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    Corrupted Visions-Crew Collab

    Posted In: Deva, SinFiC, EnVy SKiLLZ

    Dope...Glory Bound...Too Ill...Beyond Your Comprehension....You Dont See This?
    You Lack Corrupted Visions…


    Masta C:
    Corrupted Visions is making lyrical incisions to open mics…
    Cutting the competition cause no one listens to broken minds..
    We hit with vemon, produce ya crew and send’em cause we show ya right..
    Leave you corrupted cause we come like a new era armed with a glow of light..
    Skip the parts cause you cant take it and we cant stand fake shit..
    Our bands graded cause we always seem to land great hits…
    We are just unstoppable theres just no holding us back…
    We come tight all other open mic crews showing their slack..
    We have keen wits like dogs and in here we’re making mean hits…
    And we have lean spits hitting you so hard they make ya spleen rip..

    Deva:
    I seen many things… that these visions bring
    We aint in for bling… jus recognition within
    The site… respect… due for supreme dialect
    Flowing words… within any topic or concept
    From good to a bad situation… still get the effect
    Lyrics of a vet… true to the words… I left to inspect
    -On the monitor for viewing… to rep my crew in
    Sight on the site… new visions are brewing
    Through literal mania and genius… I got stewing
    Like a medium steak…Raw… without need for chewin
    Collab'n together to open, 'open'… to real viewing
    Respect to other crews… CV aint deluding its cueing
    With Real skill to evolve… put shame to other 's doin
    Word from Deva… no confusin… language abusin…???
    Not grilling for beef …but prepare to start losin!!!

    Gene Pool:
    aigh’t looky here see now, I got the job with dissin these 2 clown crews/
    claustraphobics and bonaFide be down to my groove, cuz CV be blindin u’s/
    u can’t see, hear, or speak the truth, cuz corrupted visions got u/
    boxed, like magicians just put the sword in and accidentally cut off ya nuts/
    cuz none of u boys got the balls ta even try and stand up, act tough?/
    Look don’t kid ya’selfs, cuz we be knockin ya’s off da shelf/
    slash u motha fucka’s up and use ya’s as a fur pelt, look the cards have been dealt/
    CV gonna be walkin away with tha open mic belt, so don’t even try, just let this shit be felt/

    Formula:
    My Vision just got Corrupted. . . Oh Shit Formula is reppin CV!
    See-Me Dog, Brutality leavin an MC needin a Mic Chord IV
    Dopeness personfied, prepare RB for a helluva ride
    It's Formula Bay-Bay, My Eyes is too wasted to let BS slide
    Bonafied Formula, Me in CV is like a win-win equation
    Ready to send you beggin for 'Cents' like a Hobo Wasted
    Persuasive, I make you think I'm the best, Mind Control
    Punction on beefs, ending um like periods is what these lines behold
    I'm never claustrophobic, Got Minds runnin like some Aerobics
    Ya lames are just Zirconium, The Real Diamond is always chosen
    I'm chokin another mufucka for baggin this Vision, This Percision
    Pen as my witness, Forever Corrupted within my senses

    Young P:
    You See Turmoil, We See Realism...
    So Much Talent In One Crew Is Past Idealism...
    Dis Is Real Livin, Corrupted Visions, We Too Much To Handle...
    We Came Dis Game Lit Just Like A Burning Candle...
    Kats Cant Handle, Da Way Dat We Roll...
    Knock Down Toys Like We Proffesionally Bowl...
    Heart And Soul, We Pure Skill, Nothing Less...
    RB Niggaz Stay Clean, Yall Dont Wanna Mess...
    And If Anyone Got Somethin To Say About Dis...
    We'll See Your Face To Da Curb Wit Da Kensington Kiss, Kensington Kiss!...

    2-Rich:
    We are tha crew behind all of tha "Corrupted Visions",
    Makin people second guess an rethink their decisions,
    It's all cause our open mic's are so complex they'll rip yur brains apart,
    And everything we spit comes straight from tha heart,
    Our rhymes give you a picture perfect scene of what we be thinkin,
    It's so apealing yall read it wit out fuckin blinkin,
    We tha only crew that has "Diamond Minds"
    We so hott 'Tha Productions" be tryin to bite our rhymes,
    So be ready for your "Visions" to be "Corrupted",
    Cause we got in your mind and it's now bein abducted,

