10 lines
due Monday
house rules
check in faggot
10 lines
due Monday
house rules
check in faggot
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my verse will be racist & disrespectful as fuck
@KnowP
Wouldn't expect anything less from a trump supporter
heard u work w/ handicapped kids..
proof the Lord makes mistakes.. so kids its not your fault
& i'll tell everyone of them retards they're God's throw away.. that's Codealt
u mod tourneys, choosing who's in from first dude to the last
ur left in charge of Picking the Field, cuz ur so used to doing that
i drive a three quarter ton pick-up with a confederate flag
if P behind the wheel of a truck, hopefully his black ass getting dragged
got nappy hair & a flared nose, til my fists set it closed
they Pack a Wallop, like when ur grandparents were on one gettin hosed
question Know.. u wanna banana clip, monkey? yes or no?
you'll get the Cancun, & his body'll wash up on a beach in Mexico
10. @KnowP
Last edited by Spree; March 4th, 2017 at 10:26 AM
@KnowP
you posting up for this battle ? verse is due tonight
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its murdaaaaaa
Notti put his boot in yo ass, surprised you aint shittin laces
i'd never talk a walk in your shoes, cause id probably start seein other niggas faces
face it you're worthless, purpose is just to be a punchin bag
get left with soo many colors on your body, you could double for the gay pride flag
plethora swears he holds the canon, don't believe that. dude is gay
last time you got close to a trigga, Trey Songz was signing autographs back stage
kp send opponents on permanent vacay, punches leave u gon bruh
one upper cut will make you island somewhere between Hawaii and somoa
shake my dreads n leave u dead, murked u before soo you know its true
everyone know that I'm Cole as fuk, one finger in the sky will make you have DEja VU
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I'll get my links in the morning if that's coo @Notti
proof the Lord makes mistakes.. so kids its not your fault
& i'll tell everyone of them retards they're God's throw away.. that's Codealt
Cool concept but the wording fell short
u mod tourneys, choosing who's in from first dude to the last
ur left in charge of Picking the Field, cuz ur so used to doing that
could've been better
i drive a three quarter ton pick-up with a confederate flag
if P behind the wheel of a truck, hopefully his black ass getting dragged
fuckin racist but funny, I'm going to hell
got nappy hair & a flared nose, til my fists set it closed
they Pack a Wallop, like when ur grandparents were on one gettin hosed
cool
question Know.. u wanna banana clip, monkey? yes or no?
you'll get the Cancun, & his body'll wash up on a beach in Mexico
nice
Started off rocky but once them race punches came in you were firing on all cylinders. Think those last two bars were probably my favorite. Harsh as fuck and direct. Good stuff.
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Notti put his boot in yo ass, surprised you aint shittin laces
i'd never talk a walk in your shoes, cause id probably start seein other niggas faces
Not feeling it
face it you're worthless, purpose is just to be a punchin bag
get left with soo many colors on your body, you could double for the gay pride flag
Decent concept but your wording made it come off a bit abrupt
plethora swears he holds the canon, don't believe that. dude is gay
last time you got close to a trigga, Trey Songz was signing autographs back stage
Eh, not really into it
kp send opponents on permanent vacay, punches leave u gon bruh
one upper cut will make you island somewhere between Hawaii and somoa
cool
shake my dreads n leave u dead, murked u before soo you know its true
everyone know that I'm Cole as fuk, one finger in the sky will make you have DEja VU
eh not feeling it
Couple concepts wasted with poor wording. That island line was cool though.
Overall, Plethora was harsher and more consistent while I felt KnowP's wording kinda backfired most of his potential.
proof the Lord makes mistakes.. so kids its not your fault
& i'll tell everyone of them retards they're God's throw away.. that's Codealt
very disrespectful to the kids.. very insulting.. creative.. but no diss at KnowP and for that its a miss
u mod tourneys, choosing who's in from first dude to the last
ur left in charge of Picking the Field, cuz ur so used to doing that
this was good
i drive a three quarter ton pick-up with a confederate flag
if P behind the wheel of a truck, hopefully his black ass getting dragged
this was wack asf
got nappy hair & a flared nose, til my fists set it closed
they Pack a Wallop, like when ur grandparents were on one gettin hosed
ehh, decent at best, not rlly feelin it
question Know.. u wanna banana clip, monkey? yes or no?
you'll get the Cancun, & his body'll wash up on a beach in Mexico
this was a cool closer
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Notti put his boot in yo ass, surprised you aint shittin laces
i'd never talk a walk in your shoes, cause id probably start seein other niggas faces
ehhh, not feelin this one
face it you're worthless, purpose is just to be a punchin bag
get left with soo many colors on your body, you could double for the gay pride flag
this is another miss imo
plethora swears he holds the canon, don't believe that. dude is gay
last time you got close to a trigga, Trey Songz was signing autographs back stage
this is pretty much a flip on remy ma trigga/trey songz bar to nicki minaj.. decent'ish.. hers was better
kp send opponents on permanent vacay, punches leave u gon bruh
one upper cut will make you island somewhere between Hawaii and somoa
make you "I Land" ?? thas wack.. forced
shake my dreads n leave u dead, murked u before soo you know its true
everyone know that I'm Cole as fuk, one finger in the sky will make you have DEja VU
cool attempt at a punch, concept decent.. wording fell flat
Overall: This was pretty much a landslide. I didn't think the concepts were any good at all for his first 2-3 bars, and when he did have good concepts the wording fell flat. Felt this verse was rushed, even though you had ample time to write. Plethora was racist asf this battle, it didn't have the impact he was intending idt because a lot of the punches were wack asf. a few of them hit hard tho, or were funny enough to hit.
v/ Plethora for the all around better verse.
