Reap what you sow

[Smiless]

Reap what you sow and sow what you reap
Life's unanswered questions always on repeat
a soul defeated in every which way
begging for someone to come and press play
the silence is loud kind of like mute
pull the plug search for the root

The root of all evil is love....ironic
the most beautiful emotion somewhat demonic
But like fame who doesn't want it
Press record and just let it flow
now play it back its like food for the soul
close your eyes let it soak in
open them, pick up the invisible pen
put it to the pad and let it begin

Reap what you sow and sow what you reap
if your gonna play, play for keeps

[Smiless]

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[Android]

This read to me like a topical but I enjoyed it regardless. There was a pretty good message behind it, maybe could use a little touching up with the phrasing here and there. I especially liked this part;

a soul defeated in every which way
begging for someone to come and press play
the silence is loud kind of like mute
pull the plug search for the root

One thing I did notice however is that the punctuation could use some work. There's not a lot of it to be honest. Anyhow overall it was pretty good and enjoyable. Like I mentioned just touch it up here and there and it'll be gravy. Nice job.