I ask you not to touch me
but you impale my center
ask me if cares are born within
making reasoning a seasoned vet
I respect your vision here
but I am null and void
A quitter in a race not yet ran
Absent 3 minutes before school time...
So please don't touch me..
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I like this. A poignant reminder of a heart's touching distress.
Sad and moving, yet strong in knowing what it needs.
A nice short piece 143.
My favourite part...
'...I respect your vision here
but I am null and void...'
I like it.
That emptiness does something for me.
A nice little piece that has a steady flow and confident tone.
Nice one.
An enjoyable read.
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This is a very nice poem, flow very good
This is so interesting.
A pleasant read, definitely.
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