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Wordz AhGod.
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@King vs Wordz AhGod.
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U not fooling a soul w/ that face, when I uppercut u its straight RyuOriginally Posted by King
u couldn't leave ur mark here if u used nail polish like the faggot behind u.
my verses r RB's ray of hope while u hide behind that fat fella
bitch I burn trees n get high, u just burn from the flash on that camera.
there aint a female for miles, ur lips puckered, I wish a bomb would just hit u
u da type to wish ur friend would stop taking selfies n just turn around n kiss u.
u fucking wormy, dirty ear wax, Im bustin till I stop ur heart beat
I joined the military n got merits, u apparently joined the salvation army.
if King sees a dick, he zeros in n aims the Hubble at it next
n when Its Raining Men, he sends the faggot in the yellow bubble jacket to check.
no lie, I can see why GoW puts his hopes on this loser
dudes got a brick head that could lay a foundation on any sites future.
King hates losing more then others, he thinks himself a genius
while on the other hand..just further proves he can't let go of his own penis.
Im in my draws in the desert cooking meth, this pale bitch couldn't move me
pussy.. Im breaking bad, he's breaking dawn just in time for the next twilight movie.
16 I think.
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I've KO'd my way here, n I'll kill what this new fags written
Its fitting u share Packs fate, looks like u already share doo rags with em
n U look too soft to get pussy. Women do not want it gently
Son I dick bitches down to perfection...u cant even cock ur hat down correctly
Most trolls are fake as shit. Type to get shook in a real fight
So w/ all the shit u talk online its no surprise that ur a tight-lipped pussy in real life
Lollll look at that grill. How can I not think that you soft...
I cant tell if ur mean muggin or just got a mouthful from toppin that dude off
n Look at that set up. I bet making something ill's a rare event
Cuz If thats u in the lab, no wonder ur tracks sound like a failed experiment
But Red Bull should endorse u, U could be their face in an instant
U drink cases while making ur songs n we need em to stay awake when we listen
Wordz looks used n abused. Must get whored out...weekly
This faggots sucked so much dick his tops lips been worn off completely
Fitted, doo rag, polo....exactly what we would expect
That shirt sums up ur style perfectly...plain lines that never seem to connect
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U not fooling a soul w/ that face, when I uppercut u its straight Ryu
u couldn't leave ur mark here if u used nail polish like the faggot behind u.
Not feeling this
my verses r RB's ray of hope while u hide behind that fat fella
bitch I burn trees n get high, u just burn from the flash on that camera.
cool
there aint a female for miles, ur lips puckered, I wish a bomb would just hit u
u da type to wish ur friend would stop taking selfies n just turn around n kiss u.
Not feeling this
u fucking wormy, dirty ear wax, Im bustin till I stop ur heart beat
I joined the military n got merits, u apparently joined the salvation army.
that sweater is pretty homely looking.. Not bad
if King sees a dick, he zeros in n aims the Hubble at it next
n when Its Raining Men, he sends the faggot in the yellow bubble jacket to check.
ehh.. not feeling this
no lie, I can see why GoW puts his hopes on this loser
dudes got a brick head that could lay a foundation on any sites future.\
nice
King hates losing more then others, he thinks himself a genius
while on the other hand..just further proves he can't let go of his own penis.
lol ok
Im in my draws in the desert cooking meth, this pale bitch couldn't move me
pussy.. Im breaking bad, he's breaking dawn just in time for the next twilight movie.
not bad
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I've KO'd my way here, n I'll kill what this new fags written
Its fitting u share Packs fate, looks like u already share doo rags with em
Not feeling this
n U look too soft to get pussy. Women do not want it gently
Son I dick bitches down to perfection...u cant even cock ur hat down correctly
lol ok
Most trolls are fake as shit. Type to get shook in a real fight
So w/ all the shit u talk online its no surprise that ur a tight-lipped pussy in real life
lol nice
Lollll look at that grill. How can I not think that you soft...
I cant tell if ur mean muggin or just got a mouthful from toppin that dude off
nice
n Look at that set up. I bet making something ill's a rare event
Cuz If thats u in the lab, no wonder ur tracks sound like a failed experiment
Not feeling this
But Red Bull should endorse u, U could be their face in an instant
U drink cases while making ur songs n we need em to stay awake when we listen
cool
Wordz looks used n abused. Must get whored out...weekly
This faggots sucked so much dick his tops lips been worn off completely
lmao nice
Fitted, doo rag, polo....exactly what we would expect
That shirt sums up ur style perfectly...plain lines that never seem to connect
I liked this.. Nice closer
Decent battle.. Wordz you had Some decent lines, but I wasn't sensing any real haymakers. King that plain lines that never seem to connect was dopee.. I've gotta give this to king, I enjoyed his verse more and felt he had a couple harder connecting punches. Good battle both.
