P.S....People generally learn by experimenting...Than just writing the same ol' shit, if you get me. This is a learning thing for me. I'm not some whack kid, who's going to go platinum like that. It takes determination, and in time...It will come, when I am at my full capabilities...don't judge me now...I'll let you judge me once I'm at that level, where I'm recording. Because, I on't be recording any time soon. Just critique, and write your own rhymes. We cool?