as fuck right now... so charish this vote for it may be the best one i give all season

[Penlord.]

make u take a seat n' i'll leave u challenged speakin
who needs voters?
ur verse is already brokedown and beaten
Alright
cuz u cant win, auto'll leave u bruised and rattled
ur verse will have more Myst punches then last weeks battle
Alright
self-proclaimed legend and easily best in the league..
yet u lose two out of three battles..... IN UNDER A WEEK
Good
50 line crew match, 40 vs. spit, 20 vs. MM, ur starvin
u've dropped more lines this past week... arguing... with marvin
Good
i'm a hard win, plus i'll break ur spine to show who the bitch is
i'll make u lose ur touch.. seeing, hearing, and the rest of ya senses
Alright, seen sense punches alot thugh..
feebs n' AI.. i'm speechless.. fuck that revolt
^ only time two negatives wont ever have positive results
Nice
left SC for a fuckin topical crew, bitch thats lame
so u can just take this upset..
...and write about it in an AI collab worthy of hall of fame
Alright
and fuck a nobody.. always wack as hell and never has any hope
^ i just used my set-up to diss everybody who still thinks ur dope
Sorta seen something like this, Alright Punch..
just take ur shit back to RV, n' no i dont mean ya houses
cuz ur new style aint working.. time to go back to skirts n' blouses
Eh..
na but seriously u need a change, cuz u havent been making sound
i'd dig ur style.. rip it to shreds, burn it, and toss it back in the ground
Alright

Vs.


Quit accusing me of falling off, my styles cleaner than Trump's office
you better not allege that I'm wack.. bitch instead just jump off it
Nice Punch
I'm dope son & this'll end quickly without the dramatic finish
Making legends takes patience.. there'll never be anything automatic in it
Alright..
I'ma come hateful, cuz you a faggot, type of whore to be bluffing
& I'll make my verse mean.. more than yours which means nothing
Alright
you already think you won, yet you give respect to try to please me..
but you'll get ahead of yourself, just to confirm that its kinda easy
Alright
I'm just keying son, call yourself automatic but I'll smack you up
& You aren't a machine, when your handmade this shit wack as fuck
Alright
said you'd "give me a tough battle", bitch, this is how a vet drops it
& you think this is for your gain, how you consider me a net profit
Good
ain't a realist thinking you won, hanging around like a stagnant disease
this is the perfect match-up.. ideal losses to this faggot with ease
Good
SC's nothing, I checked your wack crew sig, repping them is evil
"nothing artificial": translation: you dont have vets like M~M & Feeble
Liked It..
Truth is, when you joined Second Coming I could tell ya fate
U thought it meant you're dope, really, they just hoped you'd elevate
Good personal
your tough guy fascade always looks the fakest of course
Said you'd give me a good battle...instead I'll take it by force
Alright

Wow, in my opinion, this was close...i think the difference is the way auto started..i didnt really like those 2 bars..kinds lost it for him in my opinion..Feeble had a nice first punch..i liked it.

Feebs Best:
Quit accusing me of falling off, my styles cleaner than Trump's office
you better not allege that I'm wack.. bitch instead just jump off it
SC's nothing, I checked your wack crew sig, repping them is evil
"nothing artificial": translation: you dont have vets like M~M & Feeble

Autos Best:
feebs n' AI.. i'm speechless.. fuck that revolt
^ only time two negatives wont ever have positive results

Overall/ Feeble.

[Richard Parker]

I might "cherish" it, but no... I don't cherish votes. But, thanks for voting. His first and second punches didn't seem all that similar though... at least not to me anyway. But yeah, as I've heard, people don't like everything. Hehe

Last up.

edit to auto's edit: yeah i edited the kids comment out. & to teacher: Yeah i see what you're saying, i just meant, conceptually, they're not really similar. but i got you

[Automatic.]

