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Late bloom
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And here we are...
a labyrinth of power.....
Delicate flower blooming in a nuclear shower
Turning environmentalists, faces sour
He gets quarantined and decomposes quick
His unpopular like a roses short sharp prick
Eating unwell sickeningly looks like his dead
Infected poison running through his fat head
Im a display show case i look impressive
He flickers on and of like signs that do not get the message
Religious rituals he sold his soul
To blend in with devil worshippers he drinks blood from a skull
Im a real great diet guru, im not joking
If he stopped smoking there would be way less choking
Yo man u must be the biggest newb here
Im so sorry u dropped when half ya trash came out last year
Man one punch in i havent faltered
Kids get dropped when it comes to dam he end up leaving feeling alter
This is front lines and what its become
I know i took this kid even tho this battle wasnt that dope
So im going take this battle because i clearly won
Its so trash posting here i look at rappers like they had none
Im a fresh style so dont fuck with it
Kid ran a couple football fields still aint got a rhyme that was hip
a labyrinth of power.....
Let the voting begin
im feeling Dam's bars more, both have much room to elevate though
punches/entendres/wordplay - only seen 2 attempts, both from Dam
flow - Dam, short and sweet
multies -neither
w=Dam
Krucial Thirteen
Not a good battle. Dan wrote some weird poetry and bloomer had some weak disses but I got late for actually attempting to diss his opponent
I got latebloom here for the fact he disses his opponent. Damn you need to learn how to formulate actual punchlines. Late bloom work on your wording and being more creative.
V/LB
2-1 LB
Again dams format is more audio based written i liked the rose sharp prick line and the flickers on and off bar. You would definitely win if this was an audio battle.
U could format it like this
Ur bitch is dry downstairs its been years since u fed her dick
Your sex life is not roses but u buy her those all the time so she can feel a prick
Just an example but u got to be more creative on the display of punches in text
Lb
U have actual punches but ur verse as a whole needs work at the end u kind of directed ur punches to yourself as self hype. U had attempts but with that being said if this was audio you wouldve taken the L easy.
V/LB
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Weak on both sides, but I got Dam on this one...
Dam your verse was creative but in a battle, that edgar allen poe shit doesn't really hit. I liked the display case/flickering sign couplet tho. Keep workin on your punches.
Bloom your verse was all over the place. Idk if you'd "clearly win" because it looks like you gave up halfway through. Kinda like a self-fulfilling prophecy. Only you lose. My advice would be to at least use these "throwaway" battles as practice.
1 point to Dam
battle expires
LB wins