LLL Season 11: Week 7
Current champion: Barcotic
Standard rules apply (found in the LLL Office).
Check in by Wednesday.
Drop by Friday, 11:59 PM (Eastern).
16 line minimum.
Vote on atleast 5 battles.
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Good luck.
again? okay old man.
we buttin heads AGAIN? fuck that, I'll knock ya out n' break PAST your grill
I'm only getting born a SECOND time to watch your mom down the day after pill
he keeps his head up to known folks, n' I'm about fed up with joe blow
but if I tried gettin 'em to cut the crap then this would end up a no show
n' I seen ya wack ID comments, now you're overdosing on weak bars n' booze
didn't wanna be in a room with poor dirty people, n' yet here WE are with you
yeah he's crazy alright.. n' even tho I have the drop on this dumb bitch
I'll step back, 'cuz B's got a short fuse.. attatched to the bomb on his stomach
gotta admit, I'm a little edgy - so I'll just call 'em a partial faggot
'cuz I know born's nothing to fuck with.. is only his martial status
everyone get your money back cuz I ain't breakin, fuck his feeble abrasions
the only alphabet here.. <-- is that B comes before C in that single occassion
fuck the movies.. he may have BEEN good, but this "boss" has hardly shook me
'cuz I know Born to Kill's a classic.. that just fell off as hard as Woody
grusome as fuck, this was a rap n' I ripped you enough to turn dudes
while droppin for three matches this week, n' not needing ONE to burn you
Last edited by Cody Nash; August 21st, 2009 at 05:41 AM
Fighting again? Let's end it, what I predict always comes true...
I thought we'd get along...winded, boring ass rhyme outta you.
Your lines look frail and weak, though they ain't attractive, C...
But they still display more pussy than a Playboy Mansion Party.
I'm lazy, but still killed you and hurt ya world, dipshit...
I just rose to the occasion...
Took one off ya coffin and charmed the pants off ya girl with it.
And trust I hit that till she grunt, showed the pig ain't no purist...
In fact, she razorback in such an arch, St. Louis is losing tourists.
Gonna make you live up to ya name, we'll all see C blubber...
So much it'll add chins #3 & 4 to $pit's face on his CD cover.
And about 3 & 4, be proud of ya new record, even though it dived...
Cuz it'll be the closest you've been to counting all the way to five.
Ya verses take you nowhere, bad mileage in em, cuz ya rhyme poor...
Bitch, those are a bunch of clunkers Obama wouldn't pay a dime for!
Movies explain why ya rhyme lame, it’s like ya missing ya fuckin mind…
Ya creative process craves more brains than Scarecrow & zombies combined.
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n' I seen ya wack ID comments, now you're overdosing on weak bars n' booze
didn't wanna be in a room with poor dirty people, n' yet here WE are with you
everyone get your money back cuz I ain't breakin, fuck his feeble abrasions
the only alphabet here.. <-- is that B comes before C in that single occassion
vs.
Fighting again? Let's end it, what I predict always comes true...
I thought we'd get along...winded, boring ass rhyme outta you.
And trust I hit that till she grunt, showed the pig ain't no purist...
In fact, she razorback in such an arch, St. Louis is losing tourists.
Gonna make you live up to ya name, we'll all see C blubber...
So much it'll add chins #3 & 4 to $pit's face on his CD cover.
Ya verses take you nowhere, bad mileage in em, cuz ya rhyme poor...
Bitch, those are a bunch of clunkers Obama wouldn't pay a dime for!
V/B
barely, just 2 more quotation. 4 to 2. both had some dope shit, C was more basic wiht the alphabet punch and cut the crap and the sort of punchline flips on cliched phrases that everyone in LLL seems to do all the time i noticed but some of em are cool occasionaly. i'd say born had more personals. decent battle.
cry -
we buttin heads AGAIN? fuck that, I'll knock ya out n' break PAST your grill
I'm only getting born a SECOND time to watch your mom down the day after pill
- nice. cool to see a fresh born punch. hard to do.
he keeps his head up to known folks, n' I'm about fed up with joe blow
but if I tried gettin 'em to cut the crap then this would end up a no show
- heh straight.
n' I seen ya wack ID comments, now you're overdosing on weak bars n' booze
didn't wanna be in a room with poor dirty people, n' yet here WE are with you
- ehhh
yeah he's crazy alright.. n' even tho I have the drop on this dumb bitch
I'll step back, 'cuz B's got a short fuse.. attatched to the bomb on his stomach
- kinda saw this coming, but decent.
gotta admit, I'm a little edgy - so I'll just call 'em a partial faggot
'cuz I know born's nothing to fuck with.. is only his martial status
- haha
everyone get your money back cuz I ain't breakin, fuck his feeble abrasions
the only alphabet here.. <-- is that B comes before C in that single occassion
- wasnt feelin it.
fuck the movies.. he may have BEEN good, but this "boss" has hardly shook me
'cuz I know Born to Kill's a classic.. that just fell off as hard as Woody
- nah.
grusome as fuck, this was a rap n' I ripped you enough to turn dudes
while droppin for three matches this week, n' not needing ONE to burn you
- overdone concept, but this was actually okay.
vs
born -
Fighting again? Let's end it, what I predict always comes true...
I thought we'd get along...winded, boring ass rhyme outta you.
- simple, but decent. good humor.
Your lines look frail and weak, though they ain't attractive, C...
But they still display more pussy than a Playboy Mansion Party.
- eh nah.
I'm lazy, but still killed you and hurt ya world, dipshit...
I just rose to the occasion...
Took one off ya coffin and charmed the pants off ya girl with it.
- wording's a little weird, but pretty cool.
And trust I hit that till she grunt, showed the pig ain't no purist...
