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    .Exposure.

    No other has done what i've done in my years of droppin' this
    But my main frame was to remain sane, dont fear apocaylpse
    Can't see clear, the dominance in the people have passed on
    Man's now penetrated with vile shit like its Evil with strap-ons
    While praying on myself, to make it thru fakeness and all that
    There's some points where humanity'll be safe if we fall back
    But every race i've known is 2 proud to let their guards down
    But even Pride's a sin, so we could all just forget its hard, now
    Theres not a doubt, that theres hypocrisy within a mindstate
    But contradictions are only based if it'll cringe the crime rates
    No other person really lives it, cus it all depends on wise takes
    On how the human race is movin' inside percents of fine space
    Could there be a reason to why establishment is lost in debt
    When all the land you've owned is adequate to start respect
    Seems as if money makes us all revolt in every constant step
    When everything we say is charged back as a cost of death

    Exposure, and pain, its the same example
    Of explainin' babble, that'll change a battle
    No one - Really cares on the messes God has left
    But now - Even our own soul's at loss of breath

    Stop this mess, no one will ever Pay-Mind to Listen
    THe Same Kind of bitches that Hate Eyes with vision
    Its Plain, I'm a glitch, With the mind of a saint
    And Life Lived can't be spelled without DIE in its name

    They tell us to pay forward, ignore pain to the upmost
    Insane torture, Gamblin' life is now made to be up close
    Extinction is long over due, but no one's waitin' demise
    Even some elders are tired, and too damn lazy to die
    Its crazy, but life has no limits, and some surpasses all
    When caskets fall, it opens, all you see is cash from ya'll
    Some acid vaults, and capsules to deteriorate migraines
    Hidden cameras in pills prescripted to investigate my pains
    It's been told, that the world will soon lose its Last Esteem
    When a man was killed in corruption just for Having Dreams
    Fast, it seems, but even some others try to go in a rush
    A man shot in public, and still no one knows who it was
    Crazy ain't it? How it all gathers up in the tapes, to view it
    when the nation gets hit, it never reveals scrapes n bruises
    My aim is useless, cause no one will ever notice a teenage
    Thinkin' I'm just a cliche' of a person, "this is only a replay"

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    Re: .Exposure.

    Damn. I thought this was a powerful drop dawg. I love how you used
    "It's been told, that the world will soon lose its Last Esteem
    When a man was killed in corruption just for Having Dreams"
    Even the ending had me wanting more.

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    Yeah, you had an expressive flow on this, nice array of multies, and ya` topic was great. you laid down some shit most people wish they can do, that lyrical drop, props for this. Ima` give it a 9/10. Holla`.

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    nice 2 starting lines....
    some of the multi rhymes seemed a bit forced as they say towards the middle of the first verse and possibly a couple other places........


    seems you had a good transition of lines which helped the flow be something

    so yeah cool piece


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    Re: .Exposure.

    thnx for the feeds ... most respect to ya'll

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    Re: .Exposure.

    more feedz plz
    yea.

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    Re: .Exposure.

    up....
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    WoRD^
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    Re: .Exposure.

    I liked it, nice work.

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    Re: .Exposure.

    pffft...good piece getting slept on..

    RiSE
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    Re: .Exposure.

    nice shit here some nice multi rhymes and some very descent wording and ovab used in this...descriptive yet conservative with its detailing like not telling too much til later...sorta like savouring the taste lol... nice drop though man seriously keep writing DUDE!......

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    Re: .Exposure.

    nice, this piece had a pretty vivid message here. the corruption of our government and how our life is manipulated by how and what people take for granite. the flow was on point thruout this, the emotion was outgoing, i liked the dreams line, that was the highlight.. some real knowledge here.
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    Good Ups to ya'll .....
    ... hope to get some more feed
    yea.

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    UP....on feeds..drop a link and i'll get bacc to it..
    str8 piece tho
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