Flash ur closer was gay lol, opener was funny and dope, rest of the verse was pretty nice.. RPK came decent but Flash was definitely had the better verse here hands down. im saying LOTB is Flash's opener, and RP's standout was the hot flash line.. MVGT flash for the overall harder hitting verse
V-flash
LEGION OF LEGENDS
Jack Herrera, Sour Ina Dutch..AC On High Flyin On The Hutch
RPK
This kid ain't a fighter and he's a bitch kind of writer
But ur verses are right at home on RB...good thing u live in the cypher
^^Yeaa I think the wording hurt the concept here. Good thing you live in a cypher doesn't really follow 'right at home on RB'.. maybe just 'cause you live in the cypher'. The concept had potential but it fell off cause of the wording.
U don't have a chance geek,u know it cuz ur past's bleak
So u must be feelin' a little Blue...seeing how he raped u last week
^^This is ok, a bit predictable tough but wording here was solid. Still think the concept could've been developed a little more but this was ok.
Don't try pullin some shit;I'll grab the tool and a clip and shoot this fool in the ribs
I'm 16 and ur 15 so you ain't just gettin' ur ass beat...this is cyberbullying,kid
^^Heh, if true, it's pretty funny. I like the concept, set-up 'set up' the misdirection as well.
I grasp thunderbolts while Flash raps dumbshit flows
Think ur verse is Hot,Flash?..nah,ur just the type of bitch to have one of those
^^Eh I like the fact you tried going personal with wordplay, but I just didn't like the concept. The set up seemed a bit fillerish, decemt wording, but it's a nameplay that just didn't hit cause of what you related it to.
I relish in ur fears,ur unknown but've seldom disappeared
U ain't hot on the streets...Flash Media's been irrelevant for years
^^I liked this nameplay a lot more than the first, more personal and deff harsher. The 'aint hot on the streets' I think could have been worded a bit better to relate more to the punch, but this was still solid.
Flash
our last battle hurt records, but what can you do? its done
we both expected a 2-2,difference is you go home and dance in one
^^Heh, a little forced, it's really 'expected to be 2-2' or something like that, but this made me chuckle. Ok jab
when it comes to nominations its not even a question your in
we saw MVP all over you...funny cuz that verse stunk like urine
^^I didn't like the concept, wordplay only really works one way at best and even then it's a little forced
ur always postin late.. i was ready to hit 'chu kid
u got an EXTasy if u'd win,but even hallucigens coudn't picture it
^^Extension, ee ex tee, either way it's a bit forced on the wordplay. And you got an extasy doesn't really work. The concept wasn't bad, but it was tough to read.
ur not takin the charge of teens..in comparison ur wacker dude
im the Youth's Center..your mom just drops you there after school
^^This was ok, maybe it's just not too popular around me, but I've heard of 'center of attention, the core, the nucleus, etc' but not 'the center' by itself. I think it's a cool idea, but a little foreced.
u dn't get girls so if u think RB is hope well your far see,
even abi get more respect then you ironic thats the only chick 'RC'
^^RC, R, sees.. and abbreviating his name with one letter is not as effective for a nameplay. Again, a bit forced.
This is close, but I'm going against the grain and vote for RPK. I think Flash had some cool concepts, but the wording was a bit off usually due to something forced. RPK also had lotb for me, even though it was just about tied in quotes. GOod stuff from both, pz
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The Birth Of Creation
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I relish in ur fears,ur unknown but've seldom disappeared
U ain't hot on the streets...Flash Media's been irrelevant for years
vs
u dn't get girls so if u think RB is hope well your far see,
even abi get more respect then you ironic thats the only chick 'RC
Was a stretch quoting from either... each were pretty forced and the setups sounded pretty bad. I think Flash had a better grip on delivering the concepts compared to RPK and I think that extra bit of polish gets him the nod here... but both should get a little more creative/take a little more time on wording.
Vote - Flash
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This kid ain't a fighter and he's a bitch kind of writer
But ur verses are right at home on RB...good thing u live in the cypher
I relish in ur fears,ur unknown but've seldom disappeared
U ain't hot on the streets...Flash Media's been irrelevant for years
vs
when it comes to nominations its not even a question your in
we saw MVP all over you...funny cuz that verse stunk like urine
ur not takin the charge of teens..in comparison ur wacker dude
im the Youth's Center..your mom just drops you there after school
Flash's other bars were a little stronger than RPK's, but all in all this is a really close battle. RPK's Blue line and Hot Flash line both hurt him a lot cuz they're pretty played out.
vote Flash
The Last Level
Flash wins
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