LM vs Split-eyez (round II)

[LM]

10-15lines
No d/r and all that
No show after check in results in d/q
Blind spit
No time limit


Check in dawg!

[Split-eyez]

aight checkin innnnn

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[LM]

Alright look....I merked you the first time and I'm a do it again/
Your usin pre-written shit....dawg be a man and put down that pen/
You sayin your second wins comin soon....just tell us when/
Dawg we'll throw a party and invite all your favourite men/ (gay joke)
We'll start plannin now for 2010....hire a mansion on top of a hill/
You lack skill but your convinced that your ill/
Actually thats true coz you took an overdose of whack pills/
This is gon' be your 14th loss, it'll be the death of you....I'll even help you write your will/
It'll say 'LM did this kill so everythin goes to L'/
Your played lines, your broken mic and your girl aswell/
Dawg you've stepped up in battles and fell so many times your one of a kind/
It's coz your verses are like a fire....when seen, people run for the exit signs/
Dawg if your brain was elastic you couldn't stretch or expand your mind/
Born Sept1985, kicked out the house for takin your dad from behind/ (gay joke + personal)
So if you ever come to the UK make sure you let me know so I can go and hide/

Peace!!!
Good luck in the votes

[Split-eyez]

Illness to-fill-this- text with expensive raps that Clinton couldn’t even ‘Bill’ this
But feel-this-realness… ya raps are cheap and poor like a ‘Drug Lord’ that was Deal-Less

After this, you need to acknowledge me –with an apology
With you, there’s – no lamer – smash ya mind outta ya skull, that’s why beatin you is a –no brainer-

LM is rockin a dick that’s lingering-limp when he fucks
Even if ya switched to fingering ya still couldn’t get 2 tumbs up

Like Clueless Gurls, sending their Daddy’s credit cards into debt…
I’ve punched this kid harder as my bar ‘lengths against Whonext have Stretched
(bar length – daddy’s anger)

My volts enter skin and my shocks annoy pours , dawg ur style aint gay, but you are so stop puttin ur pe-pe
in boy whores
this dude a thug? HA…. the only blocks u run , come with their own box in toystores

Kid I'll turn this rap into a G-rated movie… better yet a Nickelodeon's show "you pick"
This hoe’s so dumb he thought the crip walk was a motion picture flick

FINISHER:

This battle’s like a concert wit no exits u just stuck in the show,.. this is rape the way i'm verbally fukkin this ho
I don't de-feet quickly,.. I take smoke breaks while cuttin your toes , my punches like organized people,
but u, u just couldnt keep ur ducks in a row

[Split-eyez]

aight... let the votin beginn

UPPINNNNNN'
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[eclipse_one23]

LM, GOT THIS SHIT THOUGH, IM HOLLA BACK CUZ IM HUNGRY
AS HELL......FO' A BATTLE IM SETTIN UP RIGHT NOW

AIGHT LM ~ONE~

[LM]

Originally posted by eclipse_one23
LM, GOT THIS SHIT THOUGH, IM HOLLA BACK CUZ IM HUNGRY
AS HELL......FO' A BATTLE IM SETTIN UP RIGHT NOW

AIGHT LM ~ONE~

1) It aint 1-0 to me coz you can't poll...thanks for the comment tho.
2) What the fuck you settin up.

[eclipse_one23]

WHOA !whoa!damn my bad i mistakin split eyez won this dawg
for my opinion. that shit wuz tight nigga. LAUGH OUT LOUD!
THAT SHIT WAS FUNNY.

~ONE~

[Split-eyez]

^^ thx
appreciate it
uppin... wonna get some votes up here

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[LM]

Originally posted by eclipse_one23
WHOA !whoa!damn my bad i mistakin split eyez won this dawg
for my opinion. that shit wuz tight nigga. LAUGH OUT LOUD!
THAT SHIT WAS FUNNY.

~ONE~

Do yourself a favour and shoot yourself

['PercepTion']

You both posted 2 dope verses, different styles and different approach on things, but to be totally honest, LM came out marginally stronger.

Split, you had a good verse, but i think LM just came out a little stronger. LM however, up your rhymin abilities, the rhymes were a little simplistic...

Vote LM

[FleX]

Flow: S
Punchs: Tie (LM's were played...Splits wernt to strong)
Creativity: Tie
Meta's: LM
Enjoyment: LM

Vote: LM

this was a pretty damn close battle...hard to vote on...Split id consider changing your structure cus people on this board prefer smaller lines with punchs n meta's...good battle tho..LM took it...just

[Its Illytizzle!™]

Flow - Split
Punches - Split
Personals - Neither
Multis - Split
Meta4s - Both
Wordplay - Split
Originality - Both
Rhyme Scheme - LM
Structure - LM


Vote = Split


Good battle fellas... but im confused... why is Splits record so shit when he can spit like that?!?!

This was fairly close but Split took the punches an his flow was on point... mad wordplay.


Peep this:


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88456


Take the time as i did.

[Split-eyez]

^^ yo man, I don't know what's up with my record,
it's just that I've recently changed styles but people aren't really diggin it
but hey, that's kewl... as long as I get to do mah shit it's all good

thanks fo honest comments

[And Death]

Flow - LM
Multies - Split-eyez
Opener - Split-eyez
Finisher - tie
Structure - LM
Wordplay - neither
Originality - Split-eyez
Personals - LM
Enjoyment - tie
Vocabulary - neither
Metaphores - LM
Punch Lines - Split-eyez
Rhyme Scheme - LM

Overall - LM; 5-4

^Close battle y'all