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Thread: a lot of shit goin on in my head at the time

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    a lot of shit goin on in my head at the time

    im the most infulential rhyme-spitter,
    always on my grind, hevy hitter
    come at cha quicker then these fake bitches
    always snitchin to get richer. fuck a picture
    ill show u lyrically how i do. revise crews
    comprisin dues cuz there aint no con-sign-ment fool
    ma i dont mind u watchin wit ya eyes be cautious
    cuz this kid be havin lives get tossed in
    the back of the grand mark besides the coffin.
    my style is flawless, commitin crimes is often
    dont give a fuck cuz time is just temporary baby
    lately i been thinkin crazy bout where my life will take me
    where the hell my cake'll be
    hopefully stacked up in mountins B
    but money can't buy nuttin but material
    im lookin for love, life, n happiness
    fuck BUB, trife, n bein whacky bent
    imma invent a way to get life an utopia
    no gang-violence, police, just people livin in peace
    no bums livin in the streets, n no prostitutes carryin diseases
    no what i mean? cuz lotta these niggas are stuck
    stuck in the goverments "trap" where niggas get clapped
    from a drug addict on crack. n u know where it be at
    in them legal prisons they call projects
    where they pay u to be confined. custys stumblin high outta their mind
    mothers wit no daddy puttin food on the table for 9
    crime is up, time is up, so we needa stand up
    for what we believe in, cuz i know im not the only 1 seein
    this shit we call democracy, FUCK IT I GOTT NOTHING ELSE TO SAY!
    cuz i was high when i wrote this




    cuz life is like a game you played like dominos
    who knows life could just get taken from unda ya nose
    i suppose the grim been watchin me since 87'
    cuz i coulda got taken when i was just 11
    or even 7 who knows cuz in life u just be floatin
    not knowin where u goin
    or where the consequesnces will be showin
    but ill be goin where my mind takes me
    its 2006 baby
    cuz mad heads dont even get to see 18



    FREESTYLE LEMME SOME FEEDBACK PEOPLE THATS SOME REAL SHIT FOR YA

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    well i like this but just know that therez gon be peepz sayin dont drop a freestyle here son drop em in cypher aight?? well your piece was really unsteady, at timez it showed some talent and at otherz it didnt
    you had some good multies in the first half of your verse, but work on the structure and your flow was choppy but overall it was good~laterz

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