L.T. The Real Feat. Frank P. - Eden..

[Frank P.]

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the homie L.T. hit me up the other day and said, "lets do this"..cuz we does this - so here it is..

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gunna edit in a little video later..maybe..


enjoy..



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[I-M-E]

deep sounding beat.....first dude comes in good, nice vocal presence, flow is good....lyrics are real good.....hook drags on a bit......second verses flow sounds a bit choppy/pausey, not as fluid, it does clean up more later in the verse, vocals sound pretty good, delivery sounds fitting, kinda sounds like hes concerned....lyrics are also quite good

..nice lil deep track

[The Archetype]

This is Wordz right? Good shit... not a fan of the chorus and a bit slow for my taste but that's just a personal preference... the track is dope though... both of you have an ill flow and presence...

[RobbieAnthem]

nice lyricism i can feel the emotion in your lyrics nice flow only thing i dont like is the beat.
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[Frank P.]

ups..




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[Frank P.]

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[Blackflags]

Intro to the beat is cool so far. 1st verse: A little loud. Flow and delivery is cool. Flow sounds a TAD off, nothing major though. It sound like it may have positioned wrong. His wordplay is dope as fuck. Nice emotion for this beat. I like the sample in this for the chorus. I'm really digging this beat. It does sound a little muffled, like it has been compressed very heavily. Sounds good still though. Frank coming in. Dope flow and delivery so far. I'm digging the wordplay. Wordplay is getting better with each line. fucking dopeness. This is a solid ass track for sure man. For fucking sure. Good ass job. I dig the "scribbling" at the end as well.

[Checka Fred]

finally, Doc can shuttup about that collab now.. lol.

Like the way the beat comes in... kinda like Em' on Still Don't Give A Fuck... LT came in strong. Nice verse with a little feeling in it too. Lyrics are ill, flow could be better but nothing to complain about. I can't hear what the sample in the hook is saying, that's about the only downside so far. then again, with 10 on the next verse, what other downsides could there be... 10 rocked with a more simplistic style than he normally does, but it was really dope. I liked the feeling that both of you brought to this track, I love the beat.. I probably would have loved the chorus if I would have know what it was saying... but yea man, great job both.

[Philly®]

LT.. ok... i hear you.. flow seem's a tad off in spaces.. maybe that's him.. can't knock it really.. ok flow seems off in alot more places now that his verse played threw fully... hook and beat are mellow... got me feelin relaxed.. not bad.. 10.. i dont know why but this beat fits ur voice better then it does LT's.. flow more polished then Lt's.. lyrics are to the point.. good job on catchin a flow to the beat... overall solid track from you two.. even tho i think LT sounded a lil louder then you.. might b his voice

[Keeby Swaggz]

I was feelin' this track, got a deep and meaningful vibe to it... flow is on beat on Doc's verse but it seems kinda off for some reason, kinda the way RZA does sometimes... anyway, Frank your verse is pretty dope and your style seems to fit the vibe of the beat better... the sub bass in this is a little too heavy, drowns you guys out sometimes... not bad all around though, track is straight...

[Frank P.]

thanks for the replies..i like this song a lot - when Carlos asked me to collab this is not what i expected him to send me..i thought he ripped..i liked dudes style on this a lot..really had some meaningful words..i was excited to drop a verse on this from the jump..

dont know when imma get a video done for this joint..i got a lot on my plate over the next couple weeks..but i got video ideas for this joint and one will get made..


thanks again..



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