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    Bess Say Goodbye JOOKZ &Scratch collab

    Scratch:
    I've had long distance relationships mackin girls from other states
    then they go and cheat on me next they want a clean slate
    talkin bout some "don't hate" but I can't have that
    don't wanna mack that don't wanna tap that
    juss wanna smack that girl
    get her outta my world she was juss a waste of pearls
    but see I did like our ride but she was more like a rental
    now I know tha meanin of tha word senti"mental"
    its supposed to b 3 strikes well guess what I've had six
    I'm bout ta bench myself from havin relationships
    my friends tell me Arsenist theres someone for everybody
    I guess thats y god let us create Bacardi
    I juss wish I din't have ta turn to tha liqua
    but its tha only thing that won't run off on you or bicka (bicker)
    c I'm not one to throw out punches or names
    but if I let tha anger get tha best of me I could hurt bunches of dames
    girls play mind games they like to decieve
    thats y every female should come with a free bottle of Alieve
    I was tha type of man to always show women respect
    and I don't think thats somethin I should have to regret

    JOOKZ:
    this world is filled wit nothig but bad relationships
    if u wit a henace bitch then u gotta have patience wit
    eachothers feelings and put them under matanince
    I can see your emotions arent running through the veins,
    nothin would be tha same,if love contradicted ones brain
    all it takes isa few simple words n thats 25 years down the drain
    there was nothing to begin wit so theres no chance for memory
    hows emotion built when ur hearts gray n black n is as hard as emory
    were not in school any more n the girl still doesnt feel chemistry
    u claim ur not a criminal n the marks on her face werent intentional
    while the mind is subliminal the inner you is one dimensional
    if feelings are minimal then this me n u thing is unconventional
    in the beginning she was under your control you were the piolit
    now as the years go on the energy ceases n you live in silence
    juss call it quits if you feel that you have to resort to violence
    Blow It Out U're Ass

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    comon can we get some feed on this..its my 1st collab...and 1st OM...lol....

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    comon...can we get feed plz..well i juss wanna know how i did for my first OM

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    comon....can we get some feed?we've had mad views and no feed thats crazy.................

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    im juss imaptient i guess....i juss wanna see how ppl think we did.....

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    plz leave feed on this......o and this is Jookz if yall dont know by now

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    ya'll should let me get on this mayne i'll edit and leave feed later this Sin~A~matic

    this was a very nice topical, imagery was nice, and wordplay was cool. Vocab was good. nuthin much I could say this was a really nice OM. I would only say fix the structure a little bit and vocabulary but thats just small stuff not to big

    but really next time ya'll do a collab let me get in that mutha fucka

    O and can you hit up my OM "Only Human" thanks
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    ^^^ ayo fam its up to Scratch..hes the leader of this one.....i dont have a problem wit it....

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    comon can we get feed on this pppppppllllllzzzzzzzzz

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    i say it was meh but if its just your first then its iight i guess elavate

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