Sn00pIt vs Text Emcee

[Rapstyles]

10 lines house rules
due in 1 hour n 30 mins..
No hate votes
and def no feeding...

Check.

[Sn00pIt]

check

[Rapstyles]

I'm taking a shower, I'll drop when I get out.

[Sn00pIt]

text emcee, wanna battle me?/
..we'll see, whether he, is able to--or need, i say she?/
..cause judging from his avvy, he's either a girl--or a transvestite gay as Adam Lambert's last CD/
he oughta be unique though, he's trademarked/
..but that's copyright infringement--we already got the worst rapper out there, name remarked/
..as vanilla ice, he won't set nothin on fire, firemen don't panic, he ain't even sparked/
and he got a sig showin' a guy with a gas mask/
..goddamn he must smell if they need that damn task/
force, to go and get him oughta this mud hole, he's stuck in/
..and yeah I'm talking about that hoe, he's fuck-in'/

[Sn00pIt]

G'luck to you.
I'ma leave now, drop when you're back.

[Rapstyles]

Dogs gay.. Literally.. Hittin it in the back of a hippy van with other dudes.. Faggot stoner
Cause the only time Snoop is gettin some action..? Is when he get Shaggy with his owner..
You suck dawg, your vagrider even says.. You're rhymes are fucking hollow
And when it comes to you spittin hot..?
You get smacked in the face and told to swallow..
From Germany, things are done differently as the US.. But I know one things the same
Cause when he's done battlin'.. The only thing he'll be spittin'.. is an L'S game..
Its like the voting panel were judges and you just layed a verse that wasn't hot..
Cause ALL the judges will be holdin up double 0's after seein' them whack drops..
Just give up now, I mean you haven't even dropped yet and I know that you suck...
Just walk away...
With your hand in your pocket yellin'.. Bitch I don't give a fuck.. (when u really do)

If u don't get some stuff, look in "about me".. 

[Rapstyles]

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[The Incredible Hulk]

text emcee, wanna battle me?/
..we'll see, whether he, is able to--or need, i say she?/
..cause judging from his avvy, he's either a girl--or a transvestite gay as Adam Lambert's last CD/
6/10
he oughta be unique though, he's trademarked/
..but that's copyright infringement--we already got the worst rapper out there, name remarked/
6/10
..as vanilla ice, he won't set nothin on fire, firemen don't panic, he ain't even sparked/
and he got a sig showin' a guy with a gas mask/
..goddamn he must smell if they need that damn task/
4/10
force, to go and get him oughta this mud hole, he's stuck in/
..and yeah I'm talking about that hoe, he's fuck-in'/
5/10

overall=21/40


Dogs gay.. Literally.. Hittin it in the back of a hippy van with other dudes.. Faggot stoner
Cause the only time Snoop is gettin some action..? Is when he get Shaggy with his owner..
6/10
You suck dawg, your vagrider even says.. You're rhymes are fucking hollow
And when it comes to you spittin hot..?
You get smacked in the face and told to swallow..
5/10
From Germany, things are done differently as the US.. But I know one things the same
Cause when he's done battlin'.. The only thing he'll be spittin'.. is an L'S game..
5/10
Its like the voting panel were judges and you just layed a verse that wasn't hot..
Cause ALL the judges will be holdin up double 0's after seein' them whack drops..
5/10
Just give up now, I mean you haven't even dropped yet and I know that you suck...
Just walk away...
With your hand in your pocket yellin'.. Bitch I don't give a fuck.. (when u really do)
4/10

overall=25/50...

MY VOTE= TEXT EMCEE!!!!

[A. Karpis]

weak battle here


snoop didnt have anything...mumble jumble, stuck in fuck in lines thats dont make sense
same with the gas mask...shit was just off the wall


text atleast thru a punch or 2....

You suck dawg, your vagrider even says.. You're rhymes are fucking hollow
And when it comes to you spittin hot..?
You get smacked in the face and told to swallow..

that was decent at best....played tho

overall text took this with actually knowing the concept of a punch

vote=text

rtf:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...072/index.html

[Rapstyles]

Ups

[Rivalyn]

Nothing


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You suck dawg, your vagrider even says.. You're rhymes are fucking hollow
And when it comes to you spittin hot..?
You get smacked in the face and told to swallow..




Overall: Weak battle, Pretty one sided....snoop learn to direct your punches and make them harder as well, get mroe creative with your strucure and maybeh your verse would turn out better.....text keep elevating

rtf

[KnowP]

RTF: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...124/index.html

nada

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You suck dawg, your vagrider even says.. You're rhymes are fucking hollow
And when it comes to you spittin hot..?
You get smacked in the face and told to swallow..

Snoop, I saw where you were going with a few concepts but your structure and wording was wack. If re-worded, you could have took this one. TE Had one okay bar and the rest was all stretched and punched kinda weak...

v/ Text

[Rapstyles]

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[Martian]

Shit


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You suck dawg, your vagrider even says.. You're rhymes are fucking hollow
And when it comes to you spittin hot..?
You get smacked in the face and told to swallow..

^^pretty Much won it


text i seen better your lines was so stretched i wonder if you done this on purpose cause you knew you was gon win ;/ but fix the stretched lines an hit harder an fix the structure but strong enough to take the win an snoopit work on structure directing punches flow an not stretching out lines but you will get better over time

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