nigga i'm nice with words, thinkin that'll suffice? absurd.
I'm toyin with you chump,
this kid leaving satisfied is a statement even fisher price aint heard
too wordy
my flows take flight with birds, a flock of 'dub's' is a squad you could never come to chief
faced jack in a box, dosed him with one uppercut, n' propelled him high beyond belief
no
Whoop you like you stole something, fuck you live in a hole or something?
Lawd can't prevail, & this dickrider produces ass, wide enough to support the poll he's fucking
concept there... failed tho
your balls been tucked in, your a transvestite, it's obvious, so no need to confess
but how you fit that skirt over that wide ass frame is a situation i just can't 'seem to address
lol
u need to pump iron, but we'd all rather have me catch you snoozin' n' squeeze you with lead
My uzi is sick in the head, when it starts coffin, by the wake you'll be sleep with the dead
decent attempt, but no. too wordy once again
blast ur mom, till her taco meat lay on her clothes, leave 'er where the mexican's can't find her
the date you joined was the day you signed that whore's death certificate,
& you said you could keep her safe... JULYER
no.
u had like 1 barely decent punch and a few half-way decent attempts...
Ya lines empty, wording fluctuats more than stocks n bonds
But he'll promise 2 deliver, but who the fuck believes in a Kon?
ok
Its all wrong, ya lifestyle gone, son u cant win
On pursuit 2 happiness, locked in the bathroom, sleep... hoping no1 comes in
nah.
Ya futures dim, killin u with a grin fuck what ya preference is
N if less is more, then y the fuck ya drops ALL run on sentences?
ok
Bless this kid, my career is lavish while ur status marked temp
N kondominium as fuck, audio plz, he cant afford a studio apartment
nope
Yea head I depart it, u mark bitch already know kontext ur idle
No1 Minded Alias ikon, legends though? more ridiculous then him NOT winning the title
run on setence here
some stretched lines as well...u had some wording issues but his opener was alright. u also had that other ok line. i think u barely edged it here.
V/Lawd
"Chrome 4 5 singin cuz they still snitchin
Pools in da livin room, swim to the kitchen"