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Disruptive
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im just shaking off my rust son, so dont get mad if i leave ya for dead
i need to show some form, so i'll raise the bar, right through ya head
Aurah's a green head, dope? nah, n i cant even give him the herb label
coz he lettuce in on his secret, that he's just a fuckin vegetable!
you think this'll be a close battle? DUDE get the fuck out you lame dick
but your right, you are a good match, that catches fire n flops quick!
n i know ya sex life's a joke, you aint got no game, so try n shake it
coz it's said "loves a funny little thing",
.......................................n i heard so's what you have to make it
but on the real, i dont know who the fuck you are, but kid dig
i bet ya concepts are like the black & white days,
..............................................n they'll go PERFECTLY with ya sig
everyone jeers this fake phuk, have decency bitch accept you suck
should have a fair, with those lines u havent been crooked enough
^fagget ass lil nigga, sir preme? theres no way you merkin in text
& we have no doubt in your talent <-- since you dont have any yet
respect me dude, my Aurah could kill....it could deform you at will
but i take it easy on pussies, at least when they dont have any skill
guess you luck'd out, i'm not tryna drill ya hopes & dreams & shyt
but if i was ur bitch i'd hit n' run away too, after that quickie bitch
ya aint shyt, i laugh at lames...a shame, u could never smile back
& fuck hittin me with the right line......i'll BEAT ya fag ass for that
simplistic.
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Disruptive
im just shaking off my rust son, so dont get mad if i leave ya for dead
i need to show some form, so i'll raise the bar, right through ya head
(nah)
Aurah's a green head, dope? nah, n i cant even give him the herb label
coz he lettuce in on his secret, that he's just a fuckin vegetable!
(ehhh okay)
you think this'll be a close battle? DUDE get the fuck out you lame dick
but your right, you are a good match, that catches fire n flops quick!
(lol aiight)
n i know ya sex life's a joke, you aint got no game, so try n shake it
coz it's said "loves a funny little thing",
.......................................n i heard so's what you have to make it
(ummmmm)
but on the real, i dont know who the fuck you are, but kid dig
i bet ya concepts are like the black & white days,
..............................................n they'll go PERFECTLY with ya sig
(nah)
Aura
everyone jeers this fake phuk, have decency bitch accept you suck
should have a fair, with those lines u havent been crooked enough
(nah)
^fagget ass lil nigga, sir preme? theres no way you merkin in text
& we have no doubt in your talent <-- since you dont have any yet
(nah)
respect me dude, my Aurah could kill....it could deform you at will
but i take it easy on pussies, at least when they dont have any skill
(not really feelin it man)
guess you luck'd out, i'm not tryna drill ya hopes & dreams & shyt
but if i was ur bitch i'd hit n' run away too, after that quickie bitch
(ummm no)
ya aint shyt, i laugh at lames...a shame, u could never smile back
& fuck hittin me with the right line......i'll BEAT ya fag ass for that
(nah)
simplistic.
ehhh i give this to disruptive atleast he had some half decent punches in there... aura i really couldn't feel your verse fam you just need to come harder but its okay practice and get better. disruptive you need work to but you did enough to get the W
Disruptive - GMV
ThE Mule
"I'm everything.. controversial, underground, gangsta rap slash commercial"
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im just shaking off my rust son, so dont get mad if i leave ya for dead
i need to show some form, so i'll raise the bar, right through ya head
Decent
Aurah's a green head, dope? nah, n i cant even give him the herb label
coz he lettuce in on his secret, that he's just a fuckin vegetable!
Lame wordplay, but decent
you think this'll be a close battle? DUDE get the fuck out you lame dick
but your right, you are a good match, that catches fire n flops quick!
LOL
n i know ya sex life's a joke, you aint got no game, so try n shake it
coz it's said "loves a funny little thing",
.......................................n i heard so's what you have to make it
PWNED
but on the real, i dont know who the fuck you are, but kid dig
i bet ya concepts are like the black & white days,
..............................................n they'll go PERFECTLY with ya sig
Decent
This was an alright verse...a little above average.
vs.
everyone jeers this fake phuk, have decency bitch accept you suck
should have a fair, with those lines u havent been crooked enough
WHAT?
^fagget ass lil nigga, sir preme? theres no way you merkin in text
& we have no doubt in your talent <-- since you dont have any yet
Forced rhyme, but decent punch
respect me dude, my Aurah could kill....it could deform you at will
but i take it easy on pussies, at least when they dont have any skill
Nah
guess you luck'd out, i'm not tryna drill ya hopes & dreams & shyt
but if i was ur bitch i'd hit n' run away too, after that quickie bitch
Negative
ya aint shyt, i laugh at lames...a shame, u could never smile back
& fuck hittin me with the right line......i'll BEAT ya fag ass for that
Nope
Ehhish verse. 1 decent line...the rest played or terrible. Work on it.
v/Disruptive for consistency
Wu-Tang Forever
Nothing Was The Same
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you think this'll be a close battle? DUDE get the fuck out you lame dick
but your right, you are a good match, that catches fire n flops quick!
Vs. nothing
blah battle both of you came with lots of played and shitty lines dis came with the stronger verse period aurora elevate go read the LLL or somthing
V.Dis
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Pretty mild battle...Dis>>you came pretty decent, you had some firm punches, and ya structure and wordplay was on point as well...Aurah>>in the beginning of your verse, it had appeared that you had this won, but after ya intro, ya flow started to diminish...ur lines got weaker as the flow went on...so for above reasons, my vote goes to Disruptive....v/Dis..
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up #2 .
#3.
im just shaking off my rust son, so dont get mad if i leave ya for dead
i need to show some form, so i'll raise the bar, right through ya head
Decent
Aurah's a green head, dope? nah, n i cant even give him the herb label
coz he lettuce in on his secret, that he's just a fuckin vegetable!
nah
you think this'll be a close battle? DUDE get the fuck out you lame dick
but your right, you are a good match, that catches fire n flops quick!
ok
n i know ya sex life's a joke, you aint got no game, so try n shake it
coz it's said "loves a funny little thing",
.......................................n i heard so's what you have to make it
lol cool.
but on the real, i dont know who the fuck you are, but kid dig
i bet ya concepts are like the black & white days,
..............................................n they'll go PERFECTLY with ya sig
weak
decent verse here, had some good concepts goin, keep battlin.
vs.
everyone jeers this fake phuk, have decency bitch accept you suck
should have a fair, with those lines u havent been crooked enough
the fuck did you just say?
^fagget ass lil nigga, sir preme? theres no way you merkin in text
& we have no doubt in your talent <-- since you dont have any yet
played
respect me dude, my Aurah could kill....it could deform you at will
but i take it easy on pussies, at least when they dont have any skill
weak
guess you luck'd out, i'm not tryna drill ya hopes & dreams & shyt
but if i was ur bitch i'd hit n' run away too, after that quickie bitch
No
ya aint shyt, i laugh at lames...a shame, u could never smile back
& fuck hittin me with the right line......i'll BEAT ya fag ass for that
statement
Weak verse here, some of ur concepts were played followed by bad wording, try more on wording after you know whats played.
v/Disruptive
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