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Bars due Wednesday 23rd April
Voting ends Saturday 26th April
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MV’s vote = 2 pts
Bag's vote = 2 pts
Each public vote = 1 pt
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@FaQEyeReddit @Jack Hallows
Yall bout to get jack popped he must be smoking crack rock..
The hollows a fiend cuz soon as I give him bucks these bitches flying straight to a crack spot..
So many bucks shot when he breaks its life change like I hit a jackpot../
Have my Mexican do a murder spin, wit the burner gripped, it’s a tourniquet, they gon squeeze off..
Yeah I’ll Have an alien beam dog, one finger getting lit for homez like ET’s arms..
If I land shots it’s a beach bar,
you dug ya own grave I’ll put bullets from a 4 in bodies that steal in you ese like you died in PR..//
We got Lord Faq vs ALL HOLLOWS till i pack this’ kid…
All who ‘oppose’ faq- im snapping quick, wit new angles bitch,
it’ll be a NEW BODY EVERY CARD like -before and after pics…
But first ima stomp him To Death “BODY BAG— SMASHED TO BITS,”
Cuz after this,
Yall gon say jack still all That and a ‘BAG OF CHIPS’..
You must’ve forgotten who the fuck I am, but I fucks wit jack, dog got energy… but this head shot gon have brain matter running down ya face so let me jog ya memory...
ill up a 45. thats a loud pound but to get rid of his body ill calm down n' grab hydrochloric acid thats a compound aint no way he bailing it out..
i gave him a shot but he never killed shit or played wit rounds.. so i got to show him how to catch a body then get rid of it so let me break it down..
FAQ - pronounced fack…
Eye or E.Y.E - divination (seek knowledge using computers)
Reddit- A web “sight” with frequent asked and answered questions.
it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
You Vs Me Prime? your death certificate’s the 1st to be signed
spent ur life round ‘music’ instruments.. so death’s surrounded by the ‘surgery’ kind
a year later i’ll kill ya family - anniversary crime…
heads, shoulders, knees, toes. cops’ll walk in ya kids room & leave w/ a whole nursery rhyme
see money’s the mark of a zealot.
nigga i’ll pull you apart for the relish..
they’ll find me selling FaQ Eyes in the dark part of Reddit
my heart is hellish.. a heavy metal Suit Coat the lead eye
all we need is a…… [BOW!!]
now watch this tourniquet get fashioned to a necktie
the vibes this lame gives? some unprofessional clown’s tame tricks
fuck puttin on face paint for paid engagements, the wand’ll make ya face paint the pavement
cops & bystanders gazin in amazement
when DA assistant pull ya hare outta the hat wonderin WHERE THE FUCK THE REST OF YA FACE WENT..
Howl at me…
M³
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a year later i’ll kill ya family - anniversary crime…
heads, shoulders, knees, toes. cops’ll walk in ya kids room & leave w/ a whole nursery rhyme
the vibes this lame gives? some unprofessional clown’s tame tricks
fuck puttin on face paint for paid engagements, the wand’ll make ya face paint the pavement
vs
Yall bout to get jack popped he must be smoking crack rock..
The hollows a fiend cuz soon as I give him bucks these bitches flying straight to a crack spot..
i feel Jack wording was more aggressive ... for a champ match could have been stronger.. maybe alot of this was over the head .. i'll give it a few days and come back a read it again..
but vote Jack for now
Buckshots crack spot— bucks=gunshot or money, fiends get money and go straight to get crack..
Bucks breaking him like making change, life change after you hit the jackpot..
Mexican do a murder spin,— an illegal immigrant is called an alien
Tourniquet— an improvised string used to cut off blood circulation to save the rest of your limb or save ya life.. but I’m also using as a gun squeezing..
one finger getting lit for homez like ET’s arms..—- ET is a old movie and in the movie when he says phone home he points and his finger glows..
If I land shots it’s a beach bar,— island shots drinks or I land them..
4 in bodies / foreign bodies, but steel in you ese — still in USA/ you ese is Spanish for you man —like you died in PR —-PR or Puerto Rico is a Spanish island so seems foreign but still considered a US territory..
oppose’ faq- a pose like a picture —--before and after pics pictures that the person body change because they work out..
BODY BAG— SMASHED TO BITS,”— literally a bag of chips— the saying all that and a bag of chips means you think you’re too good..
You must’ve forgotten—- brain matter running jog ya memory...
A loud gun (pound) acid is a compound or calm pound and is used to get rid of body’s
FAQ - pronounced fack…
Eye or E.Y.E - divination (seek knowledge using computers)
Reddit- A web “sight” with frequent asked and answered questions.
it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
FAQ - Honestly I need to hear faq say some of this word play in his accent coz to me most of it is a reach at best; 4 in body just sounds awful when I say it out loud, a pose/oppose was okay but still wasn’t quite a clean attempt to me. Island shots was dope though but overall I feel like some of the word play didn’t work to me and threw me off your verse and your punchlines weren’t as well executed as usual. I feel like you’ve come better and I don’t know if it’s just me but I’m not fucking with this too much.
Jack - Again I feel the same as I did about faqs, not fucking with this too much. I like the nursery rhyme but the set up was needlessly long, Reddit bar was meh, mad coincidence you both had tourniquet in your verses. I really liked face paint the pavement and hare outta the hat was a dope closer.
Maybe it’s just the way I’m feeling personally when voting today but both these verses just fell really flat to me with the exception of jacks closer and face paint the pavement. Those bars were enough for the W but overall his verse was just more direct and attacking
V/jack
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