Child Resources

[Extortion]

Come with me young-ins
safely cover plug-ins
stretch the gate
for the stairs to compensate
this is a safety zone
i shall provide a safeness home
provisions of accidents
fires because matches lit
i wish thy neighbor wasnt so dense
dents in the car, football over fence
cautious by all means
i'm leary of mints not fresh, not clean
in good hands i deem
kids must play even when not seen
bring on the health department
house cleaner than a spotless martian
green in the mind, other forces among
outter space is near just years for fun
graduated the adoption course mode
although kids hard to follow like backwards morse code
in my life, this brings on A new dynasty
white with chinese kids bring on the rap-in-these (rapinese=chinese)


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[.Prime.]

eh, it wasn't terrible.i mean I've seen worse. this just didn't have flow and felt like you where just rhyming. nice use of multi's but you really need to work on your flow. just keep it up though man.

[Hoopstown]

Decent, but wasn't really feeling it. Keep working at it.

[Extortion]

thanks man