Week 1: Coup De Grace VS. cai[Coup Wins]

**Joe Boston** · March 28th, 2015, 01:18 PM

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Good Luck To Both!!!!

**Coup.** · April 1st, 2015, 07:44 AM

Check

**Coup.** · April 1st, 2015, 11:08 AM

this is a Porsche vs a Pinto.. this queers steady trash
my bars will destroy Cayenne ruin his future w/ out sports cars in a deadly crash

**Donald Trump** · April 3rd, 2015, 03:13 AM

Cai no shows and is booted. + is a faggot.

***Spree*** · April 3rd, 2015, 12:49 PM

Set up was nice for the punch here but the nameplay/concept was soft for me. It deff would have KO'd cai if he showed no doubt but nothing crazy here

**Flying Carcass** · April 3rd, 2015, 12:55 PM

tough battle here but coup had a nice punch there, cài didn't really have muh doing for him but his wording was nice

Vote coup

**Coup.** · April 3rd, 2015, 02:00 PM

Originally Posted by Killing Spree

Set up was nice for the punch here but the nameplay/concept was soft for me. It deff would have KO'd cai if he showed no doubt but nothing crazy here

if you don't mind elaborating

***Spree*** · April 3rd, 2015, 02:13 PM

I thought your bar was light....

**Unfukwitable** · April 3rd, 2015, 03:12 PM

this is a Porsche vs a Pinto.. this queers steady trash
my bars will destroy Cayenne ruin his future w/ out sports cars in a deadly crash

-nice wordplay the set up was relevant but wasn't that crisp but overall u had a good bar here, It couldve had more of a impact if u worded it to seem more harsh too.

**Joe Boston** · April 3rd, 2015, 04:22 PM

The setup was nice and I also did like the nameplay reference I did feel u could've done a little more with the Cayenne concept to make it have more impact

**Not N Nice** · April 3rd, 2015, 08:01 PM

I personally don't like the setup bar much
It's decent enough to help the diss impact, but not "solid"
The punch itself relies too heavily on the nameplay/wordplay concept
Rather than the conveyance of it. Like stated, it's light, BUT effectual in ways... Decent

**Meks.** · April 4th, 2015, 12:28 AM

Eh, kinda forced feeling maybe it was the wording, could have been smoother IMO

**Greedy** · April 4th, 2015, 04:31 PM

I liked the wordplay. I've seen cayenne done tho. Overall the impact was hindered due to sloppy wording. Nice bar tho. Shows potential

**Smog** · April 4th, 2015, 06:30 PM

Cool bar, I have seen that wp executed different but overall cool np n effective punch imo

**alphadog** · April 4th, 2015, 06:55 PM

So you sayin cai is the Porsche and your the pinto lol insulting yourself here I think you have a decent concept but the overall bar lacked any impact and wasn't attacking cai really, ep was a good attempt tho smh @ ns props for showing coup