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Plethora has a low key racist verse and know literally had an island wordplay and walk in your shoes punch in 2017. So idk. Plethora wasn't really creative with his punches it was legit heavy handed racism lmao. Missed for me tbh. I mean the heaviness of it was there. But it was just pretty much rhyming racial slurs and stereotypes. Didn't dig the verse at all. Know had played stuff, the trigga trey was weak remy ma did it better j Cole one was obvious no need to capitalize Cole and the gay flag one was meh. Mvgt goes to know because plethoras verse was off putting
proof the Lord makes mistakes.. so kids its not your fault
& i'll tell everyone of them retards they're God's throw away.. that's Codealt
didnt get this sorry
u mod tourneys, choosing who's in from first dude to the last
ur left in charge of Picking the Field, cuz ur so used to doing that
okay decent concept i guess
i drive a three quarter ton pick-up with a confederate flag
if P behind the wheel of a truck, hopefully his black ass getting dragged
ehh i was confused by who p was is it knowp or is it plethora get me
got nappy hair & a flared nose, til my fists set it closed
they Pack a Wallop, like when ur grandparents were on one gettin hosed
forced the endrhyme here
question Know.. u wanna banana clip, monkey? yes or no?
you'll get the Cancun, & his body'll wash up on a beach in Mexico
best bar but it wasnt that dope at all sorry
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Notti put his boot in yo ass, surprised you aint shittin laces
i'd never talk a walk in your shoes, cause id probably start seein other niggas faces
longbar method grammer edit in the second line still dope concept tho
face it you're worthless, purpose is just to be a punchin bag
get left with soo many colors on your body, you could double for the gay pride flag
that was good didnt like the gay bar ending but it was still best concept thats been used yet in this battle
plethora swears he holds the canon, don't believe that. dude is gay
last time you got close to a trigga, Trey Songz was signing autographs back stage
that was funny i liked that...
kp send opponents on permanent vacay, punches leave u gon bruh
one upper cut will make you island somewhere between Hawaii and somoa
yes i loved it that was funny still finding him like chilling somewhere in the pacific ocean it was funny even if the concept was a bit endearing like a body found floating around you know what i mean....
shake my dreads n leave u dead, murked u before soo you know its true
everyone know that I'm Cole as fuk, one finger in the sky will make you have DEja VU
alright this was alright the finger in the air i guess wasnt the best to be honest but it was still better then his opponent
overall: a bit too much attitude fellas i mean this is what a text battle site u straight start pimping like you had personals to throw at eachother yall probably have no clue who the other guy is really but anyways ya say youve battled before but if im going to pick someone i realize like yeah we might battled once or twice you feel me but you still both of you not making much of an impact in this battle.... im going to have to go with knowp for being a bit more creative even though he still needs work..... okay goodluck to both writers im sure you guys will have more presentations for me to engage with like battles like this... anyways yeah im pretty sure knowp took this battle.... though
vote:// knowp
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proof the Lord makes mistakes.. so kids its not your fault
& i'll tell everyone of them retards they're God's throw away.. that's Codealt
didnt get this sorry
u mod tourneys, choosing who's in from first dude to the last
ur left in charge of Picking the Field, cuz ur so used to doing that
okay decent concept i guess
i drive a three quarter ton pick-up with a confederate flag
if P behind the wheel of a truck, hopefully his black ass getting dragged
ehh i was confused by who p was is it knowp or is it plethora get me
got nappy hair & a flared nose, til my fists set it closed
they Pack a Wallop, like when ur grandparents were on one gettin hosed
forced the endrhyme here
question Know.. u wanna banana clip, monkey? yes or no?
you'll get the Cancun, & his body'll wash up on a beach in Mexico
best bar but it wasnt that dope at all sorry
vs.
