Okay, I tried to write this and insert the pauses when I could forcibly to help you read how I want this to flow... I hope it helps. But this is a slower verse. It kind of works to go fast, but slower and more enunciated and slow with the syllables I think works best for this.
Through the twilight, my eyes tight, I listen
For my right to lime-lite...
Try as I might...
...I'm missin'-
It's the anniversary of the first verse that we heard-
Time to burst and be immersed in this absurd-
Poetic culture... So that a poster...
Can be sold for two-fold with the all-granite coaster...
Capitalists-
Democracy...
It just so happens that this is hypocrasy...
So much to say-
That the very phrase has been raised to cliche-
It's commonplace to have a case lost in a day...
I toss in my pay-
To society's cost...
I'm crossin' the fray of the riots we caused-
And by any clause, we break the convention-
Forsake an intention for good moral invention...
And didn't we already lose this shit?
Pain at the pump is just the fuse we've lit...
Accused of writ...
Tin... Language, Obscene and unclean-
Teen anguish...
We could flee shameless, but we're afraid to look weak-
Is that pain on your face? Or am I mistook, Sheik?
......
Guantanamo...
We witness the domino effect-
War, Revolting poor people swore to protect-
I'm morbid and yet I still retain hope-
As long as a Nazi will remain pope...
And a dictator runs this "free" country...
I see bluntly...
We might as well try and save a fell Humpty...
All the King's men couldn't put him together again-
So Forever I spend...
Blissfully, in Sicily missing the end...
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