    -Brixton-:
    Topical Shit,Sworn Battle Diss...No Matter What We Write Bitch Listen To This
    Corrupted Visionz.. New Crew Forum? Elevate So Fast That If You Blink Ya Sure To Miss
    Its Like We Dont Have To Callout...We Get Crews Wanting To Break Our Walls
    Warlords,Productions?...These Chumps Dont Seem Fit For Elite Crew Calls
    Its Not A Fiction Or Attack Just A Matter Of A Fact,Compared To Us Ya Sure To Lack
    So For All Established Crews... Watch Ya Back,Insert The Clip,Like Being Gunned By A Mac
    As The Light Turns Black...I Get An Eerie Sense That The Regimes Status Begins Crumblin
    This Bitch's Need Humbling..Voted Best Crew On RB..But I Feel There Power Tumbling
    But Directed At Other Crews..Read The Collab...Then Grab Ya Jacket N Shoes
    Impailed For Writers Block..Ya Need A Muse,Coz Ima Futurist.. Damn Ya Sure To Lose

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    currupt'd visions,attacks ya brains and currupts ya decisions/
    all the memberz great, like a family juss takin all the greatest open mic traits/
    i get back into the game,pick me off my feet,point'n me in the direction 2 aim/
    i give thanx 2 the crew,impress'd by few,but u need a family,well they need u/
    take in the ill, and give them more 2 stive 4,strikin the kill/
    i rep them wit a smile,help'd me improve a style,now i rackm up into a endless pile/
    i've been here no more then a few weeks,if u want ill C.V is wat u seek/
    sub crew 2 some,but mos a new beginning,only the ill can see,and will come/\
    i had my doubts,but they got everything a wannabe crew,will ever dream about/
    C.V, see me ill always rep them happily, as a true ill'd family/

    Black Lungs:
    Yo step away from the mic and let me get some room.....
    Lungs coming threw expanding ya head while i'm Exploding these Venomous fumes~/~
    Visions in here now....we smack lil crews for no reason
    leavin ya forum bleedin and seepin ITS hackin time and ya HEADS posted on all SEASONs~/~
    you merkin us IS just MERE DREAMIN we estimate a win when
    you kids screamin for me to Release the pressure and plots schemin~/~
    Corrupted Visions spittin hits from orphasis we Vent MUrders and HIde em
    Fuck what you think we are Ya thoughts inferior {back up)before Lungs and INC
    have to confine em~/~
    My crew splits ya thoughts to severe pictures ya lost with splittin IMAGES....
    finishin ya sentance causes EFFECTS and laserations to apendages~/~
    We dig'n ya grave and encase ya with white linnin ya under arrest kid....
    so whats left... we one part HUMAN....2 parts IMMORTAL last part we RARE SPECIMANS~/~

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    about god damn time...

    masta...
    good job here, nothing great but nothing bad

    Deva...
    Wow, i was impressed by this.. your flow was very good as well as the vocab

    gene...
    that structure has got to be cut down... shorten lines!!

    formula...
    nice way to say "im better than you"...just dont be amazed if you get crew beef

    P...
    your better off than gene, but the structure needed help here..

    2rich...
    i like it... you guys are coming out and not taking shit from no one

    Brix...
    Dog you have experience...why are you running stretched bars... good call out of all the big OM crews... except

    As The Light Turns Black...I Get An Eerie Sense That The Regimes Status Begins Crumblin
    This Bitch's Need Humbling..Voted Best Crew On RB..But I Feel There Power Tumbling
    Umm...

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    the structure again... this is the comman problem i see here guys... flow was good but dont puch the lines so much

    Black...
    Now i know who you are, so this should be good...i was kind of let down, i know you can come better than that...closer was good

    Overall...
    Deva you need to get on these kids and teach them bar structure and line lenght... it was good, just make sure you guys stay on top of all your crew drops...

    Best of luck with crew battles if you get any...

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    holy shit, i'll be honest i didn't even come close to reading this whole thing... it was way too long... but from what i did read most have a nice style, i liked the first guy the most, seemed like he has the same kinda flow as benefit... but anyway.. this was pretty good from what i read ... 1
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    Yeah it is long but if you check this out leave us some feedback on this, its much appreciated, thanks.

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    This was a dope piece of collab.. Read every bit.. Keep droppin Holla Peace
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    good job..guyz...

    uppin 4 some feedback....

    thanx and much appreciated 4 the ppl that took the time 2 read it so far..

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    2 RICH if you really want beef with diamond minds then get our fucking name right, its B-O-N-A-F-I-D-E its been changed for ages now,, so yeah nice pre-write, the only people who dropped good here were MASTA C, DEVA, and YOUNG P, DEVA being the best,..... DEVA you need to tryout for sacred scriptures.... i feel you'll get in

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    hahahaha^^^^^^^^^^yo thanks fo tha feedback...uppn

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