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Thread: Ya gotta read it ta believe it was written...

  1. December 7th, 2003, 01:09 PM #1
    Born To Kill
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    Ya gotta read it ta believe it was written...

    Kids know me as Elmo, Kevin Clash is my other name...
    The game on tha street called Sesame, is tha turf that I claim.
    I might be little and red, but yo, I pack a punch...
    So step to me a pussy, and bitch, I'll eat ya lunch.
    I'm much more than a muppet, with a hand shoved up my ass...
    I be makin moms fight in malls, while I cold kick back and laugh.
    Cuz my shit ya have ta have, made millions when ya Tickled Me...
    Got them currently doin tha Hokey Pokey, cuz I got endless greed.
    Ta feed off ya bank, make it mine, so I can slap ho's slick...
    Cuz I'm a true pimp and if you don't like it, you can suck my furry dick.


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  2. December 7th, 2003, 01:14 PM #2
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    i liked it, took me a while to get the flow but came off good, nice wordplay, and average vocab, a few goo multi's but funny rhyme.
    like that sesam street line, thought that was good.
    overall good short rhyme.


    hit my rhyme
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=96675

    cheers
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  3. December 7th, 2003, 01:47 PM #3
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    i wouldn't care if this had no flow at all
    this was a hilarious piece, i sent it to alot of my friends
    very good job, fucken creative as hell
    9/10
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  4. December 7th, 2003, 01:50 PM #4
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    not too bad, Kevin Clash is his name too

    original, never expected that.

    keep surprisin us

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  5. December 8th, 2003, 08:59 AM #5
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    Uppin for more peeps...

    Seriously, check this out...

    You'll be rolling!
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  6. December 8th, 2003, 09:06 AM #6
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    very tite. it shows just how fun rap can be. it shows that
    not everything has to be serious and emotional. sometimes
    ya just have to sit down, laugh, and rap. good times. i liked this
    one especially. very original and nicely stated. nice piece man.
    glad to see you still have it. keep it up.
    peace
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  7. December 8th, 2003, 09:10 AM #7
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    that some funny shit check ma shit out http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97225
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  8. December 8th, 2003, 02:39 PM #8
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    Thanks for the feedback given...

    This was pretty fun to do.

    Plus, I gotta lotta aggresion against that little bastard...

    My baby girl always has him on the VCR...

    Endless.
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  9. December 9th, 2003, 09:56 AM #9
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    Drop me feedback, please.
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  10. December 9th, 2003, 10:44 AM #10
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    lmao..funny as fuck.....'really' got me laughing....jus a good length for that sorta thing..pZ....
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  11. December 9th, 2003, 11:46 AM #11
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    Seemed pretty pointless to me ..
    wish i hadnt wasted the time
    reading to be honest. Basic rhymes,
    nothing really eye opening .. flow &
    multi's need work .. if your gonna
    write anything at all, at least make
    it something worth actually reading.

    I hate pieces like this that just waste my time.

    Sorry.

    Reply to my RSTL piece = )

    WORD P e r f e c t !

    RESERVOIR GODS


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  12. December 9th, 2003, 11:50 AM #12
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    ^lol

    This was short..without good vocab , ..flow was there ..concept was funny, ..like to read more deeper pieces tho

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  13. December 9th, 2003, 11:52 AM #13
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    You two ever heard of a sense of humor?

    You might try investing in one...

    It'd probably get ya laid more often.
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  14. December 9th, 2003, 11:53 AM #14
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    ^^^ dats grimmey he wus jus havin fun wit it, it was ur choice to read it!!.......(Dick)....but ne way it wasnt dat funny but i like to c u switched shyt up n did a diff piece from others cuz i dont think i seen ne 1 do sumtin like dat!!.....nice work n dont listen to da "dicc" above me!!.....<<< do sumtin about it!!

    0n3
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  15. December 9th, 2003, 11:59 AM #15
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    Originally posted by Born To Kill
    You two ever heard of a sense of humor?

    You might try investing in one...

    It'd probably get ya laid more often.
    lol

    U couldnt even count..

    Atleast i dont need a permit for my fuck = )

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