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u battle rookies who cnt direct a punch & easily dead those chumps
Then u put noob in ur sig,to remind us u havent beat a vet in months
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
Archs a thug or an OG? talkin about the grass nd how he blow trees
but by the way you had trouble wit token, showed us this poser never smoked weed
but lets be real archs a legend forreal! you can tell by his fun rhymes
accomplisments speak for themselves:
......................... joke of LLL and 100+ wins..against noobs in frontlines
Last edited by The Archetype; July 15th, 2011 at 11:29 PM
Well...
You're SAP pic shows a deformed frame. I would write that only a troll would blow ya Lame
But I can tell you're a Hunchback w/o going to note 'cha dame
You got a legend nod for RIP Katie. All that emotion's too displaced
Bitch I'm known to murder kids... so after this you can tell her 'bout the nom to her face
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
A makeover needs to be purchased. Getting jealous over that bitch is worthless
Cuz his wifey is a freak in the sheets... and at her job in the circus
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds glitter and sequins
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
...blah...
u battle rookies who cnt direct a punch & easily dead those chumps
Then u put noob in ur sig,to remind us u havent beat a vet in months
LOL
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
LOL/DOPE
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
MEHISH
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
IIGHT PERSONAL, BUT SHOULDA PUT A COMA AFTER SCARY
Archs a thug or an OG? talkin about the grass nd how he blow trees
but by the way you had trouble wit token, showed us this poser never smoked weed
TOKEN/SMOKE REF'S ARE EHHH..
but lets be real archs a legend forreal! you can tell by his fun rhymes
accomplisments speak for themselves:
......................... joke of LLL and 100+ wins..against noobs in frontlines
MEH
vs
You're SAP pic shows a deformed frame. I would write that only a troll would blow ya Lame
But I can tell you're a Hunchback w/o going to note 'cha dame
MEHISH
You got a legend nod for RIP Katie. All that emotion's too displaced
Bitch I'm known to murder kids... so after this you can tell her 'bout the nom to her face
HA
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
LOL
A makeover needs to be purchased. Getting jealous over that bitch is worthless
Cuz his wifey is a freak in the sheets... and at her job in the circus
IIGHT
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds glitter and sequins
HA
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
COO
v/ MARV HAD THE BARS I LIKE'D MORE... BUT ARCH WAS CONSISTANT.. AND HAD SOME NICE HITS... ARCH
u battle rookies who cnt direct a punch & easily dead those chumps
Then u put noob in ur sig,to remind us u havent beat a vet in months
nice.
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
cool
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
lol played, but good flip
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
ok.. decent
Archs a thug or an OG? talkin about the grass nd how he blow trees
but by the way you had trouble wit token, showed us this poser never smoked weed
naa played bro..
but lets be real archs a legend forreal! you can tell by his fun rhymes
accomplisments speak for themselves:
......................... joke of LLL and 100+ wins..against noobs in frontlines
coulda closed a lil stronger this was too statementish, not bad tho
You're SAP pic shows a deformed frame. I would write that only a troll would blow ya Lame
But I can tell you're a Hunchback w/o going to note 'cha dame
this was worded weird to me lol, seemed a lil forced too
You got a legend nod for RIP Katie. All that emotion's too displaced
Bitch I'm known to murder kids... so after this you can tell her 'bout the nom to her face
not really feeling this either tbh fam
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
I wish you'd use multies.. this was cool but theres no sting
A makeover needs to be purchased. Getting jealous over that bitch is worthless
Cuz his wifey is a freak in the sheets... and at her job in the circus
OK..
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds glitter and sequins
lmao.. this was pretty good
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
dope
well... after reading marvs verse with a few misses I was sure arch would take it but tbh he really started off slow, with wording issues being the main problem for me.. but he did finish up pretty well.. Marv on the other hand started off strong and kinda fell off towards the end
for qoutables it would be..
u battle rookies who cnt direct a punch & easily dead those chumps
Then u put noob in ur sig,to remind us u havent beat a vet in months
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
vs.
