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Last edited by Donald Trump; April 11th, 2015 at 07:05 PM
I'll just check now.
u down for more than 10?
lets say 10-16 depending @Letterman
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Originally Posted by Letterman
borrow, attempt? who u think u fuckin w/ mayne i’ll put a slug in ur brain
the only way u getting a point is when I drag a scalpel across ur jugular vein
i go in on verses, when it comes to this nerds shit no one is quoting it son
cuz u never go inlet but after this battle i have ur chopped up body parts floating in one
i have explosive lines so voters are quoting mine, ironic ur embarassed yet zelous
the only time letterbomb is if i have em strapped to one that'd make a terrorist jealous
when I got the strap it’s a ruger to ur temple & trust bullets are cruisin
if you got the strap faggot ur taking it from behind by a bull dyke named susan
u from the deep south huh? inbred creep can’t even bag the nastiest of whores
ur the type to find a bitch, trailer home..chloroform her then drag her back to yours
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@Letterman aker has posted 10
Stop keepin old concepts handy, man just bite. I know it's foul
But if this cat scan the archives, maybe he can get some aid to repair that broken style
U a bitch when u drink. That's why ur girl left & you're lonely
Even if u sip gin u wine.. So u being sad'll be the reason that she's riding my pony
This dope shit you talkin is fake, dog. I read ur bars & wanna strangle
The lines you stitch together so bad, they make Experiment 626 look like an angel
I'm on some freaky shit w/ ur chick. Now u GPS'ing ready to ride bruh
But it's ironic you outside tracking her, while I got her inside the crib tied up
U rush verses so the writing's sloppy. Ur concepts are in shackles
But the way you jet, I guess it makes sense why you use so much force in ur battles
borrow, attempt? who u think u fuckin w/ mayne i’ll put a slug in ur brain
the only way u getting a point is when I drag a scalpel across ur jugular vein
- Point concepts were played in 08. Seen a million of these flips.
i go in on verses, when it comes to this nerds shit no one is quoting it son
cuz u never go inlet but after this battle i have ur chopped up body parts floating in one
- I've seen this name play used on him before and executed pretty close to yours. So this was blah for me.
i have explosive lines so voters are quoting mine, ironic ur embarassed yet zelous
the only time letterbomb is if i have em strapped to one that'd make a terrorist jealous
- Same as above. Execution was slightly different, tho.
when I got the strap it’s a ruger to ur temple & trust bullets are cruisin
if you got the strap faggot ur taking it from behind by a bull dyke named susan
- Played concept.
u from the deep south huh? inbred creep can’t even bag the nastiest of whores
ur the type to find a bitch, trailer home..chloroform her then drag her back to yours
- Trailer/Trail her plays were killed in 2010.
vs
Stop keepin old concepts handy, man just bite. I know it's foul
But if this cat scan the archives, maybe he can get some aid to repair that broken style
- Could have shorten the execution for a smoother transition. Seen a few cat scan plays, tho. I liked yours but like I said, it was wordy.
U a bitch when u drink. That's why ur girl left & you're lonely
Even if u sip gin u wine.. So u being sad'll be the reason that she's riding my pony
- LOL a lot going on here. Sloppy overall but a pretty gay/corny concept, lol. SMH... Were you listening to this song when the concept came to mind, faggot? LMAO...
This dope shit you talkin is fake, dog. I read ur bars & wanna strangle
The lines you stitch together so bad, they make Experiment 626 look like an angel
- This was ok. Could have been harsher with it, overall.
I'm on some freaky shit w/ ur chick. Now u GPS'ing ready to ride bruh
But it's ironic you outside tracking her, while I got her inside the crib tied up
- Didn't like this.
U rush verses so the writing's sloppy. Ur concepts are in shackles
But the way you jet, I guess it makes sense why you use so much force in ur battles
- A lot going on here, again. I get the whole JETI bullshit which was played back in 08 but w/e. Didn't like this anyways.
Tough battle to call... Both had some really outdated material here... AKER was played as fuck, Letterman was some what played but also sloppy on some of his executions... Guess I'll go with Letterman, for 1 bar which wasn't played. 626 was ok...
v/Letterman
1 vote received, @Bstill you'll need to be more elaborate than that.
Akers
You had alot of material that were fillers a couple lines that lead to a heavy punch then just tapped him on the chin you had a line or two that actually grab my attention Personals Weren't really personals just fillers with his name in it also the wording in this line through me for a spin
i have explosive lines so voters are quoting mine, ironic ur embarassed yet zelous
the only time letterbomb is if i have em strapped to one that'd make a terrorist jealous
This bar could of been worded alot better instead of it being a punch you made one big filler here gloating on ur self
Letterman
I liked your first linew you opened it up but i have to say the wordplay u used is outplayed u had alot of original concepts that were killed by ur wordplay choice
Ex
U a bitch when u drink. That's why ur girl left & you're lonely
Even if u sip gin u wine.. So u being sad'll be the reason that she's riding my pony
this bar here is one big ass filler and your genuwine wordplay is played
Here is my exlanation Vote Remained AKers
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@Bstill thank you!
