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Thread: so whats your birth weight? soft focus (calisto~deacon~emotion) dont sleep on this

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    so whats your birth weight? soft focus (calisto~deacon~emotion) dont sleep on this

    Calisto: Mother

    Masquerading day to day, deciding whether to cry or celebrate
    This breathless wonder within me beats, but congers up such hate
    My decision with other’s thoughts, life or death I daringly designate

    Cutting circulation, a life on these strings, I reluctantly breathe
    Consequences weren’t present within the act of being conceived
    But he didn’t ask for this, it was my fault for naively believing

    Yet wondering what soul could place blame for such elation
    Who could bask in the misery of untimeliness, during celebration?
    Wondering how God could bestow a blessing as such devastation?

    I’m panicking during the day and wide awake in the evening
    Contemplating the realness of this life, if it’s not breathing
    But inevitably this precious being from my body is leaving

    Deacon: ~Baby~

    Caught in-between a decision…
    Locked your insides to a weaker minds incision...
    A needle with perfect placement implements my stamina
    You rectified the problem by killing, did you think you’d reach an answering
    Hate flares to an unlucky medium, pick my casket some toilet paper and a soap bar.
    Clean yourself cause im dirt...the little in me is hardly worth…
    Time to spend happily, encountered through a lovely 20 minutes of ecstasy,
    Romantically, You divorced me and cursed me to a death,
    I lived inside a wall I didn’t even get to believe I could breathe yet,
    I fall, a short distance into acceptance,
    Receptive listening you’ll hear me make a splash, im finished
    My only touch, confused because pc bullshit…
    Retire me from pride to boast a worthless wishlist…
    How can you do that when theres nobody witnessing.
    Except the man with the green white shirt, “oh him well he’s just visiting”
    Worthless tempered fool makes more money than my body was worth,
    He scraps me from her insides and claims he loves child's birth…

    I hate you, I hate you, reject a single me,
    I wish i had a single sight a place where i should be
    I hate you, I hate you, infect me with this disease
    You wish you had a second chance i just wish that i could breathe

    I breathe a breath,
    i breathe

    Im a seed that lacked its soil, i just wanted to be normal,
    God saw a different side of me, saw a light you couldn't see

    Emotion: a person who is pro choice



    It's her body her choice,
    It's Her decision her voice,
    A man cant understand this,
    How a women cant handle this,
    Why should a child grow up unloved,
    When it's unwanted, but can be
    cherished from above, The love
    is a nonetity, The baby was never
    meant for an identity, It's a contempt
    decision, But are you sure you've
    done revision?, Because a babeys
    just not a financial obligation, Its
    not an assination, God seeks no
    retribution,Abortion? Male Pig it's
    her decision,She wants to make
    a mistake? It's her infliction,


    Dont worry about conscience cause' it will slowly fade,
    It wasnt youre fault, dont let any one ever call you a
    slut cause you got laid,
    softfocus



    while you write to rapbattles I perform on stage

    How's it feel to lack in comparison?............

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    booo upiy up

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    How's it feel to lack in comparison?............

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    dog i hit up ure shit on poetic scriptures would u mind hittin mine up? if u can get ure crew to hit it up that would be nice as well then ill come back and return the favor thanks peace

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    uppin this ....
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    nice shit dogg

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    what was that...b good for proper reply
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    wtf??? wheres the replys
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    This was a good collab.. Whetehr it was intentional, there was some good alliteration in parts.. The last verse I think was the only one to use mutlis..

    A man cant understand this,
    How a women cant handle this,

    All the people on this collab dropped very nicely.. There wasn't no quotables.. But it did make a good read
    Pot` Ed.

    I dropped to show RM what hot was;
    And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra

    Your text is just another weak display
    One fist to your eye'll make it go through that black album remix phase. - Saviour Arraign

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    thanks^^^
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    reply to three other open mics and post links to your replies in this thread, or it gets deleted. you guys already know this shit.
    thanks.
    wordperfect?
    ..o0Pure0o..

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    This is one of the dopest collab I've read on here....Calisto cameout wit a dope opener "Masquerading day to day, deciding whether to cry or celebrate" , Hot Line dawg....And his structure , rhyme scheme and content were all nice , he stayed on topic and never fell off....Deacon was also dope , again he cameout wit a hot opener and stayed on that level throughout his verse....Some of his line swere kinda stretched though....But I Liked your style , multis and rhyme scheme...U also had a goodamount of vocab usage....And Emotion's content and structure were dope...His verse was on topic , and his wordplay was sick.....Overall i give this collab a 10/10
    Last edited by ....BaSh....; December 7th, 2003 at 10:37 PM

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    cheers for the reply^^^
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