Aeral 4-2 Vs. Arch. 3-1 -Vote-

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 11

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be Dqued
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
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[Aeral]

Word.

[The Archetype]

hello kind sir... i'm just checking into the battle to let you know that i will be dropping a verse this week... i regret to tell you that in this verse, i will be degrading you and probably your girlfriend (whether you actually have one or not)... i don't know too much about you and i am far too lazy to read your previous battles, so i may drop similar concepts... but do not fret... i will put a unique twist on it so it will be an interesting read nonetheless...

in the history of text battles, there has been many instances like this one, where one person seems to be the overwhelming favorite to win... but there is always the chance that you will get the upset... that YOU, young Aeral, can be the David to slay the Arch Goliath... with that... i bid you farewell until we get into a textual match of witty fisticuffs... have a wonderful week until then...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...613/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...605/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...601/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...609/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...602/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...603/index.html

[Aeral]

u son of a bitch i thought I WAS UR FAVORITE

lmao... you beat me too much...

arch reachin out to higher powers, cuz theres no denying me this win,
see i would just say "pray to g0d".. but whats to stop him from bodying u again!
You garbage, & its the REAL personals that are provin ya worthless,
"CUZ YOU KNOW YOU SUCK....."
..when ur check in is a more INTERESTING READ than ur whole fucking verse is
you claimin vet status, but homie ur battles have never intrigued,
so congrats on being around forever..
need i remind you its also been THAT long since u champed a league!
retarded fuck, you were never respected, you ain't hot here,
& I get that its a long road to success.. but he still ridin the short bus to top tier
U ain't gettin props queer. joined in '03, yet you managed to stay wack?
He's been around for "So Long, Everybody".. but we all wish he'd UP and just SAY THAT!
ya 3-1 record made me think u were decent. but wow, this faggots helpless
cuz u not making it past THE BIG 3 this week, niggas should call u the celtics!
U talk up a storm. proves this clowns really been dyin ta get slayed,
& he's livin in the past.. that explains why even ur current event punches r played

[The Archetype]

Well...

You were a nobody when you registered. Made the league but I don't know how you got in
Now you're known for making a name for yourself... then becoming completely irrelevant
No one thinks this noob can beat a vet. He's not the upstart to pave the way
You being decent is a Con Aer... w/ no Nic Cage to save the day
His chick is fat as fuck with an average face. She wouldn't get a look from other guys
She'd be on the median... chicks that aren't obese would be on the other side
Don't claim you make music or sell out shows. I can't see those lies ending well
How can we believe you wreck mics? Last week you lost to Mike Wrecka in NBL
You've dropped sub par for 6 weeks. I haven't seen you throw one punch that was crazy
But we know you're the shit... being lit in the bag in your avy
Every time I drop I get an ovation. It's a celebration in each battle I ever wrote
Shit, my verses leave people punching Aer... for dropping that shit he considers dope
So don't claim you're some sort of gangsta pulling bitches. Your tough talk leaves us rolling
You'll never be interested in a Lady, thug... unless she's really some nigga trolling


...blah...

[Chrit.]

You garbage, & its the REAL personals that are provin ya worthless,
"CUZ YOU KNOW YOU SUCK....."
..when ur check in is a more INTERESTING READ than ur whole fucking verse is
U ain't gettin props queer. joined in '03, yet you managed to stay wack?
He's been around for "So Long, Everybody".. but we all wish he'd UP and just SAY THAT!

vs

No one thinks this noob can beat a vet. He's not the upstart to pave the way
You being decent is a Con Aer... w/ no Nic Cage to save the day
His chick is fat as fuck with an average face. She wouldn't get a look from other guys
She'd be on the median... chicks that aren't obese would be on the other side
Every time I drop I get an ovation. It's a celebration in each battle I ever wrote
Shit, my verses leave people punching Aer... for dropping that shit he considers dope

Arch was just more consistent. Aer had some pretty bad misses to go with what I quoted.

v/Arch

[Bongkers]

arch reachin out to higher powers, cuz theres no denying me this win,
see i would just say "pray to g0d".. but whats to stop him from bodying u again!
nice
You garbage, & its the REAL personals that are provin ya worthless,
"CUZ YOU KNOW YOU SUCK....."
..when ur check in is a more INTERESTING READ than ur whole fucking verse is
dope
you claimin vet status, but homie ur battles have never intrigued,
so congrats on being around forever..
need i remind you its also been THAT long since u champed a league!
nice, could have been worded smoother but I'm feelin it
retarded fuck, you were never respected, you ain't hot here,
& I get that its a long road to success.. but he still ridin the short bus to top tier
dunno about this 1 tbh
U ain't gettin props queer. joined in '03, yet you managed to stay wack?
He's been around for "So Long, Everybody".. but we all wish he'd UP and just SAY THAT!
dope
ya 3-1 record made me think u were decent. but wow, this faggots helpless
cuz u not making it past THE BIG 3 this week, niggas should call u the celtics!
decent
U talk up a storm. proves this clowns really been dyin ta get slayed,
& he's livin in the past.. that explains why even ur current event punches r played
dope concept, wording could have been better


