2 hour deadline
10 lines
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BG513
Fredo Kruger
2 hour deadline
10 lines
VERSE HIDDEN
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Last edited by Spree; September 5th, 2016 at 09:50 PM
You've got like 10 minutes @Fredo Kruger
he didnt check in... give him till mid night i'll hide your verse is you want? and get links!
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plus he hasnt seen this thread.
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BG'S VERSE
Wow! Look at you straight beggin me for a rematch! Kid, Relax! I see you!Originally Posted by Fredo Kruger
But you'll lose again, it's pointless, so I'm like ... what the "F" for?? To me, you're just "redo".
Your every bar is at least 3 lines!ya don't know the basics, yet wanna act highly
Son, your lines are low class, and stretched out. That's walmart on black Friday.
Plus you take constructive criticism as hate, so ya had to be the Klass act, kid
Like ya put the "kick me" sticker on your own back, the way ya beggin to get your ass kicked
KO'd you our first battle, when ya had your location "Graveyard" and I made it your home
ironic ya changed it to"diggin graves", and this whole time you've been diggin your own
The difference in us is; that your weak hits don't phase me, but man, mine scar deeply
and it's funny ya yellin "don't quote me" cos ya aren't Eric Wright, but ya damn sure are eazy
Last edited by Spree; September 6th, 2016 at 02:04 PM
Meanwhile , i'm battling a juvenile that's so far up his on ass he had to register a pedophile ,
you a fake ass stephen king the way you go about shit like some quodophile!!
I been calling you out an you respond at last , did all that ducking like a bitch to prevent a lambaste ,
then you pull a bitch move an tag mods just to save your bitch ass!!
Kruger don't just appear in a nightmare , dropping all that bullshit so youngin get placed with a diaper in a wheelchair,
then roll your childish ass off a cliff call that an abusive childcare!!
Your personals wack as fuck an hell of off, you stretch the truth like a bitch just to win a brawl ,
an like new years the whole site's witnessing how you drop the ball!!
Its the lames like you who makes the net a disgrace, promo'n your wack ass website like a open showcase,
Ima run your ass off these forums as quick as Kill Spree made your occupation displace!!
peep'd your weak ass forum running off SMF, tried to promo it on rapbattles where its live but even there you seem to bore them, so here's advice for that dead ass site of yours: tell Kill Spree ask an admin how to really gain a quorum!!
Smh.....
open for votes.
next freepost/sway in the battle thread is an auto DQ.
bump
I would vote but your verse is hidden on my screen
Wow! Look at you straight beggin me for a rematch! Kid, Relax! I see you!
But you'll lose again, it's pointless, so I'm like ... what the "F" for?? To me, you're just "redo".
Your every bar is at least 3 lines! ya don't know the basics, yet wanna act highly
Son, your lines are low class, and stretched out. That's walmart on black Friday.
Plus you take constructive criticism as hate, so ya had to be the Klass act, kid
Like ya put the "kick me" sticker on your own back, the way ya beggin to get your ass kicked
KO'd you our first battle, when ya had your location "Graveyard" and I made it your home
ironic ya changed it to"diggin graves", and this whole time you've been diggin your own
The difference in us is; that your weak hits don't phase me, but man, mine scar deeply
and it's funny ya yellin "don't quote me" cos ya aren't Eric Wright, but ya damn sure are eazy
18/50
26/50 MVGT: BG
complete filler
VS
Wow! Look at you straight beggin me for a rematch! Kid, Relax! I see you!
But you'll lose again, it's pointless, so I'm like ... what the "F" for?? To me, you're just "redo".
KO'd you our first battle, when ya had your location "Graveyard" and I made it your home
ironic ya changed it to"diggin graves", and this whole time you've been diggin your own
Vote= BG.... not much of a competition
Wow! Look at you straight beggin me for a rematch! Kid, Relax! I see you!
But you'll lose again, it's pointless, so I'm like ... what the "F" for?? To me, you're just "redo".
>>Haha nice 4/5
Your every bar is at least 3 lines! ya don't know the basics, yet wanna act highly
Son, your lines are low class, and stretched out. That's walmart on black Friday.
>>decent 2/5
Plus you take constructive criticism as hate, so ya had to be the Klass act, kid
Like ya put the "kick me" sticker on your own back, the way ya beggin to get your ass kicked
>>ok 2/5
KO'd you our first battle, when ya had your location "Graveyard" and I made it your home
ironic ya changed it to"diggin graves", and this whole time you've been diggin your own
>>slick personal 4/5
The difference in us is; that your weak hits don't phase me, but man, mine scar deeply
and it's funny ya yellin "don't quote me" cos ya aren't Eric Wright, but ya damn sure are eazy
>>nice close 3/5
Total: 15/25
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Meanwhile , i'm battling a juvenile that's so far up his on ass he had to register a pedophile ,
you a fake ass stephen king the way you go about shit like some quodophile!!
>>No 0/5
I been calling you out an you respond at last , did all that ducking like a bitch to prevent a lambaste ,
then you pull a bitch move an tag mods just to save your bitch ass!!
>>No 0/5
Kruger don't just appear in a nightmare , dropping all that bullshit so youngin get placed with a diaper in a wheelchair,
then roll your childish ass off a cliff call that an abusive childcare!!
>>No 0/5
Your personals wack as fuck an hell of off, you stretch the truth like a bitch just to win a brawl ,
an like new years the whole site's witnessing how you drop the ball!!
>>No 0/5
Its the lames like you who makes the net a disgrace, promo'n your wack ass website like a open showcase,
Ima run your ass off these forums as quick as Kill Spree made your occupation displace!!
>>No 0/5
peep'd your weak ass forum running off SMF, tried to promo it on rapbattles where its live but even there you seem to bore them, so here's advice for that dead ass site of yours: tell Kill Spree ask an admin how to really gain a quorum!!
>>No 0/5
Total: 0/30
Vote- BG
This was a bodybag!
Its the lames like you who makes the net a disgrace, promo'n your wack ass website like a open showcase,
Ima run your ass off these forums as quick as Kill Spree made your occupation displace!!
overall this verse had a lot of misses, dated-concepts and statement-punches = bad writing, old ideas and lack of humor/wit in your bars.
vs.
Wow! Look at you straight beggin me for a rematch! Kid, Relax! I see you!
But you'll lose again, it's pointless, so I'm like ... what the "F" for?? To me, you're just "redo".
KO'd you our first battle, when ya had your location "Graveyard" and I made it your home
ironic ya changed it to"diggin graves", and this whole time you've been diggin your own
overall this verse had decent concepts and executions. i really liked "diggin graves", that shit was slick and had a lot of attention to detail in it that most of us wouldnt even have thought about.
MVGT: BG513
He won, this was a one-sided battle even if you compare the punches that missed.
Last edited by OG Maestro; September 17th, 2016 at 05:18 PM
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