no crew
no hate
10 lines
i'll spit first
Doctor_J
FreestyleKing937
no crew
no hate
10 lines
i'll spit first
I'm back on the scene, freestyle king
Brand new piece, same byzentine
I'm still sippin lean, I'm still watchin "Scream"
I love wearin platinum, but my favorite color's green~lil flip
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yo i'ma raw tha sickest emcee//
tha chances of him beatin me is like shaq hittin a three//
yo gay like micheal jackson//
i'm a winner like john paxson//
u need a doctor cause u got aids//
my rhymes are tighter than ludacris's braids//
i'm like lil flip a freestyle king//
u suck a rappin bad so u need to sing//
u need to elavate cause ur not ready for tha heat//
i'll eat ur newbie ass like ur freshmeat//
I'm back on the scene, freestyle king
Brand new piece, same byzentine
I'm still sippin lean, I'm still watchin "Scream"
I love wearin platinum, but my favorite color's green~lil flip
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ur wack kid don't step 2 me thinkin u hard
lil faggot i'll drop my shit in like 15 min
at the moment ur mom is suckin me up
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Look At This Herb This Cat Obvoiously lost-his-mind,
Cuz I Been Dunkin-More-Nigga Then Dunkin-Hines//1
This Nigga-Elevated And His Rhymes Are Still-Elementary,
My Rhyme-Is-More-Painful Then Gettin Raped In Da Penitentary//2
Ur Lines Couldn't-Be-Ill Even If U Laced-Em-Wit-Anthrax,
U A Stupid Bitch On Ur Period So Go Change-Ur-Tampax//3
Ur Rhymes Is Extremely-Dull... Like kool-aid Wit-No-Taste,
Like Hanson On Scary Movie 2... U Use Ur Toungue To Baste//4
Ur Rhymes Couldn't Be "Complex" Even If U Was "Marc Ecko",
Ur Verse Is "Completley-Harmless" AS If U Was A Gecko//5
iight uppin 4 votes
^^you were supposed to write a verse for a battle, not a poem.Originally posted by FreestyleKing937
yo i'ma raw tha sickest emcee//
tha chances of him beatin me is like shaq hittin a three//
yo gay like micheal jackson//
i'm a winner like john paxson//
u need a doctor cause u got aids//
my rhymes are tighter than ludacris's braids//
i'm like lil flip a freestyle king//
u suck a rappin bad so u need to sing//
u need to elavate cause ur not ready for tha heat//
i'll eat ur newbie ass like ur freshmeat//
Vote=doctor J
better flow punches and wordplay
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73864
^^hit this up
Go Red Wings
lol thanx
uppin 4 sum more votes
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once i get 100, ima come n vote for doctor j... better punches and wordplay...
hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...8%3D%3D%3D%3DD
Uppin 4 sum votes
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Uppin 4 sum votes
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j nigga u got this wit ease
ur punches was hot
nice structure
ok flow but better than FK
nice battle nigga
^^^
thanx 4 voting
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uppin 4 sum more votes
Dr J ........... takes it .......... his verse was tight enought to win .........FSK , you had some good lines , but dey were too short , and it did kinda of look like apoem instead of a spit ........ Just use your punches in a longer verse and you should be aiight.
Vote- Dr. J
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73771
Hit dis up , if you can ........... Honest Votes only
Peace
CE
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I rip elemental words, spit Oriental Proverbs , Merk is a verb I use Be-Cause
I sippa da finest wines , busta da illest rythmes ,Imma an MC-Sacker with no flaws
FREE AGENT AND WILLING TO RUMBLE !!!
Make Sure To Poll Vote
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I'm back on the scene, freestyle king
Brand new piece, same byzentine
I'm still sippin lean, I'm still watchin "Scream"
I love wearin platinum, but my favorite color's green~lil flip
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