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check check ... lol i already made the battle my bad.. lets do this ..Originally Posted by Oakley
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Sidious'll slaughter this [cattle thatt'll] have you..feel'in sorry u gotta [battle this]
Your a Vet?...Dawg don't [flatter your spits],
I'll find you "backin ya ass up" like the [avatar of Catalist] http://img43.photobucket.com/albums/...nodia/6043.gif hahaha...
You got a *Big-Head* means ill serve it on a [fatter platter to End The Matter SHITT]
Actin like ya got a title mann..*your lookin a lil light on the waist*---
Ya'll get trains ran on ya ass... thas why u actin like the [Freight* of this Place]
u aint gangsta kidd...closest you get to *throwin signs* [is a protest you pest]
Im real kid i ACTUALLY DO ALL THE SHIT U WRITE IN YOUR TEXT-
I battle everyday so destroying emcees is [Nothin new 2 Me]-
So if you wanna spit back you gonna be [*ass out like Nudity*]- lol
***************FINISH HIM**********************************
The *sun shines on me, so i *wear you down* [LIKE YOUR NAME]- (oakley)
~One in O Ez~ cuz like *Joe Buddens-- [*you aint got GAME] (buddens v. game of g-unit )
http://img43.photobucket.com/albums/...ia/sidious.gif
!!!BITCH!!!
Face it kid....ya mind? it just aint stable...
You can't even rap untill you clear the table
It's strait amusing...claimin what your gun's will do ta me...
but dawg...you cant pull a 9 untill u hit your puberty...
Even Osirus says your gay...Sid...you can't deny the facts...
Face it....The only thing str8 on you is that negroe hat...
Take it off...your white, and son...your like fourteen....
Forget the Drug addict...Work on winning a battle.."in your dreams"
Worried bout the green...in ya sig...like ya worth a hundred twenty
The fact that your names intact...bring's the Face value to a penny
im pretty sure.. you knew the rule of no feeding... and thats all u did.. but im not worried in the least.. votes.. first to 5.
where exactly did i feed?...
not sure?.......why not explain?.....lol
O yeh....and if i did? which I didn't...cus I didnt mention your verse....
it cancells out the pre-write that you have had saved for a day....
lol.....so remain...."not worried in the least".....pc-1
alrite
sidious u need to drop that whole set up, i didn't understand it very well.. i read ur verse a few times, and thought it wasnt bad at all. you had some nice punches, personals, but i thought your wordplay was abit wack.
oakly, you hit this kid very well with some nice lines, like the 3rd and the forth, bout puberty n shit. pretty much every line you had was a punch, and i enjoyed reading urs alot more than sidious. you just had something i liked, good flow, and get rhymes
my vote: oakly
" So, how was it ?!"
"..... You rhymed rhyme, with rhyme."
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R.I.P Lamont Coleman A.K.A Big L
oh yeah forgot, karma yall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125885
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"..... You rhymed rhyme, with rhyme."
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this disgusts me....this being the oaklley that had the audacity to challenge me to a battle..?and sidious talked all that stuff but his structure was horrible....it was the most disgusting verse i've ever witnessed in my life...the context wasnt that bad..juist the screwed up format..what the hell is up with all the dots and parentheses and etc?... all that crap clogs the screen...i couldnt even read the lines staight..Oakley wins this only by his structure....his verse is garbage...and if sidious knew how to format he woulda prbably won...anyway....regretfully
v/oakley
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
both was coo.....i wanted to follow this battle cince the shit talkn came about...
Oakley:
ure verse was coo, kinda plain on sum lines, but it seemd to flow arite...ure punches were arite..not too great u kno? but i liked the line
"Take it off...your white, and son...your like fourteen....
Forget the Drug addict...Work on winning a battle.."in your dreams".."
that was coo
Sid:
ure set up is crazy but its coo, it kinda makes it easier to understand, but it seemd to flow well and punches were coo....wordplay was deesent...lyrics were coo, hittn on his name was good...
i liked the line:
"I battle everyday so destroying emcees is [Nothin new 2 Me]-
So if you wanna spit back you gonna be [*ass out like Nudity*]-"
i chose Sid overall because his punches were harder and he seemd to rip more on Oak
VOTE=Sidious
CiiiiiiiiiiN
thanks for votes....
cinladen...dazasta....liles.....
uppin
links will be hit up...as always....pc-1
sorry sidious, your structure is the epitome of horrible. oakley had a consistent flow, but wasnt that great neither. no punchlines worthy of quoting...
return the favor and vote on the battles in my signiture
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you Sidious you had some good lines....But the worse thing is the structure..to complexy......Very understandable becuz too many of these in you verses =[ ]= that makes thing very complicated....Also you lines was a little better but work on those and you will be good aight son....
Oakly-Of couse you had some alright verses...Not that good as Sidious....But even though you had some good strutcutre,not that much complexy, and very understable you get my vote....I was feelin some of your things....But if he had all that stuff I said He would have beat you.....
v/oakly
B4 I vote vote in this battle and I will come back and hit you up.....you have my word on it aight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125842
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