9mm Vs Ambiguous

[9 Millimeter]

~Rules~
1.15 lines
2.no hate votes
3.no dickriders
4.u spit first
5. 1 round

[9 Millimeter]

check in and i'll spit afta u
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[Axe]

I just checked my PM's... i said 10 lines MAX in bitch slapped... i ain't battling to these rules.
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[9 Millimeter]

new rules
~Rules~
1.10 lines
2.no hate votes
3.no dickriders
4.u spit first
5. 1 round
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[Axe]

Aite... i'm down, this is my check in, i'll spit in a bit
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[9 Millimeter]

coo i'll spit afta u
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[Axe]

Sorry for taking so long... here's my verse.

9 Millimeter… must be referin’ to his manhood’s size, he’ll meet his demise, if-he-tries-to-act-wise/
He acts like he’s spreadin’-girls-thighs, well SURPRISE… he’s messin with priests, tryin’ to get “baptized”/

“We “spit” together, we “rise” together”… homosexual fantasies is what his crew, really-wants-to-explore/
On the real, your verse is “tite”… like triple-XL shirts on anorexic whores, his verse makes sense, like a cripple on a dance floor/

Kid couldn’t “drop-a-nice-verse” if it was laced with soap, him winning this battle… my computer freezin’ is his only hope/
Crack-kills… you dope, why don’t you two go and elope, nine is already past his “peak”, his verse seems like it was written on a downward slope/

Your whack verse gets read quickly like the alphabet’s, “L-M-N-O-P”, my words have this fag “shaking”… more than Muhammad Ali/
Let’s agree to disagree, I could hang you from a tree to make you scream like a banshee… maybe then, you’ll sound like a real emcee/

He’s strapped with “thermostats”… so he says he’s “bringing-the-heat”, trick or treat, either way you’ll get “beat-like-meat” and left shredded like wheat/
Like singing acapella, your verse is “off-beat”, messin’ with me you, better retreat or face another defeat, get “paved” like streets, if you think you elite/

[AssassinMC]

nice drop you could u hit my battle up against xtreme flow. i'll come back and vote when 9 drops aight thanx

[Axe]

You couldn't have read that in a minute... please don't freepost, i'll check out your battle right now............................................... ....

[Axe]

You gonna drop or what... i see that you're online, you've had enough time to prewrite... let's go.
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[9 Millimeter]

i bout to spit
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[9 Millimeter]

This kids ryme was cold but now his ice gone thin,my flows throw blows that make this kids chest cave in/1
Put chains on ya hands and feet and make u my new slave,bury 20 feet deep and then piss on ya grave/2
My dogs wanna battle too but they can have whats left,punches are so hard they'll make u lose ya breath/3
My flows come wit forces more powerful than floods,slice ur neck from ear to ear and watch u drown in your blood/4
Any signs of past wins should be evaporated,put ur head on the chop block and watch u be decapotated/5
Im comin out wit my rymes so playa dont trip,swell this kids whole face up bigger than jay-z's lip/6
This kids got game but the games too old,couldnt beat 9mm's game if i gave him the code/7
Spit rymes too big for this kids comprehension,make this kid beat his meat to relieve most of his tension/8
Flow wit rymes that gives sickness and is known to kill,kick this man while he's down and break his will/9
The battle is officially over with the win i just gained,leave this kid dumbfounded wit his record blood stained/10

[Axe]

It took you 19 hours plus to spit... and you still couldn't spell words right... and you fed off my "beat like meat" line, man that ain't cool, i thought someone with your record would spit soon, not 19 hours later, whatever, let's get some votes.

[MiCsYcKlE]

I thought ambigous was the better man here
better flow
bettr dissing
beter wordplay and mutli'a he burned ir up here
good battle


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67356

[~HoTTie~]

he spits late....and losses..wut else could go wrong...lol j/k but ur verse was iight 9mm.....AMBIGUOUS...newbie on fire...u had everythign in this battle..

punches...hot
wordplay...yup ill
multi's...i'd like to see more
complexity..it was definately there....

overall u good.... get at me on aim or yim or damn something one day so i can holla at u..my s/n are in my profile.holla