Notti put his boot in yo ass, surprised you aint shittin laces
i'd never talk a walk in your shoes, cause id probably start seein other niggas faces
longbar method grammer edit in the second line still dope concept tho
face it you're worthless, purpose is just to be a punchin bag
get left with soo many colors on your body, you could double for the gay pride flag
that was good didnt like the gay bar ending but it was still best concept thats been used yet in this battle
plethora swears he holds the canon, don't believe that. dude is gay
last time you got close to a trigga, Trey Songz was signing autographs back stage
that was funny i liked that...
kp send opponents on permanent vacay, punches leave u gon bruh
one upper cut will make you island somewhere between Hawaii and somoa
yes i loved it that was funny still finding him like chilling somewhere in the pacific ocean it was funny even if the concept was a bit endearing like a body found floating around you know what i mean....
shake my dreads n leave u dead, murked u before soo you know its true
everyone know that I'm Cole as fuk, one finger in the sky will make you have DEja VU
alright this was alright the finger in the air i guess wasnt the best to be honest but it was still better then his opponent
overall: a bit too much attitude fellas i mean this is what a text battle site u straight start pimping like you had personals to throw at eachother yall probably have no clue who the other guy is really but anyways ya say youve battled before but if im going to pick someone i realize like yeah we might battled once or twice you feel me but you still both of you not making much of an impact in this battle.... im going to have to go with knowp for being a bit more creative even though he still needs work..... okay goodluck to both writers im sure you guys will have more presentations for me to engage with like battles like this... anyways yeah im pretty sure knowp took this battle.... though
vote:// knowp
a labyrinth of power.....
Last edited by KnowP; March 7th, 2017 at 09:39 PM
Plethora
proof the Lord makes mistakes.. so kids its not your fault
& i'll tell everyone of them retards they're God's throw away.. that's Codealt
Not feeling this bar, wording and execution made it fall short
u mod tourneys, choosing who's in from first dude to the last
ur left in charge of Picking the Field, cuz ur so used to doing that
This was alright, had some humor in it
i drive a three quarter ton pick-up with a confederate flag
if P behind the wheel of a truck, hopefully his black ass getting dragged
Not feeling this bar either, thought the concept was limited as is and just didn't come off strong
got nappy hair & a flared nose, til my fists set it closed
they Pack a Wallop, like when ur grandparents were on one gettin hosed
Just alright,
question Know.. u wanna banana clip, monkey? yes or no?
you'll get the Cancun, & his body'll wash up on a beach in Mexico
another one that was just alright
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KnowP
Notti put his boot in yo ass, surprised you aint shittin laces
i'd never talk a walk in your shoes, cause id probably start seein other niggas faces
Not feeling the opener in this one
face it you're worthless, purpose is just to be a punchin bag
get left with soo many colors on your body, you could double for the gay pride flag
Light, and a stretch on the concept..
plethora swears he holds the canon, don't believe that. dude is gay
last time you got close to a trigga, Trey Songz was signing autographs back stage
Pretty cool punch,
kp send opponents on permanent vacay, punches leave u gon bruh
one upper cut will make you island somewhere between Hawaii and somoa
Not smooth, awkward wording and not feeling the punch
shake my dreads n leave u dead, murked u before soo you know its true
everyone know that I'm Cole as fuk, one finger in the sky will make you have DEja VU
Just alright
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MVGT: Plethora - TBH after I read his verse, I didn't think he would have enough to win. But both opponents struggled to come up with some fire. Few alright jabs from both, nothing heavyweight. I thought plethora had better wording and slighty more consistency than KP in this one.
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3-2 lets get some more votes in here. I like the voting in FL's lately fellas, lets keep it up.
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proof the Lord makes mistakes.. so kids its not your fault
& i'll tell everyone of them retards they're God's throw away.. that's Codealt
Attempt - no
u mod tourneys, choosing who's in from first dude to the last
ur left in charge of Picking the Field, cuz ur so used to doing that
Think this bar would’ve hit hard if the setup gave it some momentum - good bar tho
i drive a three quarter ton pick-up with a confederate flag
if P behind the wheel of a truck, hopefully his black ass getting dragged
Ouch
got nappy hair & a flared nose, til my fists set it closed
they Pack a Wallop, like when ur grandparents were on one gettin hosed
Ouch again
question Know.. u wanna banana clip, monkey? yes or no?
you'll get the Cancun, & his body'll wash up on a beach in Mexico
I see where you were going – wording threw me off
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Notti put his boot in yo ass, surprised you aint shittin laces
i'd never talk a walk in your shoes, cause id probably start seein other niggas faces
Dope bar
face it you're worthless, purpose is just to be a punchin bag
get left with soo many colors on your body, you could double for the gay pride flag
Attempt - not that good
plethora swears he holds the canon, don't believe that. dude is gay
last time you got close to a trigga, Trey Songz was signing autographs back stage
A bit played out but it was ok
kp send opponents on permanent vacay, punches leave u gon bruh
one upper cut will make you island somewhere between Hawaii and somoa
Not feeling this bar
shake my dreads n leave u dead, murked u before soo you know its true
everyone know that I'm Cole as fuk, one finger in the sky will make you have déjà vu
Wording could’ve really gave this bar a better hit – fell short
Both battlers had a couple hits and misses. I think Plethora dissed his opponent pretty good but he had maybe 2 bars that actually gave his verse some life. KnowP didn't really bring much either but he actually made more attempts on wordplay, and some ok punchlines. He stayed consistent with his punches whether they hit or miss. Pleth was a bit up and down for me - his racist bars were pretty played and simple but they still stung for what its worth. Considering who really kept up the most blows, I'll say KnowP gets my vote.
v/ KnowP