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    Growing Pains

    Im Feelin' Filthy , Cuz My Clouthes Are Crusty
    My Dog Is With Me , Even He Dont Trust~Me
    Its Hard To Sleep, Cuz The Ground Aint Comfy
    N I've Been Broke 4 Days, No Wonder We Hungry


    Quarter To The Age Of Me Being Legal
    I Was Raisin' Myself An Bein' A Heven
    If Drinkin' n Smokin' Wasnt Part Of My Day...
    I'd Be Sleepin' Or F*ckin, Its Hard To Say

    Jokes Aside, I Nervously Swallow My Pride
    Im Bout To Be A Father, Call Me A Dad
    Its Gon' Be My First One, I Aint Gon' Trip
    Im Scared As Fuck Cuz Im New As This Shit

    Should I make Him Listen To Explictly Sensored?
    Naw, As Long As He Dont Get A Crimminal Record
    Blaze a Cigar So That He Never Touch's A Smoke?
    Naw, Give Um.A.Blunt.n.Make.Um.Laugh.While.He.Chokes

    I Clash With Her Folks, Well Really It Aint Bad
    Her Moms Is Jokes, But I Wont Bring Up Her Dad
    We All Got Opinions, These Are Just Mine
    Id Listen To Yours But Its The Blind Leadin Blind



    To Be Continued


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-356328p2.html

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-356374.html
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    Re: Growing Pains

    uppin
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    Re: Growing Pains

    this piece really didnt seem to interest me. its needs a little work. the chorus really sucked. you'd be better off taking it out.

    If Drinkin' n Smokin' Wasnt Part Of My Day...
    I'd Be Sleepin' Or F*ckin, Its Hard To Say

    this bar was alright...

    id say overall its not so bad. it just needs to be touched up, feel me? ill be keepin an eye out, for more... you just keep doin your thing.

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    Re: Growing Pains

    thx ...................... Uppin
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    Re: Growing Pains

    that many veiws no advice
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    Re: Growing Pains

    Still Lookin' For Feed Please???

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