J*Miles VS Oc Lotto

[J*Miles]

10 lines
no crew
u drop first

[Oc Lotto]

this nigga garbage time to do my job/
j*miles the "j" probly means you jog/
clown back to the circus wit the rest of the fam/
i aint even tryin you aint get the best of me man/
got that recipe stirred up you fiending to taste/
you only tastin lead wit red beams on you plate/
get a degree before you try approachin the bench/
you battle me thats like tryin to breathe wit rope on your neck/
imma finish this off wit a smirk on my lips/
only because your girl know how she be workin her hips/

[J*Miles]

i'll drop lata cause i got shit to do but i'll drop by today
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[Oc Lotto]

ai holla at me lata.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................

[J*Miles]

Nigga tryna get big.. gonna get snatched up quicker than saddam//
As small as lotto is u no he cant survive wit my type of lyrical bomb//
My punches are devastating leavin this bitch malfunctioning//
……this cat lotto…couldn’t elevate if he had a pair of wings//
U should change ya name to mc loco cause battlin me u crazy//
Fuckin wit me ur eye will end up like B.I.G’s crooked and lazy//
This is a no win situation theres no chance that ur gonna proceed//
My gat will make u bleed, put a patch on ur head bigger than rasheed’s//
In this game I’m in it to kill u can go hide and my bullets will seek//
Sorry to do this kid but ur tha second emcee to be assassinated in a week//

[BIZ.VICIOUS]

:The BreakDown:

opener= None (yaaawwwn)
closer=J*Miles (cuz I was the first lol) his closer was ill peeps, don't sleep
flow=J*Miles (way better)
personals=J*Miles (if any)
punches=J*Miles (on point, but soft)
structure=NONE (try using these , . ? ! ") there easy to use, and make your verse easy to read and flow the way it's supposed to!

Vote = J*Miles

[alias]

opener: tie
closer: miles
punches: miles
structure:tie
vocab: tie
wordplay: miles
overall: miles

aiight, nice battle but miles came a lot harder that OC lotto.
peace


PLZ WILL YOU DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, SEEMING AS I HAVE TAKEN MY TIME TO VOTE ON YOU BATTLE, THANKS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...069#post996069

[J*Miles]

Uppin 4 votes
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[Silverwolf]

closer: J
opener: uh boring
punches: J
structure:J
wordplay: J

overall- J

ok battle, J's closer was ill
vote on this shit help get it closed

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99100

[Handcuffs]

gonna get snatched up quicker than saddam//

i thought that was Santa Claus, lol

anyway....

closer-j miles
opener-j miles
punches-j miles
structure-j miles
wordplay-j miles
flow-tie
entertainment-j miles(easily)
vote-j miles

[baby boi 11]

J Miles just got the best of Oc Lotto with his wordplay, and everything although Miles could've did better.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99472

poll vote on mine

[J*Miles]

i will when i hit 100posts.......................................... .

Uppin 4 votes............................................. ...............

[Meters]

opener: miles
closer: miles
punches: miles
structure:miles
wordplay: miles
overall: miles

Yeah, a bit lopsided. Ah, Lotto, remember to punch in battles. But you both have potential, elevate and good luck.