FL CONTENDER MATCH
10-20 lines
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@Joe Boston @plethora
Joe Boston
Plethora
FL CONTENDER MATCH
10-20 lines
House rules
Check in due Wednesday 11:59 PM PST
Verses due Friday 11:59 PM PST
@Joe Boston @plethora
Last edited by Notti; March 6th, 2017 at 10:16 PM
Hmmm really? Ok lol
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Here.
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Im tired of weak fucks like you i aint even wasting my breath
I'll kill you could give a fuck if u were Big, cuz after we wont be celebrating 20 yrs of death
I can hit em with the strong left but an easy KO would be too boring
So when i Smack the shit outta him other rappers would wanna pay me for the DVD recording
Ur bitch tells me u have a hard time affording shit u keep ur budget strict
I fuck her on piles of hundreds, anytime u c notes she always leaving u for some other dick
Im a prick get over it at least i keep my ego recognizable
I asked ur BM,X about ur rep they both told me ur the same broke nigga that rides a shitty bicycle
How in this text shit u call urself a reliable force?
I'll take ur wordplay and create an unidentifiable corpse
I'll take his head and put in on his front porch just name the fucking location
Blowing out his brains only takes a penny for his thoughts,thats my token of appreciation
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Ext.
used to beef with k.t.a. members til u agreed to come join
made a Pact in the End.. to let everyone fill ur hole at some point
go around the law. take joe on a tv show to bust his teeth in
& Drop Boston Legal like execs aint wanna renew another season
drum clap. one blast from the can lift u up when gun in hand
iron make ur body soar.. thats a gym reference ur fat ass'll never understand
ever since u joined K.T.A. they've fallen off & get beaten with ease
way u've come in & brought Kills down shouldnt just be security but chief of police
@plethora did u fucking swallow two bars?
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Get them or im.closing this shit u tend to pull this shit alot
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Im tired of weak fucks like you i aint even wasting my breath
I'll kill you could give a fuck if u were Big, cuz after we wont be celebrating 20 yrs of death
Wording is a bit off
I can hit em with the strong left but an easy KO would be too boring
So when i Smack the shit outta him other rappers would wanna pay me for the DVD recording
Not feeling it
Ur bitch tells me u have a hard time affording shit u keep ur budget strict
I fuck her on piles of hundreds, anytime u c notes she always leaving u for some other dick
Wording again
Im a prick get over it at least i keep my ego recognizable
I asked ur BM,X about ur rep they both told me ur the same broke nigga that rides a shitty bicycle
I see what you did but it felt short in the end
How in this text shit u call urself a reliable force?
I'll take ur wordplay and create an unidentifiable corpse
Too short, didn't give yourself enough room to properly build
I'll take his head and put in on his front porch just name the fucking location
Blowing out his brains only takes a penny for his thoughts,thats my token of appreciation
Decent
I feel like you struggled a lot with wording in this battle personally. Some was too scrambled, some just didn't connect the way it could've. Some decent concepts here but ya wording just ... eh bruh.
vs
used to beef with k.t.a. members til u agreed to come join
made a Pact in the End.. to let everyone fill ur hole at some point
Eh, cool concept but the connection fell short
go around the law. take joe on a tv show to bust his teeth in
& Drop Boston Legal like execs aint wanna renew another season
decent
drum clap. one blast from the can lift u up when gun in hand
iron make ur body soar.. thats a gym reference ur fat ass'll never understand
lol
ever since u joined K.T.A. they've fallen off & get beaten with ease
way u've come in & brought Kills down shouldnt just be security but chief of police
fuck you lol
Cool verse, started weak but progressively got heavier. Fuck you for dissing KTA but good shit nonetheless.
vote Plethora for the better, heavier verse.
