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Last edited by D. Josey; November 5th, 2006 at 08:49 AM
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Haha, I really liked this. I love the concepts and abstract vibe you bring to your poetry. This piece in particular was very exciting to read, because at no line was the reader able to become complacent and dissengadged with the content. It was just so out there and unpredictable that you had to read on and see what was soon to come. The only complaint I have is your wording. With everything I see of yours I absolutely love it, but there is an element with the diction that always seems off. If you were to get that just alittle more honed than your pieces would 100% always blow me away. Regardless, nice piece man.
po'ethics /
abstanticollective.
thanksalot man.
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