borrow, attempt? who u think u fuckin w/ mayne i’ll put a slug in ur brain
the only way u getting a point is when I drag a scalpel across ur jugular vein
- was this supposed to be "getting a point across?" If it was then dope, but bad typo Lol.
i go in on verses, when it comes to this nerds shit no one is quoting it son
cuz u never go inlet but after this battle i have ur chopped up body parts floating in one
- this was cool
i have explosive lines so voters are quoting mine, ironic ur embarassed yet zelous
the only time letterbomb is if i have em strapped to one that'd make a terrorist jealous
- was going good but the making a terrorist jealous fell flat for me
when I got the strap it’s a ruger to ur temple & trust bullets are cruisin
if you got the strap faggot ur taking it from behind by a bull dyke named susan
- lollzz
u from the deep south huh? inbred creep can’t even bag the nastiest of whores
ur the type to find a bitch, trailer home..chloroform her then drag her back to yours
- this was dope lol
Stop keepin old concepts handy, man just bite. I know it's foul
But if this cat scan the archives, maybe he can get some aid to repair that broken style
- ok nice opener
U a bitch when u drink. That's why ur girl left & you're lonely
Even if u sip gin u wine.. So u being sad'll be the reason that she's riding my pony
- was not bad, the so you being sad part took some sting away imo
This dope shit you talkin is fake, dog. I read ur bars & wanna strangle
The lines you stitch together so bad, they make Experiment 626 look like an angel
- blah sorry not feelin it
I'm on some freaky shit w/ ur chick. Now u GPS'ing ready to ride bruh
But it's ironic you outside tracking her, while I got her inside the crib tied up
- didnt hit for me
U rush verses so the writing's sloppy. Ur concepts are in shackles
But the way you jet, I guess it makes sense why you use so much force in ur battles
- I think the concept could hve been dope, but there could have been better execution.
I'll have to go with AKER for the win here. Letterman started with a nice bar. Felt there wasnt as much aggression in lettermans verse. I think AKER came with enough punches to get the W here.
Lions don't lose sleep, over opinions of sheep
On the road to riches money stickin to my cleats
3 votes received
Really close battle...
Letterman you got a nice style with your words and set ups. Thought your best bar was 626 Angel one. The pony concept is waaay played out and some others seemed more like jabs. Got the feeling you rushed the verse cuz i've check some of your other barz and shit was on point. Felt a little flat in this verse...although decent still felt kinda flat.
Aker, i enjoyed your angles and punches man. The opener was clever as you could have went a few different ways with it. The 2nd bar was nice and the name flip worked. But i gotta say the closer was a hard impact punch. Way to close the show.
Overall both were nice, but i gotta go with Aker
Vote Aker
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borrow, attempt? who u think u fuckin w/ mayne i’ll put a slug in ur brain
the only way u getting a point is when I drag a scalpel across ur jugular vein
nice, solid opener
i go in on verses, when it comes to this nerds shit no one is quoting it son
cuz u never go inlet but after this battle i have ur chopped up body parts floating in one
decent, cool nameplay
i have explosive lines so voters are quoting mine, ironic ur embarassed yet zelous
the only time letterbomb is if i have em strapped to one that'd make a terrorist jealous
decent attempt, but wasnt feeling the finish on it
when I got the strap it’s a ruger to ur temple & trust bullets are cruisin
if you got the strap faggot ur taking it from behind by a bull dyke named susan
lol funny here
u from the deep south huh? inbred creep can’t even bag the nastiest of whores
ur the type to find a bitch, trailer home..chloroform her then drag her back to yours
i actually heard this concept used in a battle, forget if it was URL or KOTD, but regardless this was a nice flip
vs
Stop keepin old concepts handy, man just bite. I know it's foul
But if this cat scan the archives, maybe he can get some aid to repair that broken style
ehh wording could have made this better, cool attempt but the wordin killed it dude
U a bitch when u drink. That's why ur girl left & you're lonely
Even if u sip gin u wine.. So u being sad'll be the reason that she's riding my pony
played concept, but havent seen the genuine wordplay used ever, lol it was forced man come on
This dope shit you talkin is fake, dog. I read ur bars & wanna strangle
The lines you stitch together so bad, they make Experiment 626 look like an angel
nice i liked this
I'm on some freaky shit w/ ur chick. Now u GPS'ing ready to ride bruh
But it's ironic you outside tracking her, while I got her inside the crib tied up
eh wasnt feelin this
U rush verses so the writing's sloppy. Ur concepts are in shackles
But the way you jet, I guess it makes sense why you use so much force in ur battles
meh at best, the setup was weird, overall choppy bar
This battle was pretty one sided here, AKER came with a pretty good verse and Letterman had just 1 bar i really liked. Everything else kinda fell flat for me.
Vote: AKER, more consistent and harder hits
AKER - opener was dope,inlet was meh, strap flip was aight,trail her home was dope
vs
Letter - genuine(seen it before, liked ur better), 626,
overall - soft battle imo. both had hits and misses. aker i wasntletterbomb at all. thought inlet was light and prob been used, Letterman i honestly was only feeling two of your bars. your opener was a nice concept but didnt rhyme. "i know its foul" & "broken style" dont rhyme. tracking her and your closer were light as well. so AKer takes this for me with more quoatables and a smoother verse
V/Aker
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