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds glitter and sequins
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
So it was pretty close, but out of the non quotables I thought marv was a lil better, and the just skan personal can't really be proven so it lost a little bit of it's punch.. but even when taking that into consideration I thought marv edged this.. seen better from both tho.. peace
v-marv
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champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
v
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
A makeover needs to be purchased. Getting jealous over that bitch is worthless
Cuz his wifey is a freak in the sheets... and at her job in the circus
archs wording killed his verse tbh,the two quotables i have from his verse were not that great. marv had better wording,fresher concepts & overall a more consistant verse which imho gave him the w/ here quite easily.
take it or leave it but thats real talk.
Project Mayhem
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cliche corny faggots,most you lames gay and think the same way
still thinking dope punchlines involve fake personals & played nameplays
u battle rookies who cnt direct a punch & easily dead those chumps
Then u put noob in ur sig,to remind us u havent beat a vet in months
lol nice opener
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
meh not bad
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
nice
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
aha nice
Archs a thug or an OG? talkin about the grass nd how he blow trees
but by the way you had trouble wit token, showed us this poser never smoked weed
ehhh
but lets be real archs a legend forreal! you can tell by his fun rhymes
accomplisments speak for themselves:
......................... joke of LLL and 100+ wins..against noobs in frontlines
ouch
vs
You're SAP pic shows a deformed frame. I would write that only a troll would blow ya Lame
But I can tell you're a Hunchback w/o going to note 'cha dame
ehhh not feeling this
You got a legend nod for RIP Katie. All that emotion's too displaced
Bitch I'm known to murder kids... so after this you can tell her 'bout the
nom to her face
ouch
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
eh
A makeover needs to be purchased. Getting jealous over that bitch is
worthless
Cuz his wifey is a freak in the sheets... and at her job in the circus
nice
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds
glitter and sequins
ehhh not bad
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
i've seen u use a similar concept before but iight
v/marv
u battle rookies who cnt direct a punch & easily dead those chumps
Then u put noob in ur sig,to remind us u havent beat a vet in months
ok... good hit
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
lol... Arch set this battle, not me, homie...
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
decent, but Arch hasn't bit... no relavence here
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
decent, seen similar concepts done, though... ok hit
Archs a thug or an OG? talkin about the grass nd how he blow trees
but by the way you had trouble wit token, showed us this poser never smoked weed
decent
but lets be real archs a legend forreal! you can tell by his fun rhymes
accomplisments speak for themselves:
......................... joke of LLL and 100+ wins..against noobs in frontlines
This just read awkward, imo... the rhyme scheme was off or something
vs.
You're SAP pic shows a deformed frame. I would write that only a troll would blow ya Lame
But I can tell you're a Hunchback w/o going to note 'cha dame
ok
You got a legend nod for RIP Katie. All that emotion's too displaced
Bitch I'm known to murder kids... so after this you can tell her 'bout the nom to her face
harsh... decent hit
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
lol...
A makeover needs to be purchased. Getting jealous over that bitch is worthless
Cuz his wifey is a freak in the sheets... and at her job in the circus
played, but funny flip... meh on the point card, tbh
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds glitter and sequins
rofl... good
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
decent hit.
Marv, you had some good flips, but your first three bars weren't relavent to
Arch at all, tbh... so I cannot say that they landed. I liked the line where
you said I set this battle, it was good, but the fact that I didn't set this
battle took away from it... no hate, but honestly, some of the bars that were
quoted didn't have as much of an impact due to the irrelevance of the punch.
Arch, decent verse, I've seen way better from you, though. You had the lotb,
but I was expecting more harder hitting punches, tbh. Can't say that you had
any misses in your verse and you took this with consistency.
