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Bomb Bard
Monolith
5 bars due in 48
@Monolith check
Check.
Bout to drop these 10 lines like landmines son watch where you stepping/
I peeped ya shit you got thin rhymes, wasting my time, fuck you an wherever you repping//
I'll have you feeling like ya laying wrapped up in a panel van, veins pumping with an ounce-of-glass/
I ain't playing around but you'd think I was a globe trotter the way I'm bout to bounce-that-ass//
You're a light weight kid, no threat, so I ain't even ducking the bombard/
But I'll sling words like blades that cut deep enough to leave ya mom-scarred//
Yo let's talk true-facts, this dude quick to jump in a battle with the new-cat/
Ya skill was too-flat so ya flew back an Networth was in the comments like you shoulda knew-that//
Now you wanna roll it back after ducking and asking for the extension/
Man alright but after this is over you should quit rap until I give you the fucking permission//
Claimin U wear snake skins & Leather..Doubt that act is glowing
No way Mon T Python...But his verses are an example of a laughable showing
Cos I N/S'd? U honor role.. But now Im'a leave this FGT Scard
We look @ U as the Nerdy type, A Failure who has tha same Class in Bars
Let me find out U got a son. That terrorist can get punched in the chin
Even he thinks ur verses have sad execution, So I'll shoot ur brains out in front of the kid
Catch this Boy N black runnin up...& I'll leave'm hurt
Punches have Ur whole style swelled in different colors..Thats a reaper verse
W/The gun I go Ape shit! 1 shot I'm done W/a dweeb
Fuck Mon Key! Just reading his bars makes me wanna swing from a branch & hang from a tree
Lol you showed up this time. How bout that.
Best of luck to ya.
Bout to drop these 10 lines like landmines son watch where you stepping/
I peeped ya shit you got thin rhymes, wasting my time, fuck you an wherever you repping//
I'll have you feeling like ya laying wrapped up in a panel van, veins pumping with an ounce-of-glass/
I ain't playing around but you'd think I was a globe trotter the way I'm bout to bounce-that-ass//
You're a light weight kid, no threat, so I ain't even ducking the bombard/
But I'll sling words like blades that cut deep enough to leave ya mom-scarred//
---nothin clever about the opener, globe trotter was a PAUSE moment but light at best, the 3rd bar was nothin special
Yo let's talk true-facts, this dude quick to jump in a battle with the new-cat/
Ya skill was too-flat so ya flew back an Networth was in the comments like you shoulda knew-that//
Now you wanna roll it back after ducking and asking for the extension/
Man alright but after this is over you should quit rap until I give you the fucking permission//
---these lines werent stingers. Pretty much just statements
Vs
Claimin U wear snake skins & Leather..Doubt that act is glowing
No way Mon T Python...But his verses are an example of a laughable showing
Cos I N/S'd? U honor role.. But now Im'a leave this FGT Scard
We look @ U as the Nerdy type, A Failure who has tha same Class in Bars
Let me find out U got a son. That terrorist can get punched in the chin
Even he thinks ur verses have sad execution, So I'll shoot ur brains out in front of the kid
---opener was nice, class in bars was meh, 3rd bar was mediocre
Catch this Boy N black runnin up...& I'll leave'm hurt
Punches have Ur whole style swelled in different colors..Thats a reaper verse
W/The gun I go Ape shit! 1 shot I'm done W/a dweeb
Fuck Mon Key! Just reading his bars makes me wanna swing from a branch & hang from a tree
---reaper verse was pretty cool, closer could have been way better, execution was off
V/Bomb bard.... better concepts n delivery
yeah definitely bombard had this... he was much more creative... theres not much to say about this battle... the other dude had some decent rhymes i guess but he was just trying too hard just didnt come off the way i think you were trying to say if you get me... your punches didnt come across very creative if you feel me whereas the other dude was writing a battle verse that you could kind of like understand more because he used the basic idea of a battle and he had a much more well rounded verse.... i dont know what else you want me to say about this... not like the best battle but i did like bombards verse he had a couple good hits in there... good for you guys for battling anyways....
vote: bombard
a labyrinth of power.....
