This week we're taking tests in classes so I'll be bored and just writting, but do tell me what needs work. This is mostly about a few of my ex boyfriends all mixed together, then at the end, it's about the most important one, the one I love with all my heart, he is my everything. ^_^

When you look a blood thirsty demon in the eye,
It turns you to ice, making you wanna die.
It’ll thaw you out, but it won’t kill you yet,
You’ll be begging for death, but your time hasn’t come yet.
It drains your soul and enters your mind,
He slows down your thinking and your left behind.
You no longer have a soul so he attacks your heart,
I knew this would happen, I told you not to start.
This demon told you not to listen,
Your blank eyes only glisten.
You don’t give a damn about anyone,
You’ve killed close to a trillion.
You’re numb now, so stop that bull, you feel no pain,
What happened to you? I used to watch as you played in the rain.
As you read this page,
You realize there’s no more rage.
You smile a rare smile,
And I cry as I remember what you’ve done to me it’s cruel and vial.
I curl up and beg for death after you beat me to death,
My arms thrown over my head.
He pulls me to my feet,
I don’t know if I should trust him, then he walks me down the street,
One thing leads to the next and I fall in love,
So now I’m lostinlove

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