3 lines, fuck fuckin fucking, people people. dont let your dictionary get stuck on repeat. also alot of punches were general and curse got more personal. lastly you used the word 'newb' which just reminds that this battle was digi, and that the verse would fall flat when converted to vocals.Originally Posted by Crayola
sorry to pick on you wyte but you seem like a big gun around here so i had to.
/v curse
DalTonic
'I need a price check on dime'a'dozen hymens trying to ride brass'
i Would put my vote for Curse... Way more personel better flow and i liked the verse better good shit curse.
thanks black, and Dal. Upppppppppinn..
Fuck the curse, beat u up like this was a fuckin fight club
Your future is dim…
…Like an old fucking light bulb
meh k
Your rhymes bore people, they’re putting people to bed
Yeah you held the throne…
…For like 5 seconds, then u dropped it on ur head
ha k
You need help, this fucking bitch has a rapping disorder
^Because your punches makes less sense…
…Then a fuckin Chinese sweat shop worker*
...nah not good
Don’t play around with newbs, so I aint playin with you
Yeah you cut straight to the chase…
…But usually get caught after a block or two
meh k
Fuck trying in the battle, I don’t need to, it is already mine
Everyone has their back to you…
…Like you were last in line
ha decent finisher
vs.
I don't know what to fuckin' Call you, 'Crayola-Or-Wyte'..
But I do know you couldn't find me, in the dark, 'holdin'-a-light'..
meh k
Your rhythmatic navigation, will get you lost and confused ..
'Kuz on the mic, you can't just fuckin' 'stop-and-undo'...
ha k
Fuck breakin' this Crayon, I'll "mark" an L 'On his Record'..
Write my verse on the "wyte" board, and rap my fuckin' lecture..
ha k
Maybe you'll learn ya lesson, not to do what ya 'can't-handle'..
Fuck it, I'll lay down and write this.. 'kuz I really 'Can't-stand-you'..
haha k
If ya verse is any good, I'll try my best to 'respect-it'..
But it's more likely that George Bush'll be re-'elected'..**
meh k
V/The Curse...lol he got Crayola by a margin...
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Aiight, cool. Can we get some more votes? Let's do this!
v//Crayola because he was way more consistent. i liked some parts imparticular. ok drop. pretty good at best. Curse, work on flowing from bar to bar. you fell off after a few. just work on ur stuff. learn wordplay and nameplay and everything. read LLL battles. no hate.
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You need help, this fucking bitch has a rapping disorrder
^Because your punches makes less sense…
…Then a fuckin Chinese sweat shop worker*
not bad^..could b worded alil better
vs.
Fuck breakin' this Crayon, I'll "mark" an L 'On his Record'..
Write my verse on the "wyte" board, and rap my fuckin' lecture
*hmm...ok
vote crayola his was better abit still pretty wack battle but i kno both can do better so no hate ya don't have to elevate but juss dropp better next time so its more enjoyable for the voters...
vote//cray
crayola- str8 punches..i liked tha chinese/cents line...good structure, had some humor, everything was str8
Curse- Meh verse..it seemed like you were saying the same thing over and over and using only his name against him, just switching words around thru lines...it got boring reading thru ya verse..fix ya structure and come harder next time
\/-Crayola
RB OG Triple OG
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Fuck the curse, beat u up like this was a fuckin fight club
Your future is dim…
…Like an old fucking light bulb
^coo..but a bit simple.
Your rhymes bore people, they’re putting people to bed
Yeah you held the throne…
…For like 5 seconds, then u dropped it on ur head
^lol.pretty funny.an good wording.
You need help, this fucking bitch has a rapping disorder
^Because your punches makes less sense…
…Then a fuckin Chinese sweat shop worker*
^forced on the rhymin part-but good punch.
Don’t play around with newbs, so I aint playin with you
Yeah you cut straight to the chase…
…But usually get caught after a block or two
^Rofl.Nice.
Fuck trying in the battle, I don’t need to, it is already mine
Everyone has their back to you…
…Like you were last in line
^lol.good,wording couldve been better..but still.
vs.
I don't know what to fuckin' Call you, 'Crayola-Or-Wyte'..
But I do know you couldn't find me, in the dark, 'holdin'-a-light'..
^meh.just real basic..but aiight-ish.
Your rhythmatic navigation, will get you lost and confused ..
'Kuz on the mic, you can't just fuckin' 'stop-and-undo'..
^naw.this is text pimpin.
Fuck breakin' this Crayon, I'll "mark" an L 'On his Record'..
Write my verse on the "wyte" board, and rap my fuckin' lecture..
^umm,str8 concept just executed badly.
Maybe you'll learn ya lesson, not to do what ya 'can't-handle'..
Fuck it, I'll lay down and write this.. 'kuz I really 'Can't-stand-you'..
^lol.pretty good.
If ya verse is any good, I'll try my best to 'respect-it'..
But it's more likely that George Bush'll be re-'elected'..**
^umm,u didnt have to explain this..I got it.decent..couldve been harsher.
overall/-Crayola had a good drop,which suprised me alot...I liked alot of those lines..an curse u had the concepts but the wording hurt you here.
V/-Crayola
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