Here.. Due tomorrow @Smog waiting for ur check in
Smog
Maximus
Here.. Due tomorrow @Smog waiting for ur check in
Check... Bout to crash for a few hours befo work then ill write.... Be up no later than noon, tomorrow
Aight
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u've been sinking and losing points, im beheading this hog
fuck science, acid-rain aint the only Downfall connected with Smog
ur grammar sucks, those lines are stretched and sketchy
sometimes you use Ridiculous Wordz.. & they both left you buried
u dissed Amen's pic but you'll get paralyzed & shattered quick
so i dont care if you Ataxic, you'll be in that condition after this
this wack cat writes random weak lines, i'll leave ur abs punctured
its fitting they call u smog cos u're far from Solid & lack structure
im ninety nine levels above you, this vermin's getting schooled
we're not Equal.. u're more of a watered down version of that noob
I took that W via hoe show, sick of ancient n dumb excuses,
If ud a said ur sister spilled a drink on the comp, at least it a been some new shit,
Dude it's the oldest trick in tha book, ur shook like a Kodak picture took,
N if u ever have me shakin up,its in disbelief u ain't give that fine hoes ass n tits a look,
Ur bitch told me that's enough for a day, to much head her jaw stiffened,
But if she ever said she maxed out, she's talkin bout ur $250 credit card limit,
Cut the sentimental act, why u sorry, Did ur pencil snapped bruh
Cuz he so confident ill win he'll set up 15 more so sure ill get to 20 faster,
Ur here for the wrong purpose, this jokers death's a given
Cuz he isn't tryna improve tactics.. He wants fl's best voter recognition,
Maximus - i liked your opener i felt it was a good land. I did think your words/salamander punch was your best one. It also was the lotb to me. The sicc pic kine was cool, as well as your solid structure flip. You had some weaker ones, that i wasnt keen on. I do think you took this battle with, what you presented here.
Smog - this verse was one of the better verses, i can say ive seen from you thus far. Your wording was less choppy here. It still has alot a long way to go. Just keep at it, do not let it get the better of you. There is potential you just need to capitalize on it. Smog, always look for new angles in everyday life. You can flip current shows or movies, and even news. I just feel as if max got you here.
V/max
3TC
you look depressed as fuck in video mags, your fate is unfurled
I knew cameras add 10 lbs, didn't know it could add the weight of the world
Aero the Black Pegasus
ur grammar sucks, those lines are stretched and sketchy
sometimes you use Ridiculous Wordz.. & they both left you buried
u dissed Amen's pic but you'll get paralyzed & shattered quick
so i dont care if you Ataxic, you'll be in that condition after this
this wack cat writes random weak lines, i'll leave ur abs punctured
its fitting they call u smog cos u're far from Solid & lack structure
vs
Ur bitch told me that's enough for a day, to much head her jaw stiffened,
But if she ever said she maxed out, she's talkin bout ur $250 credit card limit,
not felin much from smog, some decent attempts but none really landed
v/max
upzz
u dissed Amen's pic but you'll get paralyzed & shattered quick
so i dont care if you Ataxic, you'll be in that condition after this
this wack cat writes random weak lines, i'll leave ur abs punctured
its fitting they call u smog cos u're far from Solid & lack structure
vs.
nothing.
weal battle here. smog work on your wordplay and coming with more creative lines.. most of your lines were played like the trick in the book lines.. that line was probably used in the first text battle ever lol. max your bars were ok def could have been better but i still have you taking this..
v//max
ur grammar sucks, those lines are stretched and sketchy
sometimes you use Ridiculous Wordz.. & they both left you buried
u dissed Amen's pic but you'll get paralyzed & shattered quick
so i dont care if you Ataxic, you'll be in that condition after this
this wack cat writes random weak lines, i'll leave ur abs punctured
its fitting they call u smog cos u're far from Solid & lack structure
vs
Ur bitch told me that's enough for a day, to much head her jaw stiffened,
But if she ever said she maxed out, she's talkin bout ur $250 credit card limit,
Smog good verse but max just came harder all around man
Keep at it homie
Vote Maximus
Maximus - "u've been sinking and losing points, im beheading this hog
fuck science, acid-rain aint the only Downfall connected with Smog"
That was quite a nice opener, and you did have a very good flow going in there.
Smog - man I think maximus came in dope. you had a few weak punches here and there but didn't land in proper. peace
Vote Maximus
@fresh close this
Maximus wins KO. Closed.
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