You were a nobody when you registered. Made the league but I don't know how you got in
Now you're known for making a name for yourself... then becoming completely irrelevant
ehh OK
No one thinks this noob can beat a vet. He's not the upstart to pave the way
You being decent is a Con Aer... w/ no Nic Cage to save the day
nice flip on the air/aer.. but damn that is a played nameplay concept
His chick is fat as fuck with an average face. She wouldn't get a look from other guys
She'd be on the median... chicks that aren't obese would be on the other side
dope
Don't claim you make music or sell out shows. I can't see those lies ending well
How can we believe you wreck mics? Last week you lost to Mike Wrecka in NBL
ok
You've dropped sub par for 6 weeks. I haven't seen you throw one punch that was crazy
But we know you're the shit... being lit in the bag in your avy
nice, wording could have been better
Every time I drop I get an ovation. It's a celebration in each battle I ever wrote
Shit, my verses leave people punching Aer... for dropping that shit he considers dope
dope flip..
So don't claim you're some sort of gangsta pulling bitches. Your tough talk leaves us rolling
You'll never be interested in a Lady, thug... unless she's really some nigga trolling
lmao, basic but funny


I dunno.. I wasn't expecting it but I think aer might have edged this one out.. no hate arch.. GL to both..

v- aer

[A. Diction]

arch reachin out to higher powers, cuz theres no denying me this win,
see i would just say "pray to g0d".. but whats to stop him from bodying u again!
ok. just average tho.
You garbage, & its the REAL personals that are provin ya worthless,
"CUZ YOU KNOW YOU SUCK....."
..when ur check in is a more INTERESTING READ than ur whole fucking verse is
i thought his check in was roflzz...this was a good spin off it tho. so i say ok.
you claimin vet status, but homie ur battles have never intrigued,
so congrats on being around forever..
need i remind you its also been THAT long since u champed a league!
miss. inaccurate personal n not hard hitting. he been around forever before he champed lol
retarded fuck, you were never respected, you ain't hot here,
& I get that its a long road to success.. but he still ridin the short bus to top tier
miss.
U ain't gettin props queer. joined in '03, yet you managed to stay wack?
He's been around for "So Long, Everybody".. but we all wish he'd UP and just SAY THAT!
nice. wording coulda been better but i liked this
ya 3-1 record made me think u were decent. but wow, this faggots helpless
cuz u not making it past THE BIG 3 this week, niggas should call u the celtics!
weak
U talk up a storm. proves this clowns really been dyin ta get slayed,
& he's livin in the past.. that explains why even ur current event punches r played
blah. weak. miss. wack. take ur pick.

vs

You were a nobody when you registered. Made the league but I don't know how you got in
Now you're known for making a name for yourself... then becoming completely irrelevant
ok generic punch
No one thinks this noob can beat a vet. He's not the upstart to pave the way
You being decent is a Con Aer... w/ no Nic Cage to save the day
damn. nice nameplay.
His chick is fat as fuck with an average face. She wouldn't get a look from other guys
She'd be on the median... chicks that aren't obese would be on the other side
not feeling...no sting.
Don't claim you make music or sell out shows. I can't see those lies ending well
How can we believe you wreck mics? Last week you lost to Mike Wrecka in NBL
ok personal
You've dropped sub par for 6 weeks. I haven't seen you throw one punch that was crazy
But we know you're the shit... being lit in the bag in your avy
crazy n avy dont rhyme fella. decent line tho.
Every time I drop I get an ovation. It's a celebration in each battle I ever wrote
Shit, my verses leave people punching Aer... for dropping that shit he considers dope
another decent nameplay. thought the exection coulda been better, but it was still nice...
So don't claim you're some sort of gangsta pulling bitches. Your tough talk leaves us rolling
You'll never be interested in a Lady, thug... unless she's really some nigga trolling
lol...this was funny to me

aer had a couple ok lines, but a bunch of generic crap that just didn't hit at all. complete misses imo. arch had np's n personals. his np's were creative n hard hitting. his personal stung. he had some good generic noface lines too...overall he beasted this nigga easily tbh

v/ arch's check in

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

arch reachin out to higher powers, cuz theres no denying me this win,
see i would just say "pray to g0d".. but whats to stop him from bodying u again!
this was wrded really bad man
You garbage, & its the REAL personals that are provin ya worthless,
"CUZ YOU KNOW YOU SUCK....."
..when ur check in is a more INTERESTING READ than ur whole fucking verse is
nice
you claimin vet status, but homie ur battles have never intrigued,
so congrats on being around forever..
need i remind you its also been THAT long since u champed a league!
ur wording killed u n made this seem like a statement n thats it
retarded fuck, you were never respected, you ain't hot here,
& I get that its a long road to success.. but he still ridin the short bus to top tier
this was ok
U ain't gettin props queer. joined in '03, yet you managed to stay wack?
He's been around for "So Long, Everybody".. but we all wish he'd UP and just SAY THAT!
pnice wordng was good
ya 3-1 record made me think u were decent. but wow, this faggots helpless
cuz u not making it past THE BIG 3 this week, niggas should call u the celtics!
i dont like this it didnt hit hard to me
U talk up a storm. proves this clowns really been dyin ta get slayed,
& he's livin in the past.. that explains why even ur current event punches r played
pthis was ok

