DAWWWG!!!, This piece is the shit!~!!! You will most definately be gettin an open mic HOF award for this and if not, these niggas don't know excellent writing when the see it...
The multis were waaaaay on point as they weren't just thrown out there without meaning. They tie the entire story together beautifully.. You gotta love the way you told it from your perspective but yet seemed to capture the whole vibe of what "was" going on in the ring.. It was quite amazing, I felt like I was watchin a title fight on TV.
Bar, you've just officially earned my respect!
^not that you hadn't before, but this piece was OFFICIAL..
Vocab= 8
Structure= 9
Flow= 10
Entertainment= 11> lol seriously(well as serious as possible on a scale of 1 to 10)
Congrats on the OM HOF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!