Vote- Arch
Last edited by A.T.; July 16th, 2011 at 07:49 AM
u battle rookies who cnt direct a punch & easily dead those chumps
Then u put noob in ur sig,to remind us u havent beat a vet in months
nice opener
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
lol good hit
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
i dont think arch bites but dece
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
good punch
Archs a thug or an OG? talkin about the grass nd how he blow trees
but by the way you had trouble wit token, showed us this poser never smoked weed
alright
but lets be real archs a legend forreal! you can tell by his fun rhymes
accomplisments speak for themselves:
......................... joke of LLL and 100+ wins..against noobs in frontlines
good closer marv but this was too wordy in my opinion
vs.
You're SAP pic shows a deformed frame. I would write that only a troll would blow ya Lame
But I can tell you're a Hunchback w/o going to note 'cha dame
lol dece
You got a legend nod for RIP Katie. All that emotion's too displaced
Bitch I'm known to murder kids... so after this you can tell her 'bout the nom to her face
nice punch
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
alright lol
A makeover needs to be purchased. Getting jealous over that bitch is worthless
Cuz his wifey is a freak in the sheets... and at her job in the circus
good hit
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds glitter and sequins
lol meh
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
good closer
This has to be one of the better champ matches ive seen in a while. Both battlers came hard with the punches especially the personals. Marv had the better opener, Arch had the better closer. Marv, your closing line woulda been solid, it was very good no lie, but you worded it a little too much in my opinion. Like I said, both battlers came hard no too much for me to critique on. I think arch came harder in this one, no hate to either of you. Good battle, enjoyed this alot. You both entertained me.
v - arch
u battle rookies who cnt direct a punch & easily dead those chumps
Then u put noob in ur sig,to remind us u havent beat a vet in months
good
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
nice
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
stretched, weak.
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
ok, not bad
Archs a thug or an OG? talkin about the grass nd how he blow trees
but by the way you had trouble wit token, showed us this poser never smoked weed
nah
but lets be real archs a legend forreal! you can tell by his fun rhymes
accomplisments speak for themselves:
......................... joke of LLL and 100+ wins..against noobs in frontlines
nah
vs
You're SAP pic shows a deformed frame. I would write that only a troll would blow ya Lame
But I can tell you're a Hunchback w/o going to note 'cha dame
ok
You got a legend nod for RIP Katie. All that emotion's too displaced
Bitch I'm known to murder kids... so after this you can tell her 'bout the nom to her face
cool
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
ok
A makeover needs to be purchased. Getting jealous over that bitch is worthless
Cuz his wifey is a freak in the sheets... and at her job in the circus
meh
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds glitter and sequins
good
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
ok
v/ Arch
I liked arches verse a little more, both had some good hits and some ok punches but marv fell off on his last 2 bars while arch stayed consistant more.
good battle.
champ match?u dont burn vets,wen it comes to sex you learned best
b/c A.T fucked you hard settin this battle,Abi was screamin its her turn next!
You dont drop any violent shit, your crews known as theifs, stealing rhymes and flips
if you ever hear me say "nice spit" im only complimentin him for the lines you bit
plus you and Wordz were married dude,then u teamed with GoW thats scary boo
it just showed RB wen it came to tag titles and winning a God always carried you
vs
You got a legend nod for RIP Katie. All that emotion's too displaced
Bitch I'm known to murder kids... so after this you can tell her 'bout the nom to her face
With alien features his chicks a 2 but this kid loves fucking that goon
His sex life includes Marv in the martian w/o a fetish for cartoons
If we fought, kid'd catch a beating. I'd flip and kick his teeth in
I have the blood of a champ... With a name like that I bet he bleeds glitter and sequins
The name change ain't working, man. Even as Just Skan your concepts were hurting fam
Nigga's are still talking that Skan dull w/o knowing the reason you're permabanned
definitely a good n' close battle here guys...hard decision but i think marv had hits that coulda won this battle but arch's consistently really put him over marv here. cause of that i gotta go with arch for more consistentcy but this win was definitely in marv's reach.
v/ arch
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