Lol okay. Well that's 1 vote so far.
lol whatever... what was wrong with my vote???
a labyrinth of power.....
Uppin
yeah i also have bombard from what i understood from this battle i'll try to write more cause people like dia are like yo i aint leave enough feed but i mean clearly bombard was the better writer here he was more complex and even had a couple punches or knowledge er whatever you want to call it... i think you guys are both top teir writers it wasnt that bombard was a much better writer it was just he did it with more class and it just outwrote his opponent i dont know in monoliths defense maybe it was because he dropped first but i dont like that kind of approach of thinking that one person was better then the other just because of when the verses were dropped or how thye were dropped im just trying to take each piece for what it was and in my opinion i think bombard had hte better verse ya dig... so yeah...
vote: bomb bard
a labyrinth of power.....
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lol dope intro? Nah you start off with a little bit about yourself and your achievements, not bad not bad I can dig it
Re: Bomb bard vs monolith
Bout to drop these 10 lines like landmines son watch where you stepping/
I peeped ya shit you got thin rhymes, wasting my time, fuck you an wherever you repping//
the only diss here is calling his rhymes thin and I’m not feelin that, if you like em thick das on you potna but weak attempt here
I'll have you feeling like ya laying wrapped up in a panel van, veins pumping with an ounce-of-glass/
I ain't playing around but you'd think I was a globe trotter the way I'm bout to bounce-that-ass//
excuse me? Did you just....nvm just forget it. Big no to this bar
You're a light weight kid, no threat, so I ain't even ducking the bombard/
But I'll sling words like blades that cut deep enough to leave ya mom-scarred//
you coulda used the concept differently. “I sling dicks, it’ll bounce that ass”...since you’re apparently on that ish, I’ll say this was decent thouhh for the most part
Yo let's talk true-facts, this dude quick to jump in a battle with the new-cat/
Ya skill was too-flat so ya flew back an Networth was in the comments like you shoulda knew-that//
notnfeeling this too much fam
Now you wanna roll it back after ducking and asking for the extension/
Man alright but after this is over you should quit rap until I give you the fucking permission//
i suppose if I threw on some type of ancient Canadian accent this might have rhymed. Saying you’re his legal guardian isn’t really harsh my dude
Alright Man here it goes. You have potential but I’m not sure how you’re 1-0. Must be s fluke accident tbh. Suggestion? Make my hotline bling and I’ll do my all to help you elevate. I like you though as a person, I really do...but if wanna win battles you have to come harder
Vs
Claimin U wear snake skins & Leather..Doubt that act is glowing
No way Mon T Python...But his verses are an example of a laughable showing
the wordplay nameplay thing was a huge reach but at least I can appreciate the attempt, decent here
Cos I N/S'd? U honor role.. But now Im'a leave this FGT Scard
We look @ U as the Nerdy type, A Failure who has tha same Class in Bars
nah mate
Let me find out U got a son. That terrorist can get punched in the chin
Even he thinks ur verses have sad execution, So I'll shoot ur brains out in front of the kid
oooo I thought you were going somewhere else with this, you ended bland. I was digging the concept and that you called his kid a terrorist lmao that made me laugh up my Cheerios but ok decent
Catch this Boy N black runnin up...& I'll leave'm hurt
Punches have Ur whole style swelled in different colors..Thats a reaper verse
shit like that shit like that. This is how the rest of your lines should be lookin, good hit here I liked it lol
W/The gun I go Ape shit! 1 shot I'm done W/a dweeb
Fuck Mon Key! Just reading his bars makes me wanna swing from a branch & hang from a tree
fuck mon no! Terrible line my man this got me hella fucking mad after reading it
Bom bard is clearly the better battler here and had a more concistent verse, really only liked 1 bar tbh but bom had better concepts and delivery nonetheless.
VOTE BOMBA TARD
First verse was some lines was good
Second verse had a lot of creativity decent concepts
VOTE BOMB Yard for a better delivery
BOMB get my vote
4-0 bomb wins