Diss to smoky dro

[redragon]

Sem is over, youve been seen twice like things 'Belemics-Eat'
Youre like 'rips' in 'clothing', cuz your rhymes dont 'Seam-Complete'
you impotent fool, im not a 'rookie', i got 'wins' under my belt, everything you 'got's soft'
you could be killin 'boston ballplayers', as far as im concerned you still aint knockin 'sox off'
Sem's a 'bitch' without 'Danger' and 'Im-on-His-Schemes'
How can you be'Sematic, when you dont even know what 'om-in-ous' Means'
our last battle i learned why 'Sem' is a 'bitch: Cause hes 'NOT Liked Anyway'
'Despite-Him-Being-Gay' He Leaves his profile blank, Afraid of what 'We Might Say'
'Sematic-U-Lack-Son' I roll with 'savage-fac-tions' that persue with 'ravage-act-ions' to flip on 'any mc'
Fuck a gun…I'll toss you 'drinks from the bar' just to have 'shots' thrown at your "knees"
I’m like ya ‘Mechanical pencil’, with ‘each click the led sends’ out 'rewriting ur scripts'
I’m igniting with clips…you n winning wont happen like 'Bloods uniting with Cryps'
I gotta 'New-DIss', You stink and it sticks to you, like 'Glued-SHit'
You claim im 'New-to-This', you 'clue-less', but wait.. arent you the one thats 'Crew-less'?
^^reply nigga ~1~ uppin for feedback

[A2Z]

this is reasily ya best drop, and thanx for changing the red color

[redragon]

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[snap]

hot spit dragon..wsh i kould praise....lol PEACE

[redragon]

uppin********************************************* *******************************~1~

[DixonButts]

good werdplay

but imm a critic, and ima break this string of love

do you know what half those werds to werdplayed meens?

savage factions?

ravage actions? so you trash, and violently pummel actions huh?

wow, ur the first one////

theres more, but ill just leave it at that

[LunkHead]

nice lil drop there. good diss. had some real good wordplay. the only thing is...who were you dissin? it said smokey somethin as the title but you were sayin sem alot so i got kinda lost........but yea..nice drop

[redragon]

there ws some typo's man*********************************************** ************************************************** ****

[LunkHead]

ok...i understand...............could you peep out my shit


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=55645

thanks man

[redragon]

alright,will do later********************************************* ************************************************** ******~1~

[Conflict]

dawg that shit was tight, your opener n everything was consistant wit good punches

[redragon]

^^^good looks fam,thanks for the feedback ~1~*********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ********