lOOk$ vs MeRk_SoLdIeR

[MeRk_SoLdIeR]

ok, uppin(3) hmmmmmmmmmmmm, good battle, i've never been tied b4.

[lOOk$]

uppin, come on why r battles gettin slept on these days?

[Blanco.]

MS- Your verse was played and was too simplistic. Your structure and were good. But your punches were and punches are what wins battles.

lOOk$- You had nice punches. Structure and flow were also nice in your verse. You came consistant and direst with punchlines. So won this battle.

v// lOOk$ for better punches and an overall verse.

[Oxymoron]

i'm declarin war on this fool he wants a peace treaty
Try heaven, cuz there's no way in HELL you gon beat me
no played
you really wanna battle me?! stop smockin those rocks
you have NO creativity your not "out of the box"(cubix box)
meh could be better
and according to your sig, you've boxed me in
just drop your lame ass verse and you've SEALED my win(you seal a box)
no
you swear you rhymes are RAW but i COOK them still
shoot all you want, you don't have the LOOK$ to kill
lol gay
you have no potential whatsoever you're lame
the only time you'd be "fly" is when you take the wings off your name*
one of your better bars

^^^admitin defeat, whoa….dude might aswell cut off ur life line
futures lookin dark… n u can sign wit bad boy n u still wouldn’t shine
hmm ok
fag why u rappin?...like a volcano ur a disaster waitin 2 happend
ur in debt for loses, im handin u dis L so you wont overspend
naw doesent rhyme like gucci said
Seriously merk,your wack enough said…..and dats the truth
Dudes terrified by my presences..coz he was molested as a youth
eww
ur style is bogus might aswell spit tru ur nose coz ur verse blows
even if dey named you Katrina……
……. ……………..u still wouldn’t have the highest ranked flows
no
I check this soldiers last battle n he got meked for lackin meta 4’s
I guess dis bout is left wide open 4 me 2 take…like open doors
NO!!!


weak battle i didnt like either verse merk your wack you had a couple good concepts but that jus didnt hit good you neda work on wording.

and looks$ definitly not your best that shit was week man work on better personals and shit

V/LOOK$

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=295978

[lOOk$]

uppin

[lOOk$]

up in

[DaTrusHurtz]

Merk - Your shit just had too many bland statements, such as the opener. Even with the attempted wit, all you said was he can't beat you, which is no way really disses him. Outside the box is a bit played but an attempted diss. The rest of ya stuff was a bit below-par, work on thinkin' of fresh concepts n' wording them better.

Looks - I felt like you had a lot of played shit, you gotta work on being more original. The opener I haven't exactly seen so that was okay, but the rest, yup. The only thing you had up on Merk was I felt you worded your concepts much better and were a little more consistent with the punches so I'm giving you this.

Vote - Looks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=296013

[Dyl]

Merk- your verse really drageed on and your punches were very weak.I yawned through your whole verse.You need to be more creative with your punches and come up with DOPE personals.Try use more wordplay to livin up your verse.

look$-Ok this verse was a lil bit better and I think your punches hit harder than merks.You punches still were a bit weak and against a stronger opponent you would have been beaten,but just work on that.Again be more creative and use more wordplay.Try make a dope personal in every line if you can.Keep workin on your game iight

v//look$