In fact, she razorback in such an arch, St. Louis is losing tourists.
- lol
Gonna make you live up to ya name, we'll all see C blubber...
So much it'll add chins #3 & 4 to $pit's face on his CD cover.
- funny, but didnt do much to cry.
And about 3 & 4, be proud of ya new record, even though it dived...
Cuz it'll be the closest you've been to counting all the way to five.
- nah man.
Ya verses take you nowhere, bad mileage in em, cuz ya rhyme poor...
Bitch, those are a bunch of clunkers Obama wouldn't pay a dime for!
- hmm ok
Movies explain why ya rhyme lame, it’s like ya missing ya fuckin mind…
Ya creative process craves more brains than Scarecrow & zombies combined.
- i get it. was ok i guess. didnt do much for me.
kinda a weird battle. i dont think either were that consistent, but they both had highlights. cry started off strong, ended kinda iffy.. while born was kinda roller coaster-ish .. hit n miss. imo, i think cry edged this one out. his standout lines were better than borns, and i felt he had a few more than born. pretty decent read, just felt cry was a lil more creative.. had a bit more harshness to win it. gl.
v. cry
we buttin heads AGAIN? fuck that, I'll knock ya out n' break PAST your grill
I'm only getting born a SECOND time to watch your mom down the day after pill
gotta admit, I'm a little edgy - so I'll just call 'em a partial faggot
'cuz I know born's nothing to fuck with.. is only his martial status
vs.
Fighting again? Let's end it, what I predict always comes true...
I thought we'd get along...winded, boring ass rhyme outta you.
Movies explain why ya rhyme lame, it’s like ya missing ya fuckin mind…
Ya creative process craves more brains than Scarecrow & zombies combined
It's pretty close..
I'd vote tie, but I must pick some one here...
v/born
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we buttin heads AGAIN? fuck that, I'll knock ya out n' break PAST your grill
I'm only getting born a SECOND time to watch your mom down the day after pill
yeah he's crazy alright.. n' even tho I have the drop on this dumb bitch
I'll step back, 'cuz B's got a short fuse.. attatched to the bomb on his stomach
gotta admit, I'm a little edgy - so I'll just call 'em a partial faggot
'cuz I know born's nothing to fuck with.. is only his martial status
vs.
I'm lazy, but still killed you and hurt ya world, dipshit...
I just rose to the occasion...
Took one off ya coffin and charmed the pants off ya girl with it.
And trust I hit that till she grunt, showed the pig ain't no purist...
In fact, she razorback in such an arch, St. Louis is losing tourists.
Ya verses take you nowhere, bad mileage in em, cuz ya rhyme poor...
Bitch, those are a bunch of clunkers Obama wouldn't pay a dime for!
Close battle, lots of ups and downs. Cry had the line of the battle with his opener, that Born nameplay he had was pretty fresh and the best I ever seen on him. The rest was a lil shaky tho, the other 2 lines i quoted were okay but there were a few lines like the cut the crap and match things that I thought were really played n' brought the verse down. Born had some decent lines and the clunkers shit i was feelin' a lot especially. But then again, he also had some lines that made me go ehhhhh like the count to 5 shit. I dunno, I got Born here for bein' a lil more consistent. Cry I think u just needed one more line like that opener of urs.
Vote - Born
he keeps his head up to known folks, n' I'm about fed up with joe blow
but if I tried gettin 'em to cut the crap then this would end up a no show
yeah he's crazy alright.. n' even tho I have the drop on this dumb bitch
I'll step back, 'cuz B's got a short fuse.. attatched to the bomb on his stomach
gotta admit, I'm a little edgy - so I'll just call 'em a partial faggot
'cuz I know born's nothing to fuck with.. is only his martial status
vs.
Fighting again? Let's end it, what I predict always comes true...
I thought we'd get along...winded, boring ass rhyme outta you.
I'm lazy, but still killed you and hurt ya world, dipshit...
I just rose to the occasion...
Took one off ya coffin and charmed the pants off ya girl with it.
Movies explain why ya rhyme lame, it’s like ya missing ya fuckin mind…
Ya creative process craves more brains than Scarecrow & zombies combined.
Not the best battle, it was decent though, some cool material from both, but also some really bad bars. I gotta give this to Born though..i almost didn't quote the marital one from Cry, and the one's i quoted from born had more sting imo.
Vote - Born.
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we buttin heads AGAIN? fuck that, I'll knock ya out n' break PAST your grill
I'm only getting born a SECOND time to watch your mom down the day after pill
gotta admit, I'm a little edgy - so I'll just call 'em a partial faggot
'cuz I know born's nothing to fuck with.. is only his martial status
Vs.
Fighting again? Let's end it, what I predict always comes true...
I thought we'd get along...winded, boring ass rhyme outta you.
Movies explain why ya rhyme lame, it’s like ya missing ya fuckin mind…
Ya creative process craves more brains than Scarecrow & zombies combined
Rhis was really close for me though Borns quotables are just slightly stronger... along line was probably LOTB, flip was nice. decent verses from both though.
v/ Born To Kill
Fighting again? Let's end it, what I predict always comes true...
I thought we'd get along...winded, boring ass rhyme outta you.
I'm lazy, but still killed you and hurt ya world, dipshit...
I just rose to the occasion...
Took one off ya coffin and charmed the pants off ya girl with it.
Gonna make you live up to ya name, we'll all see C blubber...
So much it'll add chins #3 & 4 to $pit's face on his CD cover.
vs
he keeps his head up to known folks, n' I'm about fed up with joe blow
but if I tried gettin 'em to cut the crap then this would end up a no show
born was just more consistent. nothing overtly bad on either side.
v/ btk
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Born wins, Cry loses....
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