vs


You were a nobody when you registered. Made the league but I don't know how you got in
Now you're known for making a name for yourself... then becoming completely irrelevant
this doesnt ryhme arche]
No one thinks this noob can beat a vet. He's not the upstart to pave the way
You being decent is a Con Aer... w/ no Nic Cage to save the day
this was clever
His chick is fat as fuck with an average face. She wouldn't get a look from other guys
She'd be on the median... chicks that aren't obese would be on the other side
rofl
Don't claim you make music or sell out shows. I can't see those lies ending well
How can we believe you wreck mics? Last week you lost to Mike Wrecka in NBL
this was a nice hit
You've dropped sub par for 6 weeks. I haven't seen you throw one punch that was crazy
But we know you're the shit... being lit in the bag in your avy
ok
Every time I drop I get an ovation. It's a celebration in each battle I ever wrote
Shit, my verses leave people punching Aer... for dropping that shit he considers dope
no
So don't claim you're some sort of gangsta pulling bitches. Your tough talk leaves us rolling
You'll never be interested in a Lady, thug... unless she's really some nigga trolling
lmao


as i said in chat consistency wont his for arche, the first 3 bars of aer's 2 of emw as worded bad n made em hit really bland, arche had consistency while i dont think he threw any haymakers i thought the median or mic wrecka was lotb

v/arche

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

arch reachin out to higher powers, cuz theres no denying me this win,
see i would just say "pray to g0d".. but whats to stop him from bodying u again!
this was wrded really bad man
You garbage, & its the REAL personals that are provin ya worthless,
"CUZ YOU KNOW YOU SUCK....."
..when ur check in is a more INTERESTING READ than ur whole fucking verse is
nice
you claimin vet status, but homie ur battles have never intrigued,
so congrats on being around forever..
need i remind you its also been THAT long since u champed a league!
ur wording killed u n made this seem like a statement n thats it
retarded fuck, you were never respected, you ain't hot here,
& I get that its a long road to success.. but he still ridin the short bus to top tier
this was ok
U ain't gettin props queer. joined in '03, yet you managed to stay wack?
He's been around for "So Long, Everybody".. but we all wish he'd UP and just SAY THAT!
pnice wordng was good
ya 3-1 record made me think u were decent. but wow, this faggots helpless
cuz u not making it past THE BIG 3 this week, niggas should call u the celtics!
i dont like this it didnt hit hard to me
U talk up a storm. proves this clowns really been dyin ta get slayed,
& he's livin in the past.. that explains why even ur current event punches r played
pthis was ok

vs


You were a nobody when you registered. Made the league but I don't know how you got in
Now you're known for making a name for yourself... then becoming completely irrelevant
this doesnt ryhme arche]
No one thinks this noob can beat a vet. He's not the upstart to pave the way
You being decent is a Con Aer... w/ no Nic Cage to save the day
this was clever
His chick is fat as fuck with an average face. She wouldn't get a look from other guys
She'd be on the median... chicks that aren't obese would be on the other side
rofl
Don't claim you make music or sell out shows. I can't see those lies ending well
How can we believe you wreck mics? Last week you lost to Mike Wrecka in NBL
this was a nice hit
You've dropped sub par for 6 weeks. I haven't seen you throw one punch that was crazy
But we know you're the shit... being lit in the bag in your avy
ok
Every time I drop I get an ovation. It's a celebration in each battle I ever wrote
Shit, my verses leave people punching Aer... for dropping that shit he considers dope
no
So don't claim you're some sort of gangsta pulling bitches. Your tough talk leaves us rolling
You'll never be interested in a Lady, thug... unless she's really some nigga trolling
lmao


as i said in chat consistency wont his for arche, the first 3 bars of aer's 2 of emw as worded bad n made em hit really bland, arche had consistency while i dont think he threw any haymakers i thought the median or mic wrecka was lotb

v/arche

[SmokaJoka]

You garbage, & its the REAL personals that are provin ya worthless,
"CUZ YOU KNOW YOU SUCK....."
..when ur check in is a more INTERESTING READ than ur whole fucking verse is
ya 3-1 record made me think u were decent. but wow, this faggots helpless
cuz u not making it past THE BIG 3 this week, niggas should call u the celtics!


vs.


His chick is fat as fuck with an average face. She wouldn't get a look from other guys
She'd be on the median... chicks that aren't obese would be on the other side
Don't claim you make music or sell out shows. I can't see those lies ending well
How can we believe you wreck mics? Last week you lost to Mike Wrecka in NBL
You've dropped sub par for 6 weeks. I haven't seen you throw one punch that was crazy
But we know you're the shit... being lit in the bag in your avy



close battle imo...idk what's with the bitching about the wording in Aer's verse...tbh it reads fine if you actually slow down and read the shit...Arch just dropped a more consistent verse and had the lotb with the Mike Wrecka line imo


Vote - Arch