0=miss
1=light jab
2=good punch
3=haymaker
Im tired of weak fucks like you i aint even wasting my breath
I'll kill you could give a fuck if u were Big, cuz after we wont be celebrating 20 yrs of death
>>1...light start
I can hit em with the strong left but an easy KO would be too boring
So when i Smack the shit outta him other rappers would wanna pay me for the DVD recording
>>2...good punch bro
Ur bitch tells me u have a hard time affording shit u keep ur budget strict
I fuck her on piles of hundreds, anytime u c notes she always leaving u for some other dick
>>1...kinda funny tho
Im a prick get over it at least i keep my ego recognizable
I asked ur BM,X about ur rep they both told me ur the same broke nigga that rides a shitty bicycle
>>1...wordin issues, kinda played too but it did make me laugh.
How in this text shit u call urself a reliable force?
I'll take ur wordplay and create an unidentifiable corpse
>>1...dope flow n rhyme, but not a hard punch tho
I'll take his head and put in on his front porch just name the fucking location
Blowing out his brains only takes a penny for his thoughts,thats my token of appreciation
>>2...dope finish
Total: 8
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used to beef with k.t.a. members til u agreed to come join
made a Pact in the End.. to let everyone fill ur hole at some point
>>0 - pause...miss
go around the law. take joe on a tv show to bust his teeth in
& Drop Boston Legal like execs aint wanna renew another season
>>2, lol.. Setup was horrible but the overall concept was cool w/ a nice nameplay
drum clap. one blast from the can lift u up when gun in hand
iron make ur body soar.. thats a gym reference ur fat ass'll never understand
>>3..dope! And hilarious!
ever since u joined K.T.A. they've fallen off & get beaten with ease
way u've come in & brought Kills down shouldnt just be security but chief of police
>>1, light
Total: 6
Mvgt - lamb chop play along
Joe Boston
Im tired of weak fucks like you i aint even wasting my breath
I'll kill you could give a fuck if u were Big, cuz after we wont be celebrating 20 yrs of death
Execution was wording, meh punch overall
I can hit em with the strong left but an easy KO would be too boring
So when i Smack the shit outta him other rappers would wanna pay me for the DVD recording
pretty funny, I like it
Ur bitch tells me u have a hard time affording shit u keep ur budget strict
I fuck her on piles of hundreds, anytime u c notes she always leaving u for some other dick
okay punch, could've been more creative with this one
Im a prick get over it at least i keep my ego recognizable
I asked ur BM,X about ur rep they both told me ur the same broke nigga that rides a shitty bicycle
Wording messed the punch up on this one, I liked the concept though
How in this text shit u call urself a reliable force?
I'll take ur wordplay and create an unidentifiable corpse
No, smooth but not good for a text battle
I'll take his head and put in on his front porch just name the fucking location
Blowing out his brains only takes a penny for his thoughts,thats my token of appreciation
Wordy again, but okay close
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Plethora
used to beef with k.t.a. members til u agreed to come join
made a Pact in the End.. to let everyone fill ur hole at some point
this fell short for me
go around the law. take joe on a tv show to bust his teeth in
& Drop Boston Legal like execs aint wanna renew another season
this was a great nameplay and concept, wording definitely hindered the impact of it
drum clap. one blast from the can lift u up when gun in hand
iron make ur body soar.. thats a gym reference ur fat ass'll never understand
pretty funny, could have a bit smoother wording
ever since u joined K.T.A. they've fallen off & get beaten with ease
way u've come in & brought Kills down shouldnt just be security but chief of police
decent way to close this off
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MVGT: Joe Boston - Pleth limited himself with only 4 bars where he didn't have much room for mistake and I thought he started off pretty light. Both could have had better wording in areas. This did come down to joe just having brought more to the table here. While Pleth closed it off well, I thought it was enough to make this a close battle but not enough for the vote IMO.
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Im tired of weak fucks like you i aint even wasting my breath
I'll kill you could give a fuck if u were Big, cuz after we wont be celebrating 20 yrs of death
ehh it was okay but why celebrate a death??