1-3

[Erupt]

make u take a seat n' i'll leave u challenged speakin
who needs voters?
ur verse is already brokedown and beaten
cuz u cant win, auto'll leave u bruised and rattled
ur verse will have more Myst punches then last weeks battle
self-proclaimed legend and easily best in the league..
yet u lose two out of three battles..... IN UNDER A WEEK
50 line crew match, 40 vs. spit, 20 vs. MM, ur starvin
u've dropped more lines this past week... arguing... with marvin
i'm a hard win, plus i'll break ur spine to show who the bitch is
i'll make u lose ur touch.. seeing, hearing, and the rest of ya senses
feebs n' AI.. i'm speechless.. fuck that revolt
^ only time two negatives wont ever have positive results
na but seriously u need a change, cuz u havent been making sound
i'd dig ur style.. rip it to shreds, burn it, and toss it back in the ground

vs



SC's nothing, I checked your wack crew sig, repping them is evil
"nothing artificial": translation: you dont have vets like M~M & Feeble
Truth is, when you joined Second Coming I could tell ya fate
U thought it meant you're dope, really, they just hoped you'd elevate


wtf? look you really don't have to accept this vote, but this is my honest opinion: auto just mashed feeble.. just wow....

feeble showed glimpses of dopeness with those last few line but most of his shit was just bland indirect wordplay which didnt seem to connect at all.. auto came with te freshness *in most lines* not saying some wasnt played, (thats why I only quoted the good ones) but all in all auto took this easily..

[Vaskez]

make u take a seat n' i'll leave u challenged speakin
who needs voters?
ur verse is already brokedown and beaten
^^this woulda been good if ya didn't add the beaten since it makes no sense voters beating his verse, although the breaking down makes sense both ways, still, nice try

cuz u cant win, auto'll leave u bruised and rattled
ur verse will have more Myst punches then last weeks battle
^^this is creative but dunno, just didn't have that WOAH

self-proclaimed legend and easily best in the league..
yet u lose two out of three battles..... IN UNDER A WEEK
^^not witty enough, but harsh truth

50 line crew match, 40 vs. spit, 20 vs. MM, ur starvin
u've dropped more lines this past week... arguing... with marvin
^^haha this was funny
i'm a hard win, plus i'll break ur spine to show who the bitch is
i'll make u lose ur touch.. seeing, hearing, and the rest of ya senses
^^okish but dont really feel the make you lose ya senses violence concept
feebs n' AI.. i'm speechless.. fuck that revolt
^ only time two negatives wont ever have positive results
^^coulda done with better wording, but not too bad
left SC for a fuckin topical crew, bitch thats lame
so u can just take this upset..
...and write about it in an AI collab worthy of hall of fame
^^eh not really harsh
and fuck a nobody.. always wack as hell and never has any hope
^ i just used my set-up to diss everybody who still thinks ur dope
^^this was cool
just take ur shit back to RV, n' no i dont mean ya houses
cuz ur new style aint working.. time to go back to skirts n' blouses
^^meeeeh
na but seriously u need a change, cuz u havent been making sound
i'd dig ur style.. rip it to shreds, burn it, and toss it back in the ground
^^s'ok

solid verse, nothing wack but only like 2 bars that stood out


vs.

Quit accusing me of falling off, my styles cleaner than Trump's office
you better not allege that I'm wack.. bitch instead just jump off it
^^creative as hell just not exactly harsh ("I hope you do this", "you should do this" concepts are never really harsh since they're not a direct diss)

I'm dope son & this'll end quickly without the dramatic finish
Making legends takes patience.. there'll never be anything automatic in it
^^haha cool
I'ma come hateful, cuz you a faggot, type of whore to be bluffing
& I'll make my verse mean.. more than yours which means nothing
^^cool again
you already think you won, yet you give respect to try to please me..
but you'll get ahead of yourself, just to confirm that its kinda easy
^^wow, impressed with the wit here
I'm just keying son, call yourself automatic but I'll smack you up
& You aren't a machine, when your handmade this shit wack as fuck
^^reaching...but nice concept
said you'd "give me a tough battle", bitch, this is how a vet drops it
& you think this is for your gain, how you consider me a net profit
^^ok, needed to be more direct
ain't a realist thinking you won, hanging around like a stagnant disease
this is the perfect match-up.. ideal losses to this faggot with ease
^^ok but just a bunch of related wordplay
SC's nothing, I checked your wack crew sig, repping them is evil
"nothing artificial": translation: you dont have vets like M~M & Feeble
^^haha nice flip of the slogan
Truth is, when you joined Second Coming I could tell ya fate
U thought it meant you're dope, really, they just hoped you'd elevate
^^meh ok
your tough guy fascade always looks the fakest of course
Said you'd give me a good battle...instead I'll take it by force
^^kinda similar to com's take first place by force, s'ok

yeah feebs really impressed with some of the wit in his first coupla bars, and takes this by at least 1 or 2 quotables

v/Feeble