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U not fooling a soul w/ that face, when I uppercut u its straight Ryu
u couldn't leave ur mark here if u used nail polish like the faggot behind u.
Corny.
my verses r RB's ray of hope while u hide behind that fat fella
bitch I burn trees n get high, u just burn from the flash on that camera.
LOL, dope. Wish you have have tied the execution w/ the set up a little more, could have been really dope.
there aint a female for miles, ur lips puckered, I wish a bomb would just hit u
u da type to wish ur friend would stop taking selfies n just turn around n kiss u.
Corny/Gay.
u fucking wormy, dirty ear wax, Im bustin till I stop ur heart beat
I joined the military n got merits, u apparently joined the salvation army.
Had potential but fell flat for me.
if King sees a dick, he zeros in n aims the Hubble at it next
n when Its Raining Men, he sends the faggot in the yellow bubble jacket to check.
SMH, what? This was stupid.
no lie, I can see why GoW puts his hopes on this loser
dudes got a brick head that could lay a foundation on any sites future.
Only thing that gave this hope was the set up. Tied it in well.
King hates losing more then others, he thinks himself a genius
while on the other hand..just further proves he can't let go of his own penis.
Lol, cool reference.
Im in my draws in the desert cooking meth, this pale bitch couldn't move me
pussy.. Im breaking bad, he's breaking dawn just in time for the next twilight movie.
No.
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I've KO'd my way here, n I'll kill what this new fags written
Its fitting u share Packs fate, looks like u already share doo rags with em
Wtf? This shit was dumb.
n U look too soft to get pussy. Women do not want it gently
Son I dick bitches down to perfection...u cant even cock ur hat down correctly
Ehhhhh, this had potential, kind of fell flat for me.
Most trolls are fake as shit. Type to get shook in a real fight
So w/ all the shit u talk online its no surprise that ur a tight-lipped pussy in real life
Lol, cool reference.
Lollll look at that grill. How can I not think that you soft...
I cant tell if ur mean muggin or just got a mouthful from toppin that dude off
Lol, another cool reference.
n Look at that set up. I bet making something ill's a rare event
Cuz If thats u in the lab, no wonder ur tracks sound like a failed experiment
No.
But Red Bull should endorse u, U could be their face in an instant
U drink cases while making ur songs n we need em to stay awake when we listen
Eh, played concept but referenced from the picture.
Wordz looks used n abused. Must get whored out...weekly
This faggots sucked so much dick his tops lips been worn off completely
Could have did without. Already used this same concept in your verse.
Fitted, doo rag, polo....exactly what we would expect
That shirt sums up ur style perfectly...plain lines that never seem to connect
Lol, dope.
I got King w/ 3 quotes which are in bold and Wordz w/ 2 that are in bold. Those are the bars I felt landed nicely and were the more effective ones. I think Wordz could have had the LOTB w/ that burn by the flash bar. Shit would have been dope if his set up helped the concept/execution. Pretty close, IMO. A few misses from both but overall, I feel KING used the picture and referenced it a lot better then Wordz did. So with that being said...
v/King
Camera was good concept but execution & rhyme fell flat, Salvation Army, brick head, closer. You had a lot of errors in this, wasn't as funny as I expected especially being the fact he gave you a dope pic. You could have done a lot more just didn't really capitalize on opportunities & came off rather stale.
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Cock your hate down was dope, tight lipped pussy was good because relevant other then that ehh, mean muggin was ehhh, top lip was lololololololololol, closer was uggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhh! Decent verse you had two haymakers & stayed pretty consistent, no real down falls just a few that didn't get executed to full potential. Feel you had less to work with but did better just based off wording & execution.
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1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
Camera flash, salvation aemy, own penis
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Toght lip, lab, redbull, lines connect
I dont think Wordz attavked the pic as good as he could have. He did have some lols but some bad misses imo. King had some lolz and although ive seen red bull and energy drink lines this one pertained to the picture and was dope af imo. His closer was lotb though dope observation. Ima have to give this ro king on consitency for sure
V/King
King wins and is crowned SAP Tournament winner
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