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Thread: Fuck You Smokey!! & Lyricals Finest!!!

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    Fuck You Smokey!! & Lyricals Finest!!!

    Wipe Your Tears Because Your Life Aint Hurting To Me
    I'm My Own Person You See
    And You Nigg@s Aint Fucking With D.S......You Virgins To Me!
    Plus, You'll Never Be Another Rapping Version Of Me
    And I Aint Jerking You Gee, I'm Really Working For Free
    Don't Believe The Hype? Meet Me In The After Hours I'll Be Lurking In Trees!
    So Freeze! You On Camera...Say Cheese! For The Camera
    I've Got What It Takes To Please The Fans And The Unmannered
    So As I Plan My Planner I Get Sicker By The Day
    Beating Me? You Won't Be Able To Find A Way, Your Rhymes I Slay
    And It's That Time Today For You To Feel VisioN And Become Blind Today!
    Bars By Bars I Deal More
    Talking All Famous But That's Something You've Got To Chill For
    Because If You Think You Fame, I'll Leave Your Face Blown Up Like Bill Boards!


    ...Ok Let's Be Serious Now, Let Me Take You Through A Step...

    Numero Uno, Best Believe I've Got Fans Spread, But Watch Your Damn Head
    Because Once I Let The Nines Spray, You'll Be Covered With Heat Like Tan Beds!
    As I Walk Through The Fire, Look In The Mirror And Talk To The Sire
    Realize I've Fought Through The Wires
    And That This Games A Road And What I Have Taught, Blew Your Tires!
    Bumpity Bump Bump, That's Sound Of Your Car, You Can't Catch Me
    Too Fresh B, But If You Let Me, I'll Finish You Off So You Aint Looking Too Sketchy!
    And You Won't Be Able To Arrest Me, Questions? Don't Try And Test Me
    I'm The Best From East To West See, You See Bad? The Rest See Bombastic
    My Texting Fantastic, It'll Make You Crunch Up Into A Ball Like Nestle Gymnastics!
    Leave You With A Cast On! From Being Blast On...I Speak Clearly Your Raps Cough
    Homie You Better Believe That I'll Leave Your Bone Weak Like You Just Took The Cast Off!
    I'm A Man On A Mission, Blow Out Your Back Until Your Posture Is Out
    And When I'm Done.....I'll Leave Your Life In The Trash Can Like Oscar The Grouch!
    And I'm Out......

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    Goddamn!................that shit was dope ass fuck but out of al crews why this one?

    i liked all them punches and how tyou directed on the ropic more and all the shit you was sayin going along with it

    you had good ass structure and some fly ass flow

    nice Job with the Verse Dissin Crew?? idk

    Nice/Dope

    Pe@ce

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    good OM, but why u wanna diss L.F.?

    they wack but why
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    Decent drop......flow/word choice could have been better
    multis were aight kinda basic but it still made sense..the wordplay was ok....an the metas were ok as well......good material...just work on word choice/metas/wordplay/multis

    7.5/10

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    personally im not a fan of disses in OM but this was different. it was almost seeming self defence. you came ill with the topic and sticking to it. for real. i liked it. Im not a textee but i still felt the lines were dope and they made me laugh cause i can usually tell what line will be coming next. but not with this piece. good job word up son.

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    uppin dis i want da whole site to see dis sht

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    up.

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    Yoo that shit was silly ill


    Flow was dope
    Punchs was dope
    Multies was ill
    You rymed soo many times in that shit....

    Just simply dope.......For feed thoe punchs could have been more direct but this piece was ill


    PlZ Check the battle in my sig....And we should colabb sometime
    Drop some feed i'll RTF

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    The first guy who gave feed is easily impressed. It wasnt dope as fuck like he said but there was some nice punches. That "Cast off" line was pretty dope. The "tanning bed" one was too. Flow, mulities all that was cool. Not much to say about this except why havent the crew you dissed said anything to this? They either realize they aint as good or they're taking a while to right something. Either way this was a nice battle verse. witty shit.

    Give feed on my "Beautifuly Explicit" verse in my sig and that would be appreciated.

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    NOTICE HOW NONE OF THE CREW RESPONDED THIS NIGGAS A JOKE

    BUT I HAD TO REPOND ON BEHALF OF LF FUCK U AND DIE SLOW HOMO


    HAVE A NICE DAY



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