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Thread: Obviously Misused Pride

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    Obviously Misused Pride

    Obviously Misused Pride
    By: Nash



    effortless pride consumes my confidence
    driven life that I despise. ashamed of my
    wrong doings... and so my eyes hide
    from the people we kill, or the reasons
    for a roof above my family's hide.
    we are men to our people, mice to others
    our tactics? lethal, relentless...
    and we're smothered by the carcases.
    but not physically, only by guilt -
    enough of it to build monuments.
    nothing's nice about this job, but some
    like it and just off... any one that they
    see coming our way when we're fighting
    all day in an array of blood covered
    bodies. then we burn the dead and go
    on to torture the rest... my head hurts.
    no body cares though, and if I object
    I'll be sent to death or worse...
    the best I have is prayer
    and so I'll use it [our enemy's tool]:
    father please forgive us...

    for we know just what we do.
    I'm sorry we follow an evil man
    and slaugher all these jews.
    please forever stain our hands
    inside the blood they give for you.
    time will tell, and I pray it will...
    and I pray this is a war we'll lose.
    my life is all I have to give, so
    I'll hold my head down... and continue
    to switch this cigar full of stress
    with this bible placed under my pillow
    where I regret to say it's misused.

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    Re: Obviously Misused Pride

    this was a awesome read man... i loved how it was subtle then it hit with a nice push of confidence in wording and the effort with emotion i felt nicely dude... the words portrayed in here was just absolutely brute in the line of creativity man... your words stood out in your own form of deliberance.... great job cry

    we are men to our people, mice to others
    our tactics? lethal, relentless...
    and we're smothered by the carcases.
    but not physically, only by guilt -
    enough of it to build monuments.
    nothing's nice about this job, but some
    like it and just off... any one that they
    see coming our way when we're fighting
    all day in an array of blood covered
    bodies. then we burn the dead and go
    on to torture the rest... my head hurts.
    no body cares though, and if I object
    I'll be sent to death or worse...
    the best I have is prayer
    and so I'll use it [our enemy's tool]:
    father please forgive us...
    for we know just what we do.
    I'm sorry we follow an evil man
    and slaugher all these jews.
    please forever stain our hands
    inside the blood they give for you.
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