I can hit em with the strong left but an easy KO would be too boring
So when i Smack the shit outta him other rappers would wanna pay me for the DVD recording
okay at best i see the rhyme your concepts seem straight so does hte set up but hte bar fell short of something bigger
Ur bitch tells me u have a hard time affording shit u keep ur budget strict
I fuck her on piles of hundreds, anytime u c notes she always leaving u for some other dick
ehh not really feeling this didnt like the fact you were dissing on him for having a girl... i mean who cares if he got a girl...
Im a prick get over it at least i keep my ego recognizable
I asked ur BM,X about ur rep they both told me ur the same broke nigga that rides a shitty bicycle
umm this was alright at best fail to see the nameplay really it was too broad i didnt know what direction you were taking with it although the endrhyme was alright tho
How in this text shit u call urself a reliable force?
I'll take ur wordplay and create an unidentifiable corpse
this was a bit better but it still could have been doper especially for a contendership it seemed to basic at this point i mean contendor is the fight before the fight...
I'll take his head and put in on his front porch just name the fucking location
Blowing out his brains only takes a penny for his thoughts,thats my token of appreciation
again this was nice but i just felt like it needed more a bit too simple for me
vs.
used to beef with k.t.a. members til u agreed to come join
made a Pact in the End.. to let everyone fill ur hole at some point
ehh why would i ever pack in the end feel me??
go around the law. take joe on a tv show to bust his teeth in
& Drop Boston Legal like execs aint wanna renew another season
okay i guess but where is all this legal exec shit coming from?? sortve seen that??
drum clap. one blast from the can lift u up when gun in hand
iron make ur body soar.. thats a gym reference ur fat ass'll never understand
didnt like the weapons really and then maybe the fact that joe is a lazy fat piece of shit... idk where you were heading with this sortve
ever since u joined K.T.A. they've fallen off & get beaten with ease
way u've come in & brought Kills down shouldnt just be security but chief of police
thsi was better i liked this a bit but the punch wasnt cool is the only thing wrong with it......
i just didnt like the approach you used... and some of your bars were too offensive and i didnt enjoy them for thsi reason so i have to give my vote to joe boston if this counts er watever but thats how i felt i thought joe boston was much more comprehensible of the two verses heree...
vote: joe boston
a labyrinth of power.....
Ok please deduct this vote @Notti @Kill Spree this dude still dont get it time after time.
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Im tired of weak fucks like you i aint even wasting my breath
I'll kill you could give a fuck if u were Big, cuz after we wont be celebrating 20 yrs of death
wasnt feeling this... worded aweful
I can hit em with the strong left but an easy KO would be too boring
So when i Smack the shit outta him other rappers would wanna pay me for the DVD recording
nah.. this was a miss for me aswell joe
Ur bitch tells me u have a hard time affording shit u keep ur budget strict
I fuck her on piles of hundreds, anytime u c notes she always leaving u for some other dick
meh wasnt a fan of the punch tho the conept was nice and should have been worded better. Light jab at best
Im a prick get over it at least i keep my ego recognizable
I asked ur BM,X about ur rep they both told me ur the same broke nigga that rides a shitty bicycle
Again wording was choppy but i fuck with this bar.
How in this text shit u call urself a reliable force?
I'll take ur wordplay and create an unidentifiable corpse
lazy
I'll take his head and put in on his front porch just name the fucking location
Blowing out his brains only takes a penny for his thoughts,thats my token of appreciation
nah weak closer bro
vs
used to beef with k.t.a. members til u agreed to come join
made a Pact in the End.. to let everyone fill ur hole at some point
Dope
go around the law. take joe on a tv show to bust his teeth in
& Drop Boston Legal like execs aint wanna renew another season
naw stretch here
drum clap. one blast from the can lift u up when gun in hand
iron make ur body soar.. thats a gym reference ur fat ass'll never understand
funny bar but this was lazy tbh...
ever since u joined K.T.A. they've fallen off & get beaten with ease
way u've come in & brought Kills down shouldnt just be security but chief of police
I fuck with this
These closers are dope........
Overall.... Garbage battle tbh yall. seemed last minute lazy. Pleth had maybe have a quotable but he didnt meet the bar limit while joe did so I'm edging this to joe
v/joe